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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGEEBFYB33W609PERQC5M
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Model:
DeepSeek-V2 Chat
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
48.2s
Cost:
$0.001759
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The green neon sign buzzed
softly
above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest, casting a faint glow on the damp pavement. Rory pushed open the heavy wooden door, the familiar scent of whiskey and old wood enveloping her as she stepped inside. The bar was quiet for a Thursday evening, save for a few regulars hunched over their drinks and the low hum of a jazz track crackling through the speakers. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the dim light, and spotted Silas behind the bar, polishing glasses with his usual precision. His silver signet ring caught the light as he worked, a faint clink
echoing
with each movement. She slid onto a stool at the bar, setting her delivery bag down beside her. “Evening, Si,” she said, her Cardiff accent softened by years in London but still detectable. Silas glanced up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. “Rory. Back early tonight.” “Slow orders,” she replied, shrugging. “Thought I’d stop by before heading upstairs.” He nodded, setting a glass in front of her and reaching for a bottle of her usual bourbon. As he poured, the door creaked open again, and Rory heard
footsteps
approach the bar. She didn’t turn—until a voice she hadn’t heard in years froze her in place. “Silas. Good to see you.” Rory’s breath caught. She
knew that voice
, though it was deeper now, rougher around the edges. Slowly, she turned her head, and there he was—Evan. The years had carved new lines into his face, and his once-boyish features had hardened into something sharper, more defined. His hair was shorter, darker, and he wore a tailored suit that spoke of money and power. But his eyes—those piercing grey eyes—were the same. They
flicked
to her, and for a moment, neither of them spoke. “Evan,” Silas said, his tone
carefully
neutral. He set a glass down in front of him, the amber liquid catching the light. “Long time.” “Too long,” Evan replied, though his gaze remained fixed on Rory. “Laila.” The name hit her like a punch to the chest. She hadn’t
been called
that in years—not since she’d left Cardiff, not since she’d left him. “It’s Rory now,” she said, her voice steady despite the storm raging inside her. “Rory,” he repeated, as if testing the name on his tongue. He slid onto the stool beside her, his movements deliberate. “You look different.” “So do you.” She took a sip of her bourbon, the warmth doing little to settle her nerves. “Ten years will do that.” Evan nodded, his fingers drumming
lightly
on the bar. “Ten years,” he
echoed
. “Funny how time slips away.” Silas moved down the bar, leaving them in a bubble of uneasy silence. Rory traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist absently, a nervous habit she hadn’t quite shaken. Evan noticed, his gaze lingering on the mark he knew so well. “Still
got that,” he
said, a shadow of a smile playing on his lips. “Still got the knee?” she shot back, her tone sharper than she intended. He chuckled, a low, humorless sound. “Touché.” They lapsed into silence again, the
weight
of years pressing down between them. Rory’s mind raced with memories—long nights spent laughing, whispered promises, and the bitter, broken end of it all. She wondered if he remembered it the same way, if the guilt still haunted him as it did her. “How’ve you been?” he asked finally, breaking the tension. “Fine,” she replied, her voice clipped. “Working. Living.” “Delivering takeaway?” She bristled at the edge of judgment in his tone. “Among other things.” Evan nodded, sipping his drink. “And your father? Still practicing law?” “Retired.” She didn’t offer more, and he didn’t press. The jazz track shifted to something slower, more melancholic, and Rory stared into her glass, willing herself to stay composed. She could feel him watching her, studying her, as if trying to piece together the person she’d become. “You’re different,” he said at last. She looked up, meeting his gaze. “People change.” “Not always for the better,” he murmured, more to himself than to her. Rory’s jaw tightened. “What’s that supposed to mean?” Evan shrugged, swirling the liquid in his glass. “Just an observation.” “You don’t get to make observations,” she snapped, her cool demeanor cracking. “Not after what you did.” He flinched, the first genuine reaction she’d seen from him all night. “Rory—” “No,” she interrupted, shaking her head. “You don’t get to come back here and act like nothing happened. You don’t get to pretend you didn’t—” She stopped herself, taking a deep breath to steady her voice. “It doesn’t matter anymore. It’s in the past.” “Is it?” he asked quietly. She didn’t answer, couldn’t answer. Instead, she finished her drink in one long swallow and stood, slinging her bag over her shoulder. “Goodbye, Evan.” He reached for her wrist, his touch sending a jolt through her. “Wait.” She froze, her heart pounding in her chest. “Let go of me.” He hesitated, then released her, his hand falling to his side. “I’m sorry,” he said, his voice raw with emotion. “For everything.” Rory stared at him, the apology catching her off guard. She’d waited years to hear those words, but now that they were here, they felt hollow, meaningless. “It’s too late,” she said
softly
. Evan nodded, his face
etched
with regret. “I know.” She turned and walked away, the
weight
of his gaze following her until she reached the door. Outside, the cool night air washed over her, and she leaned against the brick wall, her chest heaving with the effort of holding herself together. Back inside, Silas watched Evan from the end of the bar, his expression
unreadable
. “That went well,” he remarked dryly. Evan pinched the bridge of his nose, exhaling
sharply
. “Shut up, Silas.” The older man chuckled, shaking his head. “You’ve got a lot to make up for.” “Tell me something I don’t know,” Evan muttered, finishing his drink and gesturing for another. Silas obliged, pouring a fresh glass. “She’s not the same woman you knew.” “Neither am I,” Evan said quietly. Silas studied him, the
weight
of years and mistakes hanging heavy in the air. “Then maybe it’s time to start acting like it.” Evan didn’t respond, his gaze fixed on the door Rory had walked through. For the first time in years, he felt the full
weight
of his choices—and the impossible task of trying to undo them. Meanwhile, Rory climbed the stairs to her flat, her mind racing with thoughts she’d long
tried to
bury. She unlocked the door and stepped inside, shutting it firmly behind her. Leaning against it, she closed her eyes and let out a shaky breath. The past had a way of catching up with you, no matter how far you ran. And tonight, it had come knocking at her door—bringing with it ghosts she wasn’t sure she could face. But she would, she told herself, because she had no other choice. She just hoped she’d survive the encounter.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:23:32.958097+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:23:32 AM
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1915
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native_tokens_completion
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
33.3333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
20
adverbTagCount
6
adverbTags
0
"she said, her Cardiff accent softened by years in London but still detectable [still]"
1
"Silas said, his tone carefully neutral [carefully]"
2
"he murmured, more to himself than to her [more]"
3
"she said softly [softly]"
4
"he remarked dryly [dryly]"
5
"Evan said quietly [quietly]"
49.3671%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1185
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
4
adverb
"softly"
count
2
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"lightly"
2
"sharply"
3
"slowly"
4
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
15.6118%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1185
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"flicked"
count
1
1
word
"unreadable"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
4
3
word
"footsteps"
count
1
4
word
"echoed"
count
1
5
word
"echoing"
count
1
6
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicked"
1
"unreadable"
2
"weight"
3
"footsteps"
4
"echoed"
5
"echoing"
6
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
85
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
85
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
114
matches
0
"knew that voice"
1
"got that,” he"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
53
mean
22.17
std
19.67
cv
0.887
sampleLengths
0
113
1
30
2
14
3
12
4
47
5
5
6
82
7
24
8
12
9
40
10
24
11
23
12
18
13
42
14
14
15
13
16
7
17
50
18
9
19
8
20
2
21
13
22
11
23
9
24
38
25
6
26
8
27
13
28
8
29
11
30
17
31
13
32
25
33
19
34
5
35
24
36
13
37
12
38
22
39
33
40
9
41
42
42
20
43
12
44
15
45
15
46
13
47
6
48
23
49
35
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"been called"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
194
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
997
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.028084252758274825
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.012036108324974924
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
114
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
114
mean
10.31
std
6.1
cv
0.592
sampleLengths
0
21
1
21
2
29
3
25
4
17
5
15
6
15
7
10
8
4
9
5
10
7
11
18
12
15
13
14
14
5
15
3
16
13
17
9
18
20
19
17
20
8
21
12
22
7
23
15
24
2
25
11
26
1
27
10
28
16
29
14
30
11
31
10
32
3
33
18
34
5
35
9
36
4
37
5
38
13
39
17
40
12
41
14
42
13
43
6
44
1
45
13
46
18
47
19
48
9
49
6
75.1462%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.45614035087719296
totalSentences
114
uniqueOpeners
52
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
20
fancyCount
14
fancyTags
0
"she said, her Cardiff accent softened by years in London but still detectable (say, soften)"
1
"she replied, shrugging (reply, shrug)"
2
"Evan replied, though his gaze remained fixed on Rory (reply, remain fix)"
3
"he repeated, as if testing the name on his tongue (repeat, test)"
4
"he echoed (echo)"
5
"he said, a shadow of a smile playing on his lips (say, play)"
6
"she replied, her voice clipped (reply, clip)"
7
"he murmured, more to himself than to her (murmur)"
8
"she snapped, her cool demeanor cracking (snap, crack)"
9
"she interrupted, shaking her head (interrupt, shake)"
10
"she said softly (say softly)"
11
"he remarked dryly (remark dryly)"
12
"Evan muttered, finishing his drink and gesturing for another (mutter, finish gesture)"
13
"Evan said quietly (say quietly)"
80.7917%