| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1143 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1143 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "charged" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "comforting" | | 17 | "pounding" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "palpable" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "intensity" | | 23 | "anticipation" | | 24 | "resolving" | | 25 | "familiar" | | 26 | "down her spine" | | 27 | "echo" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "k with anticipation" |
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| 3.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1141 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1120 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if the very air was charged with a tension that set her nerves on edge" | | 1 | "sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 2 | "as if considering her question" | | 3 | "light that seemed to see straight through her" | | 4 | "not quite its eyes glowing with an inner light that seemed to see straight through her" | | 5 | "whisper that seemed to echo through the glade" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 57.63% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 47.54 | | std | 16.72 | | cv | 0.352 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "were coming" | | 1 | "was calling" | | 2 | "was seeing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—lurking just beyond the reach of the moonlight." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1123 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03561887800534283 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014247551202137132 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 75.98% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 15.63 | | std | 5.31 | | cv | 0.34 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 49.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3287671232876712 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 93.90% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oppressive quiet that" | | 1 | "Then, slowly, the figure stepped" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 84.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 1 | "It pulsed with a gentle" | | 2 | "She had to be careful," | | 3 | "It was as if the" | | 4 | "She walked slowly, her eyes" | | 5 | "She glanced over her shoulder," | | 6 | "It came from somewhere to" | | 7 | "She turned, peering into the" | | 8 | "Her mind raced, conjuring images" | | 9 | "she muttered to herself, her" | | 10 | "She continued on, her steps" | | 11 | "It was beautiful, yet eerie," | | 12 | "She followed the sound, her" | | 13 | "She approached cautiously, her eyes" | | 14 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 15 | "Her heart leapt into her" | | 16 | "She turned, her eyes scanning" | | 17 | "she called, her voice steady" | | 18 | "She backed away, her instincts" | | 19 | "It watched her, silent and" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 65.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air clung to" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 3 | "It pulsed with a gentle" | | 4 | "Rory had come here with" | | 5 | "Answers to questions she had" | | 6 | "The Grove was silent, unnaturally" | | 7 | "Rory took a deep breath," | | 8 | "Time behaved strangely here, she" | | 9 | "An hour inside could be" | | 10 | "She had to be careful," | | 11 | "It was as if the" | | 12 | "She walked slowly, her eyes" | | 13 | "The pendant's warmth was a" | | 14 | "She glanced over her shoulder," | | 15 | "A soft rustling sound broke" | | 16 | "It came from somewhere to" | | 17 | "She turned, peering into the" | | 18 | "Her mind raced, conjuring images" | | 19 | "she muttered to herself, her" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, with each step, the" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "But as she stood there, the air thick with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed impossibly in the chill of autumn, a sense of unease prickled at the edges of h…" | | 1 | "Her mind raced, conjuring images of creatures from the Fae realm, things that might slip between worlds to haunt the night." | | 2 | "The path wound deeper into the Grove, the standing stones forming a silent procession that guided her way." | | 3 | "It was beautiful, yet eerie, a sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 4 | "The pendant grew warmer, its glow intensifying, and she felt a strange pull, as if the tree was calling to her." | | 5 | "A world of shadows and light, of creatures that defied description." | | 6 | "The figure shifted, and she caught a glimpse of eyes, bright and piercing, watching her with an intensity that made her skin crawl." | | 7 | "The figure seemed to sense her indecision, and it moved, a fluid, graceful motion that brought it closer to the edge of the light." | | 8 | "The figure paused, its head tilting slightly, as if considering her question." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her voice barely more than a breath" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely more than a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |