| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She tried again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 86.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1121 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1121 | | totalAiIsms | 40 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "navigated" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "sentinels" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "solace" | | 11 | "amidst" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "palpable" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "flicked" | | 17 | "potential" | | 18 | "fractured" | | 19 | "chilling" | | 20 | "reverberated" | | 21 | "searing" | | 22 | "pulse" | | 23 | "echoes" | | 24 | "trembled" | | 25 | "could feel" | | 26 | "cacophony" | | 27 | "looming" | | 28 | "echoed" | | 29 | "spectral" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1134 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1121 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | November | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 3 | | Isolde | 1 | | Meet | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | English | 1 | | Mary | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Mary" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Meet" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.882 | | wordCount | 1134 | | matches | | 0 | "not the calming trickle that would have settled her heart but a robust, unsettling rush, like a hidden brook bursting its" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 42 | | std | 19.38 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 80 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.182 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter — Rory to those who knew her well — eased the otherworldly weight of the Heartstone Pendant beneath her coat." | | 1 | "A soft rustle emanated from the underbrush, too swift and deliberate for the wind, but she dismissed it — a rabbit perhaps, mongoose, or stray fox." | | 2 | "Her ears strained against the quiet that followed — total, suffocating stillness, as if nature itself held its breath." | | 3 | "“Eva?” The name fell from her lips — soft, desperate, hopeful." | | 4 | "Rory had come for her friend, summoned by a cryptic message written on leaf-strewn paper: Meet me at the Grove — E." | | 5 | "A ripple of something unseen shifted overhead — a murmur of leaves where none should have been moved." | | 6 | "The sound of running water reached her then — not the calming trickle that would have settled her heart but a robust, unsettling rush, like a hidden brook bursting its banks." | | 7 | "Her fear fractured as a laugh — sardonic and chilling — reverberated through the grove, each note a nail skittering along her arm." | | 8 | "A sound — a low hum, just within the audible range, wormed into her consciousness." | | 9 | "Distorted lines wove through the air — fragments of remembered nursery rhymes seeping from the soil like curdled echoes." | | 10 | "Whatever had called her here, whatever had mimicked Eva's reach, intended for her to linger—and to suffer." | | 11 | "But Rory was not merely clever; she was persistent." | | 12 | "But the Heartstone was guiding now — its urgency a lighthouse pulse aligning her strides." | | 13 | "Then light shifted — a break, an opening as the borders unraveled into reality." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1113 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03773584905660377 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017070979335130278 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 14.73 | | std | 7.33 | | cv | 0.498 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 60.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4025974025974026 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the grove’s predatory quiet" | | 1 | "Suddenly, the world pirouetted around" | | 2 | "Then light shifted — a" |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed back her unease." | | 1 | "She knew why she was" | | 2 | "She exhaled, solace found amidst" | | 3 | "Her ears strained against the" | | 4 | "She adjusted the flashlight, its" | | 5 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 6 | "It offered some comfort, but" | | 7 | "Her fingers brushed past a" | | 8 | "She halted beneath the high" | | 9 | "She tried again, the words" | | 10 | "It originated from nowhere visible," | | 11 | "Her fear fractured as a" | | 12 | "It changed abruptly, becoming her" | | 13 | "Her heart banged complaints against" | | 14 | "Her own voice trembled from" | | 15 | "Her vision honed, barred by" | | 16 | "She moved faster, steps nearly" |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 76.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park lay cloaked in" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter — Rory to" | | 2 | "The pendant's warmth seared through" | | 3 | "She pushed back her unease." | | 4 | "She knew why she was" | | 5 | "The oak standing stones loomed" | | 6 | "Here, time moved idiosyncratically, her" | | 7 | "The moment she stepped past" | | 8 | "The path behind her vanished," | | 9 | "A heady floral scent enveloped" | | 10 | "She exhaled, solace found amidst" | | 11 | "Dread crept along the fringes" | | 12 | "The night held its breath," | | 13 | "A soft rustle emanated from" | | 14 | "Rory pressed onward, her footsteps" | | 15 | "This place, a nape in" | | 16 | "Her ears strained against the" | | 17 | "She adjusted the flashlight, its" | | 18 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 19 | "It offered some comfort, but" |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 68.49% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Though unseen, its awareness scraped" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 44.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "A heady floral scent enveloped her, wildflowers that thrived under the guardianship of the otherworldly realm." | | 1 | "Her ears strained against the quiet that followed — total, suffocating stillness, as if nature itself held its breath." | | 2 | "She adjusted the flashlight, its beam quivering between shadows that danced at the periphery of her vision, elusive and intangible." | | 3 | "Rory flicked the flashlight upward reflexively, its beam catching on nothing but errant branches clawing at the sky." | | 4 | "The sound of running water reached her then — not the calming trickle that would have settled her heart but a robust, unsettling rush, like a hidden brook burst…" | | 5 | "It changed abruptly, becoming her old English professor’s voice murmuring from deep within memory." | | 6 | "Heartstone clutched close, she picked her path back, retracing through the darkness that pushed and pulled, mind feeling for the warmth of ground anew as she st…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |