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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGWGEF3HSJWV2027FKDQP
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
33.8s
Cost:
$0.000900
Provider:
Novita
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The Raven's Nest was as she remembered it: dimly lit, with the same old maps and black-and-white photographs plastering the walls.
The air was thick with
the scent of whiskey and old books, and the low hum of conversation filtered through the room. Aurora, now known as Rory, slid onto a barstool, her shoulders hunched
slightly
from the day's deliveries. She ordered a glass of whiskey, grateful for the familiar routine, the familiar faces. It was then that she saw him—Silas Blackwood, the retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He was leaning against the counter, his hazel eyes scanning the room with an air of quiet authority. His grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard gave him a distinguished look, and the silver signet ring on his right hand glinted in the dim light. Despite the years, his presence still commanded respect and a sense of security. "Evening, Rory," Silas greeted her with a nod, his voice warm and gravelly. "Hey, Silas," she replied, her voice
tinged
with a mix of relief and weariness. "Rough day?" He chuckled, a deep, resonant sound. "You're not the only one with a job, you know. But you always manage to look like you've carried the
weight
of the world on your shoulders." Rory forced a laugh, swirling the amber liquid in her glass. "It's the deliveries. They pile up, and sometimes I feel like I'm drowning in them." Silas leaned in closer, his eyes softening. "You're stronger than you think, Rory. You always have been." She nodded, taking a sip of her drink. The whiskey burned its way down her throat, warming her from the inside. She relished the moment, letting the familiar taste and the comforting presence of Silas soothe her frazzled nerves. Just as she was about to say something more, a voice cut through the din of the bar. A voice she hadn't heard in years, a voice that still
resonated
with a mix of longing and regret. "Aurora?" Rory's head snapped up, and her heart skipped a beat. There, standing a few feet away, was Evan. He had changed—his hair was shorter, his jawline more pronounced, and there was a seriousness in his eyes that hadn't been there before. But despite the years, she could still see the boy she had once known, the boy who had once been her world. "Evan," she whispered, the name catching in her throat. He took a step closer, his expression a mix of relief and caution. "It's been a long time. I didn't think I'd ever see you again." Rory felt a myriad of emotions flood through her—surprise,
apprehension
, and an overwhelming sense of deja vu. She remembered the days when they had been inseparable, the late-night conversations, the shared dreams. But she also remembered the pain, the betrayal, the darkness that had grown between them. "Too long," she finally
managed to
say, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside. Silas, sensing the tension, placed a hand on Rory's shoulder. "Give me a moment," he said, his voice low and understanding. He moved away, giving them some space. Evan took the seat beside her, his gaze never leaving her face. "You look ... well," he said, his voice hesitant. "Better than I expected." Rory forced a smile, though it felt foreign on her lips. "Thanks. You look good too. Different, but good." Evan nodded, his fingers playing with the edge of the bar. "London's been good to me. I've been working for a private security firm. It's a far cry from the old days, but it keeps me busy." Rory's mind flashed back to the past, to the nights when they had talked about their futures, their dreams. She had always known he
was destined
for something more, something bigger than their small town in Wales. But the darkness had seeped in, and their dreams had
been tarnished
by the reality of their relationship. "I'm glad you found something that suits you," she said, her voice sincere. He met her gaze, his eyes searching hers. "And you? How have you been? I heard you were living above Silas' bar." Rory felt a
pang
of defensiveness. "Yeah, I'm doing fine. I work part-time for a restaurant. It's a simple life, but it's mine." Evan's expression softened. "I'm glad. You deserve a simple, honest life. I just ... I'm sorry, Aurora. For everything." The
weight
of his apology settled between them, heavy and
unspoken
. Rory had carried the scars of their past for years, the pain of betrayal and the loss of trust. She had left him, fled to London, and never looked back. But here he
was, standing
in front of her, offering an olive branch. "I know," she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "And I forgive you, Evan. I had to. For my own sanity." He nodded, the tension in his shoulders easing
slightly
. "Thank you. I've been thinking a lot about the past, about what we were. I miss those days, you know? The days before everything fell apart." Rory took another sip of her whiskey, feeling the liquid smooth over the rough edges of her emotions. "Me too. But we can't live in the past, Evan. We have to move forward." He looked at her, his eyes filled with a mix of admiration and regret. "You're right. You always have been. You've always had a way of seeing through the fog, of finding a path forward. I missed that about you." Rory smiled, a genuine smile this time. "I missed you too, Evan. But things are different now. We're different." Evan nodded, a bittersweet smile playing on his lips. "Yes, we are. But maybe, just maybe, we can still be friends. If you're willing." Rory felt a warmth spread through her, a sense of closure. "I'd like that. A lot." They sat in a comfortable silence for a moment, the
weight
of the past lifting
slightly
. Silas returned, a knowing look in his eyes. He placed a fresh whiskey in front of Rory and a glass of water for Evan. "Sometimes, the past haunts us," Silas said, his voice low and thoughtful. "But it's in the present where we find the strength to move forward." Rory met Evan's gaze, and for the first time in years, she saw the boy she had once loved, the man he had become, and the potential for a new beginning. They clinked glasses, a silent toast to the future. "To new beginnings," Rory said, her voice steady and hopeful. Evan smiled, raising his glass. "To new beginnings."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
33.3333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"Silas greeted her with a nod, his voice warm and gravelly [gravelly]"
1
"she finally managed to say, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside [finally]"
2
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
63.6694%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
3
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
27.3388%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1101
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"pang"
count
1
1
word
"tinged"
count
1
2
word
"resonated"
count
1
3
word
"unspoken"
count
1
4
word
"apprehension"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
3
highlights
0
"pang"
1
"tinged"
2
"resonated"
3
"unspoken"
4
"apprehension"
5
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
61
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
61
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"managed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
82
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
29.59
std
17.32
cv
0.585
sampleLengths
0
74
1
73
2
13
3
16
4
33
5
26
6
17
7
39
8
37
9
1
10
63
11
9
12
26
13
47
14
14
15
28
16
25
17
19
18
37
19
55
20
13
21
22
22
23
23
19
24
54
25
22
26
35
27
33
28
40
29
19
30
24
31
16
32
40
33
25
34
40
35
10
36
8
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"was destined"
1
"been tarnished"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
113
matches
0
"was, standing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
789
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.02788339670468948
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.010139416983523447
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
82
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
82
mean
13.35
std
6.11
cv
0.458
sampleLengths
0
21
1
22
2
17
3
14
4
15
5
18
6
27
7
13
8
13
9
14
10
2
11
6
12
27
13
11
14
15
15
7
16
10
17
8
18
13
19
18
20
18
21
19
22
1
23
10
24
8
25
23
26
22
27
9
28
13
29
13
30
17
31
15
32
15
33
14
34
10
35
11
36
7
37
12
38
9
39
4
40
11
41
8
42
11
43
26
44
19
45
18
46
18
47
13
48
8
49
14
63.8211%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.3902439024390244
totalSentences
82
uniqueOpeners
32
75.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"Silas greeted her with a nod, his voice warm and gravelly (greet)"
1
"she replied, her voice tinged with a mix of relief and weariness (reply, tinged)"
2
"she whispered, the name catching in her throat (whisper, catch)"
3
"she finally managed to say, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside (finally manage say)"
86.0684%