"she muttered under her breath, though she doubted even that phrase would stand up to scrutiny here [even]"
1
"Then came a whisper, low and intimate, curling its way into her ears, It echoed with an alluring sweetness, almost like a song beneath the notes of dread. [Then almost]"
2
"The tugging whisper became frantic, almost angry, The shadows grew more defined, darting just beyond her line of sight, but Rory refused to succumb. [almost more just]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1206
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
52
adverbRatio
0.04311774461028192
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.009950248756218905
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
72
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
72
mean
16.96
std
8.06
cv
0.475
sampleLengths
0
18
1
16
2
29
3
17
4
6
5
31
6
10
7
1
8
1
9
17
10
19
11
19
12
20
13
14
14
28
15
10
16
13
17
19
18
20
19
19
20
22
21
28
22
11
23
32
24
19
25
15
26
6
27
19
28
32
29
19
30
15
31
13
32
11
33
29
34
18
35
14
36
20
37
26
38
6
39
7
40
18
41
12
42
14
43
26
44
10
45
13
46
12
47
14
48
11
49
3
67.1296%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.4027777777777778
totalSentences
72
uniqueOpeners
29
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she muttered under her breath, though she doubted even that phrase would stand up to scrutiny here (mutter doubt even stand up)"
1
"Then came a whisper, low and intimate, curling its way into her ears, It echoed with an alluring sweetness, almost like a song beneath the notes of dread. (come echo almost like)"
2
"she murmured, her voice quaking against the surrounding stillness (murmur, quak)"
3
"she chastised herself, her voice steadying into steel (chastise steady)"
4
"she whispered, firming her stance, gathering the remnants of her will (whisper, firm gather will)"
5
"The tugging whisper became frantic, almost angry, The shadows grew more defined, darting just beyond her line of sight, but Rory refused to succumb. (become grow more refuse succumb)"