Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPG6VBEKB3324J3XXB88YG

Run Details

Duration:
5.5s
Cost:
$0.000251

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
In the hush of a London night, Aurora Carter pedaled her bicycle through Richmond Park, the moon a silver sliver in the velvet sky. She'd come for the solitude, the quiet, but as she neared the heart of the park, a prickle of unease skittered down her spine. The air felt charged, heavy with an unseen presence. She dismounted, pushing her bike towards the familiar stand of ancient oaks, their gnarled roots stretching like fingers from the earth. The Fae Grove, Eva had called it, a place where time bent and whispered secrets. Rory had scoffed at first, but after seeing Eva's eyes glow with that eerie light, she'd kept an open mind. The Grove was hidden, marked only by the standing stones that seemed to hum with ancient power. She stepped between them, feeling a shiver run through her as the air shifted, grew colder. The wildflowers blooming year-round seemed to sway, their colors muted under the pallid moonlight. Rory reached up, touching the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck. A gift from an unknown benefactor, it pulsed faintly, warm against her fingertips. She'd felt its tug here before, a faint heartbeat echoing the rhythm of her own. She walked deeper into the Grove, the silence pressing against her ears. Too silent. No hoot of an owl, no rustle of nocturnal creatures. Just the soft sigh of wind through the trees, carrying whispers that made no sense. A twig snapped. She froze, heart pounding. Nothing moved. Yet, she couldn't shake the feeling of eyes watching, waiting. She took a deep breath, her gaze scanning the shadows. "Hello?" Her voice echoed, swallowed by the night. Another snap. Louder this time. Closer. She turned, her eyes widening as she thought she saw a figure dart behind a tree. She blinked, and it was gone. Just the tree, its gnarled branches reaching like skeletal fingers. Rory swallowed hard, her hand closing around the Heartstone. It pulsed faster now, its warmth spreading through her. She took a step back, then another, her eyes never leaving the spot where she'd seen the figure. A soft laugh echoed through the Grove. Childlike, yet wrong. It sent shivers down her spine, raised the hairs on her arms. She turned, her breath coming in short gasps. The laughter came again, this time from another direction. Mocking, taunting. She broke into a run, her heart pounding in her ears. The Grove seemed endless, the trees closing in, their branches reaching for her. She could hear the laughter now, all around her, a chorus of voices that made her blood run cold. She stumbled, falling to her knees. The Heartstone pulsed wildly, its glow casting eerie shadows on the ground. She looked up, her breath catching in her throat. Surrounding her were figures, their forms shifting, their faces twisted into grotesque masks. They laughed, their voices echoing, bouncing off the trees. Fear gripped her, paralyzing her. She couldn't move, couldn't scream. She was trapped, surrounded by the Fae, their eyes glowing with malice. Suddenly, the laughter stopped. The figures stilled, their eyes turning towards something behind her. She turned slowly, her heart pounding in her chest. Standing at the edge of the Grove was a figure, tall and imposing. It wore a cloak, its hood pulled up, hiding its face. But Rory could feel its gaze, cold and piercing. It raised its hand, and the figures around her melted away, disappearing into the night. Rory stood, her body shaking. She backed away, her eyes never leaving the figure. It took a step forward, its cloak billowing around it. She turned, running as fast as she could, her heart pounding in her ears. She didn't stop until she reached the standing stones, the boundary of the Grove. She looked back, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The figure was gone, swallowed by the night. She fell to her knees, her body wracked with sobs. She'd come seeking answers, but all she found was terror. The Fae Grove was no longer a place of secrets, but a place of nightmares. And she had a feeling she'd only scratched the surface of its darkness.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
71.1816% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount694
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.5447% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount694
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"imposing"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"echoing"
count2
highlights
0"imposing"
1"velvet"
2"echoed"
3"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
20.5438% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean40.76
std9.05
cv0.222
sampleLengths
057
156
247
340
439
537
638
736
841
943
1049
1122
1223
1348
1438
1541
1638
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"was hidden"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount693
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.025974025974025976
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008658008658008658
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean10.5
std5.22
cv0.497
sampleLengths
024
124
29
321
415
520
617
716
814
912
1013
1115
1212
132
1410
1515
163
174
182
1910
2010
218
222
233
241
2516
266
2710
289
299
3018
317
323
3312
348
359
362
3711
3813
3919
406
4112
429
4313
449
455
465
4712
484
4910
50.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners24
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
85.6041%