Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGCWVAGFMKZ7STVC7GTJN

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Duration:
58.7s
Cost:
$0.000873
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter slid onto the stool, the worn leather creaking in protest as she settled in for a well-deserved pint after a long day of navigating London's congested streets on her scooter. Silas' bar, The Raven's Nest, was a sanctuary, a place where she could blend into the shadows and lose herself among the familiar faces of the regulars. She had just ordered her drink when the door swung open, casting a brief, golden glow over the dimly lit room. The sounds of the city outside receded, and for an instant, time seemed to hold its breath. That's when she saw him – Evan, her ex, standing in the doorway, his eyes scanning the room with an air of confident familiarity that made Rory's gut twist into a knot. It had been three years since she'd last laid eyes on him, three years since she'd finally mustered the courage to leave him and start anew in London. The memories of their tumultuous relationship still lingered, a festering wound that refused to fully heal. Evan's gaze swept the room, and when his eyes landed on her, a slow, charming smile spread across his face. It was a smile that had once made her heart skip a beat, but now it only filled her with unease. He made his way through the crowd, his movements fluid and deliberate, drawing the attention of the other patrons. Rory felt a surge of discomfort as he approached her, his eyes never leaving hers. "Aurora," he said, his voice low and smooth, the sound of it making her skin prickle. "Long time no see." Rory forced a neutral expression, her voice measured as she replied, "Evan. What brings you here?" He slid onto the stool beside her, his eyes taking in the bar, the patrons, before returning to her. "Just passing through. I saw the sign and thought I'd drop in. This place has a great reputation." Silas, ever the observant host, appeared at their side, his hazel eyes narrowing slightly as he took in the tension between them. "Can I get you something to drink?" he asked Evan, his tone friendly but with a hint of reserve. Evan ordered a whiskey, and as Silas poured his drink, Rory couldn't help but steal glances at her ex. He looked different, his features sharper, more refined. His hair was shorter, styled in a way that accentuated his angular cheekbones. He had always been good-looking, but there was a polished quality to him now, a sense of confidence that bordered on arrogance. As Silas moved away, Evan turned to her, his eyes roving over her face. "You look...different," he said, his voice tinged with a mix of curiosity and criticism. Rory raised an eyebrow, her fingers tightening around her pint glass. "I am different," she replied, her voice even. The conversation that followed was stilted, like a dance between two people who had forgotten the steps. They talked about nothing and everything, skirting around the elephant in the room – their past, the reasons she'd left him. Evan seemed determined to catch up, to reestablish a connection that had long since frayed, but Rory was wary, her defenses on high alert. As the evening wore on, the bar began to fill with the usual crowd, the sounds of laughter and music swirling around them. Silas kept a discreet distance, his eyes flicking to them periodically, as if monitoring the situation. Rory appreciated the silent support, knowing that if things escalated, Silas would be there to intervene. Evan, however, seemed oblivious to the tension, or perhaps he was simply choosing to ignore it. He regaled her with stories of his new life, his job, his friends, and Rory listened, her expression polite but detached. She couldn't help but wonder what he was after, what he hoped to achieve by reconnecting with her. As the night drew to a close, Evan glanced at his watch, his expression tinged with disappointment. "I should probably get going," he said, his voice laced with a hint of reluctance. Rory felt a surge of relief, but also a twinge of guilt. She had been so caught up in her own emotions, her own defenses, that she hadn't stopped to consider why Evan might have sought her out. Was it genuinely to reconnect, or was there something more at play? As Evan stood to leave, Rory felt a pang of regret. She had been so quick to judge, so quick to assume the worst. Perhaps, just perhaps, Evan had changed, grown in ways she couldn't yet see. "Wait," she said, her voice low, as Evan turned to leave. "Why did you come here tonight?" He paused, his eyes locking onto hers, a flicker of something – uncertainty, vulnerability – flashing across his face before he masked it with his usual confidence. "I guess I just wanted to see if you were okay," he said, his voice softer than she'd expected. Rory felt a lump form in her throat as she searched his eyes, looking for any sign of insincerity. But all she saw was a glimmer of the boy she had once known, the boy she had loved. "Thank you," she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. Evan nodded, a small, enigmatic smile playing on his lips. "Take care of yourself, Aurora." As he turned to leave, Rory felt the weight of time settle upon her, the weight of unspoken regret. She realized that she had been living in the past, letting the memories of their relationship define her. It was time to move forward, to forge a new path, one that didn't involve the ghosts of her past. The door closed behind Evan, and Rory let out a slow breath, feeling the tension seep from her body. She turned to Silas, who was watching her with a knowing glint in his eye. "Thanks for the drink," she said, her voice a little stronger now. Silas smiled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "Anytime, kid. You know that." As Rory slid off the stool, ready to face whatever the future held, she felt a sense of gratitude toward Silas, toward the bar, and toward the life she had built for herself in this city. She knew that she would always carry the scars of her past with her, but she also knew that she was strong enough to face them head-on, to forge a new path, one that was hers alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
90.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1074
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1074
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"navigating"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"tension"
count3
6
word"sense of"
count2
7
word"tinged"
count2
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"determined"
count1
11
word"pang"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"enigmatic"
count1
15
word"weight"
count2
16
word"unspoken"
count1
17
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"navigating"
1"sanctuary"
2"familiar"
3"scanning"
4"measured"
5"tension"
6"sense of"
7"tinged"
8"eyebrow"
9"dance"
10"determined"
11"pang"
12"flicker"
13"whisper"
14"enigmatic"
15"weight"
16"unspoken"
17"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but wonder"
50.60% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences56
matches
0"r with unease"
1"a surge of relief"
2"a twinge of guilt"
3"a pang of regret"
4"felt a lump"
66.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1078
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount972
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Carter1
London2
Evan14
Rory14
Silas8
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.78
windowScore0.667
13.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed determined to catch up, to reestablish a connection that had long since frayed, but Rory was wary, her defenses on high alert"
1"as if monitoring the situation"
2"seemed oblivious to the tension, or perhaps he was simply choosing to ignore it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1078
matches(empty)
5.38% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"realized that she"
1"knew that she knew that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean39.93
std23.15
cv0.58
sampleLengths
097
176
275
320
416
537
641
762
828
919
1062
1155
1255
1332
1450
1537
1617
1727
1819
1938
2011
2115
2257
2334
2412
2513
2673
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was stilted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was simply choosing"
1"was watching"
4.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences62
ratio0.048
matches
0"That's when she saw him – Evan, her ex, standing in the doorway, his eyes scanning the room with an air of confident familiarity that made Rory's gut twist into a knot."
1"They talked about nothing and everything, skirting around the elephant in the room – their past, the reasons she'd left him."
2"He paused, his eyes locking onto hers, a flicker of something – uncertainty, vulnerability – flashing across his face before he masked it with his usual confidence."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount84
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.03571428571428571
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.011904761904761904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean17.39
std6.99
cv0.402
sampleLengths
032
127
221
317
432
528
616
720
821
919
1015
1116
124
1316
1419
1518
1622
1719
1819
198
2013
2122
2214
2314
2411
258
2617
2721
2824
2923
3016
3116
3216
3321
3418
3517
3615
3712
3826
3912
4011
4113
4213
4311
446
4527
4619
4719
4819
4911
69.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.41935483870967744
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners26
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Perhaps, just perhaps, Evan had"
ratio0.018
27.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences56
matches
0"She had just ordered her"
1"It had been three years"
2"It was a smile that"
3"He made his way through"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"He slid onto the stool"
6"he asked Evan, his tone"
7"He looked different, his features"
8"His hair was shorter, styled"
9"He had always been good-looking,"
10"he said, his voice tinged"
11"she replied, her voice even"
12"They talked about nothing and"
13"He regaled her with stories"
14"She couldn't help but wonder"
15"he said, his voice laced"
16"She had been so caught"
17"She had been so quick"
18"she said, her voice low,"
19"He paused, his eyes locking"
ratio0.482
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"Aurora Carter slid onto the"
1"She had just ordered her"
2"The sounds of the city"
3"That's when she saw him"
4"It had been three years"
5"The memories of their tumultuous"
6"Evan's gaze swept the room,"
7"It was a smile that"
8"He made his way through"
9"Rory felt a surge of"
10"he said, his voice low"
11"Rory forced a neutral expression,"
12"He slid onto the stool"
13"Silas, ever the observant host,"
14"he asked Evan, his tone"
15"Evan ordered a whiskey, and"
16"He looked different, his features"
17"His hair was shorter, styled"
18"He had always been good-looking,"
19"he said, his voice tinged"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"That's when she saw him – Evan, her ex, standing in the doorway, his eyes scanning the room with an air of confident familiarity that made Rory's gut twist into…"
1"The memories of their tumultuous relationship still lingered, a festering wound that refused to fully heal."
2"He slid onto the stool beside her, his eyes taking in the bar, the patrons, before returning to her."
3"His hair was shorter, styled in a way that accentuated his angular cheekbones."
4"He had always been good-looking, but there was a polished quality to him now, a sense of confidence that bordered on arrogance."
5"Evan seemed determined to catch up, to reestablish a connection that had long since frayed, but Rory was wary, her defenses on high alert."
6"Silas kept a discreet distance, his eyes flicking to them periodically, as if monitoring the situation."
7"He paused, his eyes locking onto hers, a flicker of something – uncertainty, vulnerability – flashing across his face before he masked it with his usual confide…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he asked, his tone friendly but with a hint of reserve"
1"she said, her voice low, as Evan turned to leave"
2"he said, his voice softer than she'd expected"
3"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice a little stronger now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.8933%