Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPG4TTNB93GWN16JP1H232

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.018558
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The night was more silence than darkness, and Aurora Carter stood at the threshold of The Fae Grove, her breath misting in the thin moonlight. Richmond Park was a world of blacks and blues, the trees standing in a rigid parade. The heartstone pendant, nestled under her jacket, throbbed warmly against her chest, each pulse timed to the beat of her heart. There was no visible path forward, just the old oak standing stones that loomed around her like sentinels, marking where the world she knew ended and the unknown began. For a long moment, she hesitated, the familiar cool-headedness wavering against an instinctive warning to stay back. But she had come this far, summoned by a message scrawled in fading ink on the back of an old photograph, discovered between the pages of her late grandmother’s favorite book. She could almost hear her grandmother’s Welsh lilt in the warning: There are doors that lured you in with whispers, and some stayed sealed in silence for good reason. But Rory had listened too often before and missed her chance. Tonight, she was determined. She took a step forward. The air changed as she crossed the boundary, a subtle shift, like plunging into deep water. The night sounds from the park — the distant hum of traffic, the soft rustle of a nocturnal creature — blurred into an oppressive quiet. Her footfalls on the leaf-strewn ground seemed to echo unnaturally in the stillness. Each breath she took felt stolen. The grove unfolded before her, wildflowers impossibly striking in the moonlit gloom, their colors muted but vivid against the shadowed earth. A breeze stirred, teasing through her hair, carrying a perfume too sweet, too heavy, hinting at rot beneath the fragrance. The pendant grew warmer against her skin, a steady reassurance that tightened the knot of tension in her stomach. She focused on the glow it provided and pressed forward, weaving between the flowers toward a point of congruence she could almost sense more than see. The grove pulsed with an energy that rippled through the soles of her feet. She heard it then, the first sound other than her own heartbeat, a whispering just beyond the edge of hearing. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, winding through the trees like a lost melody. She paused, turning slowly, her breath held tight. There was no one there, just layers of shadow upon shadow, each tree a potential guise for something that wanted to stay hidden. Shivering, she pulled her jacket closer, fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist. Focus, Rory. Her own voice in her mind was a lifeline. The grove was thick with mystery — with secrets and dangers she couldn't yet comprehend. But she had to keep moving. She walked deeper into the grove, leaving behind the standing stones and their solemn guardianship. The certainty crept in now, a visceral knowing that she wasn’t alone. Now and again, she caught the faintest hint of movement from the corner of her eye. Each time she turned to look, she found only the fronds of ferns and spindly branches. Yet the whispers persisted, an indecipherable chorus that ebbed and flowed. Words that ensnared and enticed, though their meanings slipped through her grasp like mist. The temptation to follow the sound was almost as strong as the dread coiled at the base of her spine. Ahead, a figure flickered into view, just for an instant — pale, shadowless. Rory’s heart clenched, and she stumbled back a step, catching herself on a gnarled root that cut across the path. Her first instinct was to bolt back to the safety of Richmond Park. To abandon this misplaced adventure. Her second, a stubborn refusal to be driven away, held her frozen. “Who’s there?” Her own voice sounded absurdly loud, and she winced at the vulnerability in it. Silence answered her, a thick, suffocating quiet that seemed to press closer, compacting the space around her smaller and smaller. She swallowed, her throat dry. The heartstone pendant lent its warmth, an encouragement against unseen adversaries. Her thoughts trailed back to her grandmother, to stories of the Fae, capricious and cruel, where nothing was as it seemed. Where promises made were rarely kept. The movement came again, this time accompanied by a soft rustle, a branch swaying aside where the figure had been. Rory took a deep breath, each inhale sharp and cold, and forced herself to move forward with deliberate slowness. She kept her gaze steady, refusing to let any imagined terror overtake her resolve. Gradually, the air began to grow colder, the warmth of the pendant now more acute against the chill. She breached a clearing, the sky bereft of clouds, allowing lunar light to spill across a scene from a memory she never lived. In the center of the clearing stood a tree, enormous and ancient. Its roots twisted into the earth like grasping fingers, its trunk knotted and scarred by time and weather. But it was the branches, tipped with white blossoms that glowed faintly, that drew her in. Each twist, each turn, a language of its own. The whispers grew louder, their cadence matching the rhythmic pulsing of the heartstone. Rory felt them around her, within her — imploring her to listen, to understand. Her heart thudded in her chest as she stepped forward. As if sensing her approach, the air shifted once more, a tangible presence brushing against her mind. A spectral tendril of thought wrapped around her consciousness, pulling her closer to the tree, to the heart of the grove. “Knew you’d come,” the whisper emerged, distinct now, threaded with a familiarity that should have set her at ease but didn't. It bore the cadence of her grandmother’s voice, though seasoned with something otherworldly. Rory’s breath hitched. This close, the tree radiated a cool luminescence, its blossoms shivering in an unfelt breeze. Word by word, the whispers unravelled. A message, a question, an answer — the truths untold twisted within. The pendant flared a sudden heat that stole the breath from her lungs, demanding her attention. The pulse synchronized with the throbbing within the tree, a heartbeat echoing between realms. It occurred to her, in that strange, dizzying clarity that comes at the edge of fear, that the grove itself was alive — a sentience that perceived her as much as she perceived it. The sound — the whispers — began to weave stories around her, stories of paths unwalked, choices unmade, futures unfurling in directions myriad and unknown. All at once, despite the fear, something in her relaxed. The grove's wrongness was not one of malice but of countless histories intersecting. A sanctuary of knowledge, given to those who dared to listen. “Show me,” Rory whispered, unsure what the words committed her to, but she felt the grove respond in some deep-rooted understanding that transcended words as she knew them. Then, at the edge of the clearing, she saw the figures again, a dozen or more, the guardians of this place — theirs and hers. Silent watchers bathed in ethereal glow. And as she blinked, they were gone, leaving only the certainty that her path forward was being mapped beneath her very feet. The fear, the enchantment, the promise of the unknown stitched together into a tapestry of possibility. She backed away from the tree, her heart steady now, the whispers a lullaby as she traced her way back through the web of wildflowers. As she passed the standing stones once more, the world shifted back. Sounds of Richmond Park filtered into her awareness, the honk of distant car horns, the soft rustle of a breeze. The night was just a summer night again. But as she emerged, heartstone cool against her skin, Rory knew she would return to The Fae Grove. She would return, not for the fear, not for the thrill. But for the answers still waiting among the whispers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
77.2210% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"warmly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"warmly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"wavering"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"spectral"
count1
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"ethereal"
2"tapestry"
3"sanctuary"
4"sentinels"
5"throbbed"
6"flickered"
7"wavering"
8"oppressive"
9"spectral"
10"otherworldly"
11"loomed"
12"echo"
13"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
46.4752% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean49.04
std15.33
cv0.313
sampleLengths
091
177
220
360
441
559
667
746
859
945
1063
1136
1243
1353
1441
1555
1637
1738
1834
1936
2064
2159
2228
2353
2441
2540
2638
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"were gone, being mapped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs219
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1310
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.03969465648854962
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.00916030534351145
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean15.58
std6.8
cv0.436
sampleLengths
025
116
221
329
417
531
629
711
84
95
1016
1125
1213
136
1421
1520
1619
1726
1814
1920
2016
218
2223
2314
242
259
2615
276
2815
2912
3016
3116
3211
3314
3420
3513
3620
3713
385
3912
4016
4120
425
4311
4421
456
4620
4719
4814
4918
66.2745% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4117647058823529
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners35
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the whisper emerged, distinct now, threaded with a familiarity that should have set her at ease but didn't (emerge, thread set does do not)"
1"Rory whispered, unsure what the words committed her to, but she felt the grove respond in some deep-rooted understanding that transcended words as she knew them (whisper, unsure commit feel respond root understanding transcend know)"
81.7630%