| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "sanctuary" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "steeled" | | 13 | "sinister" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "glistening" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "streaming" | | 18 | "electric" | | 19 | "oppressive" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 76.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1245 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1214 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Heartstone | 8 | | Pendant | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 4 | | Rory | 11 | | Fae | 1 | | Night | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Night" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed sharper more alive" | | 1 | "silence that seemed to stretch into eternity" | | 2 | "it was as if nothing had ever moved at all" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1245 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 26.60% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 65.53 | | std | 15.93 | | cv | 0.243 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 87 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 87 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 84 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 80 | | 9 | 73 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 77 | | 18 | 72 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "was intruding" | | 1 | "was exhaling" | | 2 | "was leaving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment she crossed the ancient oak standing stones that marked its boundary, a sensation washed over her like a cool breath — everything seemed sharper, more alive." | | 1 | "But then she heard it — a low hum, almost imperceptible, but constant." | | 2 | "The low hum grew louder, muxculating with new sounds — distant laughter, perhaps a child's, or the soft rustle of fabric." | | 3 | "Then everything went silent — the hum, the chuckles, even her own breath." | | 4 | "She pressed her scarred wrist against the ground to steady herself, but the texture felt wrong—smooth and warm, like flesh." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1216 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03536184210526316 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01069078947368421 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 14.31 | | std | 6.19 | | cv | 0.433 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 51.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3793103448275862 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then to her left, a" | | 1 | "Then everything went silent —" | | 2 | "Then a force like a" | | 3 | "Suddenly, it was over." |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back just to" | | 1 | "She was alone now, deep" | | 2 | "Her breath came quick and" | | 3 | "She leaned against the gnarled" | | 4 | "It vibrated through the roots" | | 5 | "She checked the Heartstone, which" | | 6 | "She let it dangle in" | | 7 | "she whispered to herself, her" | | 8 | "She reminded herself that Yu-Fei" | | 9 | "It resided between worlds, bending" | | 10 | "She swung the flashlight around," | | 11 | "She knew she had to" | | 12 | "She replayed the steps in" | | 13 | "She could swear she saw" | | 14 | "Her pulse quickened, her breath" | | 15 | "You’re not losing it, she" | | 16 | "They’re just trying to scare" | | 17 | "She turned, but there was" | | 18 | "She steeled herself and trudged" | | 19 | "She stepped into the circle," |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 77.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed aside the thick" | | 1 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 2 | "She glanced back just to" | | 3 | "She was alone now, deep" | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 5 | "Eva had said to trust" | | 6 | "The air was dense, saturated" | | 7 | "Leaves rustled where there was" | | 8 | "Rory couldn't shake the feeling" | | 9 | "Her breath came quick and" | | 10 | "Minutes passed, or perhaps hours." | | 11 | "Time played tricks in the" | | 12 | "She leaned against the gnarled" | | 13 | "It vibrated through the roots" | | 14 | "She checked the Heartstone, which" | | 15 | "She let it dangle in" | | 16 | "she whispered to herself, her" | | 17 | "She reminded herself that Yu-Fei" | | 18 | "It resided between worlds, bending" | | 19 | "A twig snapped somewhere to" |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "If the stories Yu-Fei told" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 91.10% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "In one hand, she clutched the Heartstone Pendant, a deep crimson relic on a silver chain that gleamed faintly even in the half-light." | | 1 | "The hum now carried a rhythm, almost musical, and she realized it emanated from beneath, as if the ground itself was alive, stirring." | | 2 | "She recited the final lines, her voice breaking and tears streaming down her face." | | 3 | "Rory felt an almost electric charge in the air, the sensation of a vast energy funneling through her, as if the Grove itself was exhaling." | | 4 | "The oppressive weight lifted, and the Grove fell into a stillness so profound it was as if nothing had ever moved at all." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her breath puffing out in small clouds" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |