| 24.56% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he prodded gently [gently]" | | 1 | "She leaned back [back]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 3 | "she finally admitted [finally]" | | 4 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.185 | | effectiveRatio | 0.175 | |
| 71.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1382 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1382 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "wavered" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "eyebrow" | | 9 | "normalcy" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "tinged" | | 14 | "unspoken" | | 15 | "echoes" | | 16 | "dancing" | | 17 | "apprehension" | | 18 | "raced" | | 19 | "tantalizing" | | 20 | "warmth" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "the weight of his words" | | 2 | "hung heavy in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1379 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 991 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Silas | 11 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Curiosity | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Curiosity" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.945 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "life that seemed to swirl around them both" | | 1 | "as if trying to peel back layers of paint to reveal what lay beneath" | | 2 | "as if sharing a hidden truth" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1379 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 30.64 | | std | 16.81 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit she had developed over the years—a tactile reminder of her past mistakes." | | 1 | "He looked older, wisdom clothed in subtle creases, yet his essence was the same—a solid foundation beneath the chaos of life that seemed to swirl around them both." | | 2 | "Her heart twisted; the question carried weight—regret, longing, uncertainty." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1001 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "small dim-lit chamber" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03296703296703297 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013986013986013986 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 13.93 | | std | 7.28 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 85.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5252525252525253 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Once they reached the hidden" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 28.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed the small crescent-shaped" | | 1 | "He glanced up and caught" | | 2 | "he said, setting the bottle" | | 3 | "Her voice wavered, caught between" | | 4 | "he replied, wiping his hands" | | 5 | "He looked older, wisdom clothed" | | 6 | "He opened the bottle with" | | 7 | "She took a long sip," | | 8 | "she offered with a half-smile" | | 9 | "It was the kind of" | | 10 | "It wasn’t a judgment but" | | 11 | "She chuckled, a sound that" | | 12 | "he prodded gently, as if" | | 13 | "She remembered the plans they" | | 14 | "She leaned back, letting the" | | 15 | "she said finally" | | 16 | "He had always been there," | | 17 | "His voice was low, the" | | 18 | "She met his gaze, the" | | 19 | "he asked, tilting his head" |
| | ratio | 0.478 | |
| 27.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The hum of late-night chatter" | | 1 | "The familiar scent of aged" | | 2 | "The green neon sign outside" | | 3 | "She rubbed the small crescent-shaped" | | 4 | "Silas Blackwood, with his grey-streaked" | | 5 | "He glanced up and caught" | | 6 | "he said, setting the bottle" | | 7 | "Her voice wavered, caught between" | | 8 | "he replied, wiping his hands" | | 9 | "He looked older, wisdom clothed" | | 10 | "He opened the bottle with" | | 11 | "A small ripple of intimacy" | | 12 | "She took a long sip," | | 13 | "The Raven's Nest was familiar" | | 14 | "Silas said, leaning forward slightly," | | 15 | "she offered with a half-smile" | | 16 | "It was the kind of" | | 17 | "Silas nodded, a serious look" | | 18 | "It wasn’t a judgment but" | | 19 | "Rory set the bottle down," |
| | ratio | 0.866 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, she thought, she was" | | 1 | "Now, the silence held a" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar scent of aged wood and spilled whiskey washed over her, stirring up memories that danced on the edge of both comfort and longing." | | 1 | "Moving to the bar, Rory perched on a stool, her fingers brushing against the cool surface of the varnished countertop." | | 2 | "He looked older, wisdom clothed in subtle creases, yet his essence was the same—a solid foundation beneath the chaos of life that seemed to swirl around them bo…" | | 3 | "There was silence, the kind that weighed down the air, wrapping them in an embrace of unfulfilled promises and unanswered questions." | | 4 | "Once they reached the hidden bookshelf that guarded the secret room, Silas pressed against it." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "He opened, their fingers brushing lightly" | | 1 | "he prodded gently, as if trying to peel back layers of paint to reveal what lay beneath" | | 2 | "she shot back, her tone lightening for the essence of playfulness she craved" | | 3 | "she finally admitted, her voice softening" | | 4 | "he said, his tone deeper as if sharing a hidden truth" | | 5 | "Rory breathed, an intoxicating thrill coursing through her as they stepped inside" | | 6 | "he said, his voice dropping to an intimate sincerity" | | 7 | "she said finally, her voice steady" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she finally admitted (admit)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.246 | | leniency | 0.491 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |