| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she spoke again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 86.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1092 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1092 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "determined" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "otherworldly" | | 12 | "palpable" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "resonated" | | 16 | "tangible" | | 17 | "depths" | | 18 | "dance" | | 19 | "unspoken" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1081 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1065 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed distant in this place where time danced between minutes and hours or slipped swiftly into days" | | 1 | "As if sensing her intrusion, the woods seemed to tighten around her, branches stretching like curious fingers weaving an intrusive net overhead" | | 2 | "quite catch" | | 3 | "as though urging her forward" | | 4 | "as if granting a reprieve, the Grove stirred around her, loosening its grasp just enough for the path home to unfurl before her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1081 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.13% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 45.04 | | std | 14.5 | | cv | 0.322 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 65 |
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| 95.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "been warned" | | 1 | "been lured" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.153 | | matches | | 0 | "Her day had been unremarkable—another routine of deliveries across London, the constant company of the city’s chaos a comfort in its predictability." | | 1 | "Ordinary nocturnal noises—the rustle of wings, the scrape of unseen creatures among the underbrush—played different here, suggestive and deliberate." | | 2 | "When she stopped, there was only silence—pregnant, waiting silence." | | 3 | "A sudden breeze rustled the leaves; they whispered accusations she couldn't quite catch." | | 4 | "Ahead, a clearing yawned open—a stage set for the kind of revelations she'd hoped to avoid." | | 5 | "She did not belong here, the Grove reminded her—a human far from home, an earthbound creature on the precipice of the otherworldly." | | 6 | "All she found was a silence surpassing that of any earthly silence—a palpable emptiness that pressed upon her ears." | | 7 | "A sudden movement—quick and sharp—at the edge of her vision made Rory whirl around." | | 8 | "No simple exploratory jaunt this; she had trespassed against something sleeping, something she did not know how to appease." | | 9 | "Answers awaited—answers worth confronting the darkness for, even if it meant visiting the Grove once more." | | 10 | "For now, she had enough—a breadcrumb trail to her unspoken fate, to secrets hidden among the cracks of reality." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1078 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03525046382189239 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012059369202226345 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 15.01 | | std | 6.32 | | cv | 0.421 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 85.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5277777777777778 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Always a reminder." | | 1 | "Somewhere deep within the grove," | | 2 | "More than once, she paused," | | 3 | "Finally, as if granting a" | | 4 | "Only then did she pivot," |
| | ratio | 0.072 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, her fingers brushing" | | 1 | "It had led her here," | | 2 | "Her day had been unremarkable—another" | | 3 | "She had almost welcomed the" | | 4 | "Her friends called her clever," | | 5 | "She walked on, clutching the" | | 6 | "Her heart pounded in response," | | 7 | "She glanced at her watch," | | 8 | "She found herself more guided" | | 9 | "It cast elongated shadows that" | | 10 | "She stepped forward, a reluctant" | | 11 | "She did not belong here," | | 12 | "She swallowed the knot of" | | 13 | "She squinted, her breath caught" | | 14 | "She turned instinctively toward the" | | 15 | "She called out, though the" | | 16 | "she spoke again, this time" | | 17 | "Her question hovered, unanswered." | | 18 | "Her fear ebbed but did" | | 19 | "She would gather the pieces," |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She hesitated, her fingers brushing" | | 3 | "The air was thick, oppressive" | | 4 | "Rory glanced down at the" | | 5 | "The deep crimson gemstone glowed" | | 6 | "It had led her here," | | 7 | "Her day had been unremarkable—another" | | 8 | "She had almost welcomed the" | | 9 | "Her friends called her clever," | | 10 | "All the traits she had" | | 11 | "Something compelled her, a whisper" | | 12 | "The path ahead lay shrouded" | | 13 | "She walked on, clutching the" | | 14 | "Every few paces, the shadows" | | 15 | "A sudden breeze rustled the" | | 16 | "Her heart pounded in response," | | 17 | "Rory Carter ran from her" | | 18 | "Time was deceptive in this" | | 19 | "She glanced at her watch," |
| | ratio | 0.696 | |
| 72.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "As if sensing her intrusion," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 59.52% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere deep within the grove, wildflowers whispered among themselves, unswayed by the breeze that failed to reach her here." | | 1 | "As if sensing her intrusion, the woods seemed to tighten around her, branches stretching like curious fingers weaving an intrusive net overhead." | | 2 | "The path twisted, the trees crowding together as though bent on conspiracy." | | 3 | "It cast elongated shadows that danced around the grove, their movements unbound by the wind, uncomfortably aware of her presence." | | 4 | "She swallowed the knot of fear clogging her throat, searching the shadows for something, an answer, perhaps." | | 5 | "The pendant grew warmer against her skin, tugging gently as though urging her forward." | | 6 | "Finally, as if granting a reprieve, the Grove stirred around her, loosening its grasp just enough for the path home to unfurl before her eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she spoke again (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |