| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1253 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1253 | | totalAiIsms | 53 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "symphony" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "delved" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "sentinels" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "amidst" | | 18 | "otherworldly" | | 19 | "raced" | | 20 | "echo" | | 21 | "intensity" | | 22 | "tangible" | | 23 | "anticipation" | | 24 | "palpable" | | 25 | "tension" | | 26 | "could feel" | | 27 | "gloom" | | 28 | "scanning" | | 29 | "thundered" | | 30 | "solitary" | | 31 | "echoed" | | 32 | "racing" | | 33 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "g with anticipation" | | 1 | "e with fear" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1245 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Taking a deliberate step forward, she called out, her voice cutting through the murk of silence." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1236 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.57 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as if echoing her heartbeat" | | 1 | "as if teasing her resolve" | | 2 | "felt like a warning" | | 3 | "as if guiding her deeper into the grove's clutches" | | 4 | "seemed alive yet they swayed in unseen currents, curving away from her path as if guiding her deeper into the grove's clutches" | | 5 | "seemed alive throbbing with anticipation, before dissolving into a palpable tension that thickened the air" | | 6 | "felt like the wildflowers were laughing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1245 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.74% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "insisted that this" | | 1 | "whispering that she" | | 2 | "understand that this" |
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| 70.44% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 59.29 | | std | 23.51 | | cv | 0.397 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 94 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 69 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 84 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 77 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 47 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | 0 | "was disorienting" | | 1 | "were compelling" | | 2 | "were laughing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.174 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for answers, clutching the Heartstone pendant—a deep crimson gem that hung heavy at her throat on a silver chain." | | 1 | "The grove seemed to breathe, though it lacked the symphony of life she expected; there were no crickets chirping, no rustle of leaves, just an expectant hush that coiled around her like a living thing." | | 2 | "The chill air prickled against her skin; it felt as though the shadows themselves whispered secrets meant only for the wind." | | 3 | "With a resolute nod to herself, she pressed on, drawn by the weight of history in the air—a promise held within the Heartstone that chanted softly against her skin." | | 4 | "Chill crept into the air, and a sudden gust rustled the branches—an unnatural sound that felt like a warning." | | 5 | "She hesitated, glancing around—the stones loomed like watchful sentinels, their surfaces worn and twisted, bearing silent witness to the passage of uncounted years." | | 6 | "Another noise erupted from the periphery, close enough this time that her heart raced—an echo of rustling leaves, but with a heavier weight behind it." | | 7 | "Time felt warped here; she could feel the minutes slip like sand through her fingers." | | 8 | "Each heartbeat marked the quietude—an all-consuming stillness that betrayed her instincts more with each rising second." | | 9 | "That’s when the whispering began—a soft, caressing murmur that shifted through the air itself." | | 10 | "Just as she turned to face it fully, it vanished—dispersed into the night like a wisp of smoke, leaving only silence in its wake." | | 11 | "This wasn’t merely a search for answers; it was a reckoning with the shadows, a test of her resolve." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1245 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.033734939759036145 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013654618473895583 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 18.04 | | std | 8.19 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 79.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4782608695652174 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the night replied, thick" | | 1 | "Once again, she caught movement" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "It pulsed softly against her" | | 2 | "She was no stranger to" | | 3 | "She pushed the sensation aside," | | 4 | "She glanced toward the sound," | | 5 | "She had promised herself this" | | 6 | "It spoke to her of" | | 7 | "Their beauty was disorienting, mocking" | | 8 | "She hesitated, glancing around—the stones" | | 9 | "It lurked in the spaces" | | 10 | "she whispered to herself, forcing" | | 11 | "Her childhood nickname felt foreign" | | 12 | "It was both grounding and" | | 13 | "she commanded, emboldened by adrenaline" | | 14 | "Her instincts cried out, a" | | 15 | "It felt like the wildflowers" | | 16 | "She was being beckoned." | | 17 | "Her pulse thundered as she" | | 18 | "Her breath hitched as panic" | | 19 | "She tightened her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.294 | |
| 92.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air trembled with" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 2 | "She had come here for" | | 3 | "It pulsed softly against her" | | 4 | "Aurora drew a deep breath," | | 5 | "She was no stranger to" | | 6 | "The grove seemed to breathe," | | 7 | "The Heartstone grew warmer, a" | | 8 | "She pushed the sensation aside," | | 9 | "Eva had insisted that this" | | 10 | "A rustling broke the fragile" | | 11 | "She glanced toward the sound," | | 12 | "The chill air prickled against" | | 13 | "Doubt clawed at her insides." | | 14 | "She had promised herself this" | | 15 | "The grove whispered, a language" | | 16 | "It spoke to her of" | | 17 | "Aurora pressed on, her own" | | 18 | "A trail of wildflowers bloomed" | | 19 | "Their beauty was disorienting, mocking" |
| | ratio | 0.735 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the deeper she ventured," | | 1 | "Just as she turned to" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for answers, clutching the Heartstone pendant—a deep crimson gem that hung heavy at her throat on a silver chain." | | 1 | "The Heartstone grew warmer, a pulse that quickened as if echoing her heartbeat." | | 2 | "Eva had insisted that this grove held the key to understanding more about their shared past, about the Fae legacy that lingered in their bloodlines." | | 3 | "A rustling broke the fragile silence, as if something stirred beneath the roots of the ancient oaks." | | 4 | "The chill air prickled against her skin; it felt as though the shadows themselves whispered secrets meant only for the wind." | | 5 | "Taking a deliberate step forward, she called out, her voice cutting through the murk of silence." | | 6 | "Yet, the deeper she ventured, the flickering lights intensified, as if teasing her resolve." | | 7 | "A trail of wildflowers bloomed beneath her feet, vivid bursts of color that seemed alive, yet they swayed in unseen currents, curving away from her path as if g…" | | 8 | "It was both grounding and disconcerting, as if she were compelling herself to retain some element of control within a place designed to strip her of it." | | 9 | "The challenge hung in the air, vibrating with an intensity that left the hairs on her arms standing at attention." | | 10 | "The stillness seemed alive, throbbing with anticipation, before dissolving into a palpable tension that thickened the air." | | 11 | "Each heartbeat marked the quietude—an all-consuming stillness that betrayed her instincts more with each rising second." | | 12 | "It felt like the wildflowers were laughing at her, brilliant petals trembling in the night, their colors too vibrant for the darkness that surrounded her." | | 13 | "A single heartbeat echoed within the stillness of the Fae Grove, the echo whispering back unanswered questions that darted just out of reach." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |