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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGK78YSEZJD909ZVZW9NN
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Model:
DeepSeek-V2 Chat
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
49.8s
Cost:
$0.002149
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door, letting the November chill slip in behind her before it
was swallowed
by the bar's warmth. She shook the rain from her black hair, the neon green sign outside casting an eerie glow across her sharp features. The place was half-empty—just a few regulars hunched over their drinks, their faces lit by the amber glow of table lamps. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the bar, where the light didn’t quite reach. Silas
was polishing
a glass, his silver signet ring catching the light as he worked. He didn’t look up, but the corner of his mouth twitched. "You're late," he said. "Traffic," Rory lied. She hadn’t been in traffic. She’d been standing outside for ten minutes, working up the nerve to come in. Silas set the glass down and finally met her eyes. His hazel gaze was as steady as ever, but there was something new there—something guarded. "You look like hell," he observed. "Thanks." She rubbed the small crescent scar on her wrist, an old nervous habit. "I’ll take a whiskey. Whatever’s cheap." He didn’t move. "Since when do you drink whiskey?" "Since now." She forced a smile, but it felt brittle. Silas exhaled through his nose but turned to pour her drink. The liquid was dark, almost black in the dim light. He slid it across to her, and she wrapped her fingers around the glass, letting the heat seep into her skin. She took a sip. It burned all the way down. Silas leaned against the back counter, arms crossed. "You going to tell me why you’re
really
here, Rory? Or are we just going to pretend this is a social call?" She opened her mouth, then closed it. The words stuck in her throat. Before she could answer, the door opened again. A gust of wind, a burst of laughter. Rory didn’t turn—she wasn’t interested in whoever had just walked in—but then she heard a voice that made her spine stiffen. "No fucking way." She
knew that voice
. Knew it like the back of her hand, like the sound of her own breath. Slowly, she turned. Evan stood in the doorway, rain dripping from his coat. He was taller than she remembered, broader. His hair was shorter, his jaw sharper. But his eyes—those were the same. Dark, intense, always searching. He grinned, and it was like looking at a ghost. "Rory Carter. I’ll be damned." Her fingers tightened around the glass. She could feel Silas watching her, could feel the
weight
of the years between them pressing down. "Evan," she said, and her voice didn’t shake. She
was proud
of that. He strode forward, shedding his coat like he owned the place. "What are the odds?" He clapped a hand on her shoulder, and she had to fight not to flinch. "How long has it been? Three years?" "Four," she corrected. "Four." He whistled, sliding onto the stool beside her. "Time flies, huh?" He glanced at Silas, then back at her. "You two know each other?" Silas’ expression was
unreadable
. "We’ve met." Evan laughed, loud enough that a few heads turned. "Small world." He flagged down Silas. "I’ll take whatever she’s having." Silas didn’t move. "ID." Evan blinked. "Seriously? You know how old I am." "Policy," Silas said flatly. Evan sighed but dug out his wallet. He slapped his ID on the counter, and Silas took his time examining it before pouring the drink. Evan snatched it up the second it was in front of him, taking a long swallow. "So," he said, turning back to Rory. "What have you been up to? Last I heard, you were in Cardiff." She took another sip of whiskey, buying time. "I moved. Obviously." "Obviously." He smirked. "Still running, then?" The glass nearly slipped from her fingers. She set it down
carefully
. "Not running. Living." "Right." He leaned in, close enough that she could smell the cologne he’d always worn—something woodsy, expensive. "You look good," he murmured. "Different, but good." She didn’t answer. The silence stretched, taut as a wire. Evan sighed and sat back. "Come on, Rory. Don’t be like that. We’re old friends, aren’t we?" "Are we?" His smile faltered. "Ouch." He took another drink. "You always did hold a grudge." She stared at him, at the man he’d become. The confidence in his posture, the ease with which he took up space. He wasn’t the boy she’d known. But then again, she wasn’t the girl she’d been, either. "You changed your hair," she said finally. He ran a hand through it, self-conscious for the first time. "Yeah. Needed a change, you know?" She did know. Better than most. Silas cleared his throat. "You two want another round, or are we done here?" Evan grinned. "Definitely another round. We’ve got catching up to do." He nudged Rory’s arm. "Right?" She looked at him—
really
looked at him—and saw the ghost of the boy she’d loved. The one who’d made her laugh, who’d held her when she cried. The one who’d left bruises on her wrists and called it love. She stood abruptly, tossing a few bills on the counter. "I should go." Evan’s smile vanished. "What? No, come on—" "Nice seeing you, Evan." She turned to Silas. "Thanks for the drink." Silas nodded, his gaze knowing. "Anytime, Rory." She didn’t look back as she walked out, the door swinging shut behind her. The rain had stopped, but the air was still thick with the promise of more. She took a deep breath, filling her lungs with the cold, clean scent of it. Four years. Four years, and he still thought he could walk back into her life like nothing had changed. She started down the street, her
footsteps
steady. This time, she
wasn’t running
. This time, she
was choosing
.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:23:39.522567+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:23:39 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"Silas said flatly [flatly]"
1
"he said, turning back to Rory [back]"
2
"she said finally [finally]"
59.7586%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
994
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"really"
count
2
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slowly"
2
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
69.8189%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
994
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"unreadable"
count
1
1
word
"weight"
count
1
2
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"unreadable"
1
"weight"
2
"footsteps"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
93
matches
0
"was proud"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
93
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
119
matches
0
"knew that voice"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
52
mean
18.92
std
15.64
cv
0.827
sampleLengths
0
76
1
48
2
22
3
31
4
20
5
9
6
10
7
42
8
10
9
30
10
13
11
37
12
3
13
19
14
3
15
34
16
15
17
23
18
13
19
37
20
3
21
25
22
6
23
20
24
4
25
9
26
4
27
61
28
11
29
6
30
15
31
25
32
10
33
17
34
2
35
14
36
38
37
7
38
17
39
6
40
14
41
16
42
39
43
13
44
7
45
12
46
7
47
44
48
19
49
8
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
93
matches
0
"was swallowed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
159
matches
0
"was polishing"
1
"wasn’t running"
2
"was choosing"
97.9514%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
803
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.04234122042341221
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.009962640099626401
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
119
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
119
mean
8.27
std
5.35
cv
0.647
sampleLengths
0
10
1
24
2
21
3
21
4
18
5
15
6
11
7
4
8
3
9
5
10
14
11
10
12
15
13
6
14
14
15
6
16
3
17
6
18
10
19
11
20
10
21
21
22
4
23
6
24
8
25
22
26
7
27
6
28
8
29
8
30
21
31
3
32
4
33
15
34
3
35
10
36
7
37
7
38
6
39
4
40
10
41
5
42
6
43
17
44
8
45
5
46
11
47
19
48
7
49
3
59.3838%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.3865546218487395
totalSentences
119
uniqueOpeners
46
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"Rory lied (lie)"
1
"he observed (observe)"
2
"she said, and her voice didn’t shake (say, does not shake)"
3
"she corrected (correct)"
4
"Silas said flatly (say flatly)"
5
"he said, turning back to Rory (say, turn)"
6
"he murmured (murmur)"
7
"she said finally (say finally)"
82.8903%