Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPG0T7438K6TWTKSDPADJ8

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Duration:
35.9s
Cost:
$0.001175

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stepped into the grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming like sentinels in the dim light of the crescent moon. She had heard whispers of this place, a hidden haven where time dripped like honey, but tonight it felt different. The air chilled around her, wrapping her in a gauzy layer of unease. She hugged her jacket tightly, the fabric soft against her skin as she moved deeper into The Fae Grove, each cautious footstep muffled by the thick carpet of fallen leaves. The grove was alive in a way that cities never were—chittering insects and rustling leaves danced in an unseen rhythm; the wildflowers glowed faintly under the moonlight, their colors vibrant against the murky backdrop of twisted trees. Yet, the beauty held a sinister edge, like a sharp knife hidden in a velvet sheath. The quiet pulse of energy that surrounded her felt unnaturally intense, beating against the back of her mind like a warning bell. Rory’s Heartstone Pendant swung from her neck, its deep crimson surface seeming to throb in time with her heartbeat. She had come here seeking answers—answers about the dreams that had plagued her since the moment she left Evan behind. Each night, those dreams beckoned her, filled with shadows whispering secrets she couldn’t quite grasp. Tonight, she had finally gathered the nerve to chase them into the heart of this grove. As she ventured further, the sounds softened; the chirping of crickets faded into an eerie silence. A shiver traced along her spine. Something moved at the peripheral of her vision, a blur darting among the trees. She turned quickly, eyes wide, but only shadows greeted her. Just branches swaying against the night sky. Perhaps she was tired. After all, she had worked a long shift at Golden Empress before making the trek out here. "Just the wind," she muttered to herself, trying to shake the feeling that someone—or something—was watching. Rory took a steadying breath, the air crisp with the smell of damp earth and decaying leaves. She glanced around the grove, its enchanting beauty somehow twisting into something darker in this moment. The stones that marked the boundary of the grove loomed with a silent authority, while the flowers tilted as if they listened. In this strange, isolated place, she felt the weight of a thousand gazes pressing upon her. Each moment stretched, twisted, and wrinkled like an old photograph curling at the edges. The moonlight filtered through the leaves above, casting intricate patterns on the ground. Rory knelt by a patch of wildflowers that glimmered just slightly more than the others, their luminescent petals standing in stark contrast to the shadowy underbrush. A chill prickled on her arms as her fingers brushed against one delicate bloom; it felt unsettlingly warm, and she yanked her hand back, heart racing. That warmth was nothing compared to the disquiet that began to settle. She was unmoored from her own reality and tethered to this peculiar realm. Time carried a different weight here, and with every passing second, the atmosphere thickened like smoke curling through an already crowded room. Sensing movement again, she spun, full of adrenaline and dread. This time, she saw it—a figure gliding between the trees, just out of reach, a silhouette barely discernible against the thick darkness. No more than a flicker—an illusion?—but it was there. It had to be. “Hello?” she called out, the tremor in her voice betraying her. Had she just invited trouble into her fragile sanctuary? Silence answered her, deeper and more profound than it had been moments before. Her spine straightened, the urge to flee battling with the instinct to stay. She held her breath, listening intently. A rustle, a whisper—like wind brushing against the leaves, but it wasn’t the wind. It was too deliberate. Too… purposeful. She stepped backward, seeking the warmth of her Heartstone, its faint glow requesting her confidence, her bravery. But as the stone pulsed against her neck, she felt a simultaneous dread that surged through her: if something was lurking in the shadows, it was already too late. Tension knotted her stomach as she spun, desperate to catch whatever was creeping behind her. The trees stood silent, wide and watchful. Silence. No signs of life, no more shapes dancing in the corners of her vision. Rory clenched the pendant tightly, its metal cold against her palm. “I’m here for a reason,” she murmured, more to fortify her fading courage than to communicate with the void. The voice inside urged her to leave, but something nagged at her—those dreams, that longing for truth. The air grew heavy, thickening with an unspoken tension, as if the very space around her was aware of her presence, molding and shifting with her every heartbeat. Stray wind forced a shiver through the flowers, releasing an aroma rich and heady, but it was fleeting and quickly overwhelmed by something else—something rotten. A low, sibilant sound pierced the unnatural stillness, drawing a bead of sweat down her temple. Was it words? A whisper? The hair along Rory’s arms rose, and she glanced wildly toward the source. There, slipping between the trees, flickering into view was a grinning face, pale as moonlight, marred by shadow. She sucked in a breath, retreating back against the oaken stones, her heart thundered in her chest. Stars painted the night sky but felt light-years away—in this grove, reality wobbled. As the figure stepped closer, its features morphed. Was it a child? Or an adult? With eyes like pits of darkness, too large for its face, locking onto her with a feral hunger. “Stay,” it breathed, the word sliding from a twisted mouth that curled up at the edges. Her feet remained rooted to the ground, fighting the primal urge to flee. “What do you want?” The strength of her voice was a mask for her panic, her eyes flickering to the pendant—its warmth surged, compounding with confusion. “Come play,” it called, the sounds melting into soft laughter, chilling and playful—like the taunting of a nightmare not yet fully realized. The warmth of the pendant felt foreign now, inciting instead an instinct to flee. Rory’s courage ebbed as her heart raced. She turned and ran, but the grove shifted around her, trees twisting like fingers intent on keeping her close. The laughter faded into a mocking echo, haunting her, the figures glued to the periphery of her vision. She stumbled to the boundary, breath quickening as she reached for the stones, the heartbeat of the grove resonating in her chest. The way back to her world felt irretrievably far beyond the threshold. The air thickened again, enveloping her in darkness that nipped and tugged at the edges of her sanity. The moon hung high, impossible to ignore, as clouds twisted angrily across the sky, obscuring its comforting light. Rory pressed forward, her body thrumming with desperation, each footfall a fight against the relentless pull of the grove. The figure re-emerged, dancing just behind the trees, its laughter filling the space, making it feel as though the sound had grown teeth. “You must play,” it chanted, unending, a mantra curling around her limbs. A frenzied pulse erupted from the Heartstone, brighter now, begging her to focus, to break the spell. She pushed through tendrils of shadows clawing at her ankles, breaking their grasp with every ounce of will. It urged her—teased her—not to turn back, but she had to. It was a race against time, and Rory would not be the pawn. The boundary stones gleamed in the moonlight ahead, mere steps where reality began, and her hand shot out, nearly grasping cool stone before a whisper curled around her neck anew, “Stay.” With a final surge of adrenaline, she slammed against the stones, a barrier solid and true, and pushed through to the void waiting. As she entered her world, suffocated but free, she staggered into the night of Richmond Park, panting as the trees loomed behind her. The Heartstone Pendant lay cool against her chest, whispering secrets of another realm, a chilling reminder that the darkness had been gathering, waiting just beyond the boundary, where the Fae Grove thrummed with ancient, restless energy.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she murmured, more to fortify her fading courage than to communicate with the void [more]"
1"it called, the sounds melting into soft laughter, chilling and playful—like the taunting of a nightmare not yet fully realized [fully]"
2"The boundary stones gleamed in the moonlight ahead, mere steps where reality began, and her hand shot out, nearly grasping cool stone before a whisper curled around her neck anew, [nearly around]"
56.3953% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
2"tightly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"sinister"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count2
6
word"looming"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"dancing"
count2
14
word"footfall"
count1
15
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"sentinels"
2"throb"
3"flicker"
4"sinister"
5"loomed"
6"looming"
7"velvet"
8"unspoken"
9"intricate"
10"profound"
11"stark"
12"weight"
13"dancing"
14"footfall"
15"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
72.0849% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean48.68
std19.58
cv0.402
sampleLengths
085
175
270
374
416
585
665
747
845
933
1039
1146
1237
1347
1453
1552
1663
1716
1839
1922
2058
2152
2260
2312
2446
2544
2623
2759
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was unmoored"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs223
matches
0"were—chittering"
1"was watching"
2"was lurking"
3"was creeping"
4"was fleeting"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1356
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay cool against her"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03982300884955752
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.012536873156342183
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean15.49
std7.63
cv0.492
sampleLengths
022
120
213
330
437
516
622
719
820
915
1016
1116
126
1314
1410
157
164
1717
1816
1917
2016
2122
2216
2314
2413
2526
2626
2712
2813
2922
3010
3122
329
334
3411
359
3613
3713
386
3914
404
411
421
4317
4429
4515
467
471
4814
4911
69.3182% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4431818181818182
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners39
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered to herself, trying to shake the feeling that someone—or something—was watching (mutter try shake watch)"
1"she murmured, more to fortify her fading courage than to communicate with the void (murmur, fortify communicate)"
2"it breathed, the word sliding from a twisted mouth that curled up at the edges (breathe, slide curl)"
3"it called, the sounds melting into soft laughter, chilling and playful—like the taunting of a nightmare not yet fully realized (call, sound chill fully realize)"
4"it chanted, unending, a mantra curling around her limbs (chant, unend)"
5"The boundary stones gleamed in the moonlight ahead, mere steps where reality began, and her hand shot out, nearly grasping cool stone before a whisper curled around her neck anew, (gleam begin, shoot out, nearly grasp curl around)"
75.9881%