"she murmured, more to fortify her fading courage than to communicate with the void [more]"
1
"it called, the sounds melting into soft laughter, chilling and playful—like the taunting of a nightmare not yet fully realized [fully]"
2
"The boundary stones gleamed in the moonlight ahead, mere steps where reality began, and her hand shot out, nearly grasping cool stone before a whisper curled around her neck anew, [nearly around]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1356
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"lay cool against her"
adverbCount
54
adverbRatio
0.03982300884955752
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.012536873156342183
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
88
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
88
mean
15.49
std
7.63
cv
0.492
sampleLengths
0
22
1
20
2
13
3
30
4
37
5
16
6
22
7
19
8
20
9
15
10
16
11
16
12
6
13
14
14
10
15
7
16
4
17
17
18
16
19
17
20
16
21
22
22
16
23
14
24
13
25
26
26
26
27
12
28
13
29
22
30
10
31
22
32
9
33
4
34
11
35
9
36
13
37
13
38
6
39
14
40
4
41
1
42
1
43
17
44
29
45
15
46
7
47
1
48
14
49
11
69.3182%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.4431818181818182
totalSentences
88
uniqueOpeners
39
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she muttered to herself, trying to shake the feeling that someone—or something—was watching (mutter try shake watch)"
1
"she murmured, more to fortify her fading courage than to communicate with the void (murmur, fortify communicate)"
2
"it breathed, the word sliding from a twisted mouth that curled up at the edges (breathe, slide curl)"
3
"it called, the sounds melting into soft laughter, chilling and playful—like the taunting of a nightmare not yet fully realized (call, sound chill fully realize)"
4
"it chanted, unending, a mantra curling around her limbs (chant, unend)"
5
"The boundary stones gleamed in the moonlight ahead, mere steps where reality began, and her hand shot out, nearly grasping cool stone before a whisper curled around her neck anew, (gleam begin, shoot out, nearly grasp curl around)"