| 0.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "They'd found her body in the club storage closetLibrary, police reports and the owner's story of a recently hired dancer who'd been .The clubteens, Julieta Lopez was — 12, blonde hair, brown eyes.Quinn blamed the owner, Bruno acquiring fake IDs.\"There are no children and hooked some poor kid as an altar at DJ Soin's stripped singer of $87 all. [recently]" | | 1 | "Quinn reached for the bloodstained VR headset, Then it all goes vamanosPer savory, steaming borsht in dark g 감각蒂드ited together diamond ring in this clearing oeats laden with dark dontchedule Gonzalez's ballad of sour cream, home of our jalapeño petshop is godless cyberpunk [all]" |
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| 85.8757% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 708 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.5028% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 708 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "satin" | | 2 | "dancing" | | 3 | "echoes" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 50.21 | | std | 28.98 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 66 | | 11 | 98 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 118 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 598 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "conscious drug-addled clubigion" |
| | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.01839464882943144 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008361204013377926 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 34 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 34 | | mean | 20.68 | | std | 21.83 | | cv | 1.056 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 66 | | 30 | 98 | | 31 | 65 | | 32 | 60 | | 33 | 58 |
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| 88.2353% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5294117647058824 | | totalSentences | 34 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the primary medical examiner said, holding up the enema bag (say, holding up)" | | 1 | "They'd found her body in the club storage closetLibrary, police reports and the owner's story of a recently hired dancer who'd been .The clubteens, Julieta Lopez was — 12, blonde hair, brown eyes.Quinn blamed the owner, Bruno acquiring fake IDs.\"There are no children and hooked some poor kid as an altar at DJ Soin's stripped singer of $87 all. (find police recently hire be is—blame acquire be hook strip)" | | 2 | "Quinn reached for the bloodstained VR headset, Then it all goes vamanosPer savory, steaming borsht in dark g 감각蒂드ited together diamond ring in this clearing oeats laden with dark dontchedule Gonzalez's ballad of sour cream, home of our jalapeño petshop is godless cyberpunk (reach bloodstain all go 감각蒂드ited ring be)" |
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