| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.636 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.43% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "truly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "surreal" | | 3 | "sense of" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "navigating" | | 7 | "otherworldly" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "resolve" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "echoing" | | 17 | "flicker" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "gloom" | | 20 | "intensity" | | 21 | "down her spine" | | 22 | "racing" | | 23 | "encounter" | | 24 | "weight" | | 25 | "depths" | | 26 | "tinged" | | 27 | "echo" | | 28 | "comforting" |
| |
| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
|
| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" |
| |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 36.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1207 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1112 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | London | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.691 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if whispering secrets to one another" | | 1 | "sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 2 | "as if considering her words, before stepping into the moonlight" | | 3 | "murmur that seemed to resonate within the grove" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1207 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.03% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 46.42 | | std | 19.64 | | cv | 0.423 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 77 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1114 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay warm against her" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.026032315978456014 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010771992818671455 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 62.74% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 17 | | std | 5.22 | | cv | 0.307 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
| |
| 45.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.2676056338028169 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the edge" | | 1 | "She shook off the feeling," | | 2 | "Her footsteps were soft on" | | 3 | "She moved with the quiet" | | 4 | "She squinted into the shadows," | | 5 | "Her mind raced, conjuring images" | | 6 | "she muttered to herself, her" | | 7 | "She continued forward, each step" | | 8 | "It was a haunting tune," | | 9 | "she called, her voice steady" | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "she demanded, her voice firm" | | 12 | "It was a woman, her" | | 13 | "Her eyes, dark and fathomless," | | 14 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 15 | "She felt exposed, as if" | | 16 | "She had come here seeking" | | 17 | "She turned, her steps sure" |
| | ratio | 0.269 | |
| 12.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air clung to" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "Rory, as her friends called" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant, a deep" | | 4 | "She paused at the edge" | | 5 | "The wildflowers, impossibly vibrant even" | | 6 | "Rory's bright blue eyes scanned" | | 7 | "The grove was silent, save" | | 8 | "She shook off the feeling," | | 9 | "Her footsteps were soft on" | | 10 | "She moved with the quiet" | | 11 | "The pendant's warmth intensified as" | | 12 | "Rory's fingers brushed against the" | | 13 | "The scar was a reminder" | | 14 | "A sudden rustling in the" | | 15 | "The sound was too deliberate," | | 16 | "She squinted into the shadows," | | 17 | "Her mind raced, conjuring images" | | 18 | "she muttered to herself, her" | | 19 | "The sound seemed to hang" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, beneath the surface, a" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant, a deep crimson gem on a silver chain, lay warm against her chest, pulsing faintly as if in response to some unseen force." | | 1 | "The wildflowers, impossibly vibrant even in the dim light, swayed gently as if whispering secrets to one another." | | 2 | "Yet, beneath the surface, a sense of wrongness prickled at her skin, a subtle dissonance that set her nerves on edge." | | 3 | "But here, in this otherworldly place, her presence felt intrusive, as if she were an unwelcome guest at a private gathering." | | 4 | "Her mind raced, conjuring images of creatures that might inhabit this Fae-touched realm, beings that defied the logic of the world she knew." | | 5 | "The standing stones formed a loose circle around a central clearing, their surfaces etched with runes that glimmered faintly in the moonlight." | | 6 | "The pendant's glow brightened, casting eerie shadows that danced across the ground." | | 7 | "The figure paused, as if considering her words, before stepping into the moonlight." | | 8 | "Her eyes, dark and fathomless, met Rory's with an intensity that sent a shiver down her spine." | | 9 | "The woman moved with an ethereal grace, her form shifting and blurring at the edges as if she were not entirely of this world." | | 10 | "She felt exposed, as if the woman could see into the depths of her soul, uncovering truths she had yet to acknowledge." | | 11 | "Rory nodded, her resolve hardening despite the fear that gnawed at her insides." | | 12 | "Rory gasped, the warmth spreading through her chest, filling her with a sense of purpose." |
| |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her voice barely more than a whisper" | | 1 | "she called, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice barely more than a whisper" | | 3 | "the woman said, her voice fading like a distant echo" |
| |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.636 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |