| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "angrily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsms | 48 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | | | 34 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "chilled" | | 3 | "sinister" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "intricate" | | 12 | "stark" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "sanctuary" | | 18 | "profound" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "pulsed" | | 21 | "tension" | | 22 | "stomach" | | 23 | "dancing" | | 24 | "unspoken" | | 25 | "fleeting" | | 26 | "thundered" | | 27 | "chilling" | | 28 | "raced" | | 29 | "echo" | | 30 | "comforting" | | 31 | "footfall" | | 32 | "race" | | 33 | "pawn" | | 34 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1363 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1343 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Had | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Had" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Richmond" | | 5 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.734 | | wordCount | 1363 | | matches | | 0 | "not to turn back, but she had to" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.08% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 48.68 | | std | 19.58 | | cv | 0.402 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 85 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 50.52% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | | 0 | "were—chittering" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was lurking" | | 3 | "was creeping" | | 4 | "was fleeting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.159 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove was alive in a way that cities never were—chittering insects and rustling leaves danced in an unseen rhythm; the wildflowers glowed faintly under the moonlight, their colors vibrant against the murky backdrop of twisted trees." | | 1 | "She had come here seeking answers—answers about the dreams that had plagued her since the moment she left Evan behind." | | 2 | "As she ventured further, the sounds softened; the chirping of crickets faded into an eerie silence." | | 3 | "\"Just the wind,\" she muttered to herself, trying to shake the feeling that someone—or something—was watching." | | 4 | "A chill prickled on her arms as her fingers brushed against one delicate bloom; it felt unsettlingly warm, and she yanked her hand back, heart racing." | | 5 | "This time, she saw it—a figure gliding between the trees, just out of reach, a silhouette barely discernible against the thick darkness." | | 6 | "No more than a flicker—an illusion?—but it was there." | | 7 | "A rustle, a whisper—like wind brushing against the leaves, but it wasn’t the wind." | | 8 | "The voice inside urged her to leave, but something nagged at her—those dreams, that longing for truth." | | 9 | "Stray wind forced a shiver through the flowers, releasing an aroma rich and heady, but it was fleeting and quickly overwhelmed by something else—something rotten." | | 10 | "Stars painted the night sky but felt light-years away—in this grove, reality wobbled." | | 11 | "“What do you want?” The strength of her voice was a mask for her panic, her eyes flickering to the pendant—its warmth surged, compounding with confusion." | | 12 | "“Come play,” it called, the sounds melting into soft laughter, chilling and playful—like the taunting of a nightmare not yet fully realized." | | 13 | "It urged her—teased her—not to turn back, but she had to." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1356 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.03982300884955752 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012536873156342183 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 15.49 | | std | 7.63 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 69.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4431818181818182 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Just branches swaying against the" | | 1 | "Perhaps she was tired." |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She had heard whispers of" | | 1 | "She hugged her jacket tightly," | | 2 | "She had come here seeking" | | 3 | "She turned quickly, eyes wide," | | 4 | "she muttered to herself, trying" | | 5 | "She glanced around the grove," | | 6 | "She was unmoored from her" | | 7 | "It had to be." | | 8 | "she called out, the tremor" | | 9 | "Her spine straightened, the urge" | | 10 | "She held her breath, listening" | | 11 | "It was too deliberate." | | 12 | "She stepped backward, seeking the" | | 13 | "she murmured, more to fortify" | | 14 | "She sucked in a breath," | | 15 | "it breathed, the word sliding" | | 16 | "Her feet remained rooted to" | | 17 | "it called, the sounds melting" | | 18 | "She turned and ran, but" | | 19 | "She stumbled to the boundary," |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 73.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped into the" | | 1 | "She had heard whispers of" | | 2 | "The air chilled around her," | | 3 | "She hugged her jacket tightly," | | 4 | "The grove was alive in" | | 5 | "The quiet pulse of energy" | | 6 | "Rory’s Heartstone Pendant swung from" | | 7 | "She had come here seeking" | | 8 | "Each night, those dreams beckoned" | | 9 | "Tonight, she had finally gathered" | | 10 | "A shiver traced along her" | | 11 | "Something moved at the peripheral" | | 12 | "She turned quickly, eyes wide," | | 13 | "she muttered to herself, trying" | | 14 | "Rory took a steadying breath," | | 15 | "She glanced around the grove," | | 16 | "The stones that marked the" | | 17 | "Each moment stretched, twisted, and" | | 18 | "The moonlight filtered through the" | | 19 | "Rory knelt by a patch" |
| | ratio | 0.774 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the beauty held a" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 52.15% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The quiet pulse of energy that surrounded her felt unnaturally intense, beating against the back of her mind like a warning bell." | | 1 | "Rory knelt by a patch of wildflowers that glimmered just slightly more than the others, their luminescent petals standing in stark contrast to the shadowy under…" | | 2 | "But as the stone pulsed against her neck, she felt a simultaneous dread that surged through her: if something was lurking in the shadows, it was already too lat…" | | 3 | "The air grew heavy, thickening with an unspoken tension, as if the very space around her was aware of her presence, molding and shifting with her every heartbea…" | | 4 | "She turned and ran, but the grove shifted around her, trees twisting like fingers intent on keeping her close." | | 5 | "The figure re-emerged, dancing just behind the trees, its laughter filling the space, making it feel as though the sound had grown teeth." | | 6 | "She pushed through tendrils of shadows clawing at her ankles, breaking their grasp with every ounce of will." | | 7 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay cool against her chest, whispering secrets of another realm, a chilling reminder that the darkness had been gathering, waiting just b…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "it breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "it chanted (chant)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.833 | |