Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGYJNENWVJ1CSTNJJRSXT

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wind carried a chill as Aurora Carter stepped off the main path in Richmond Park, her boots sinking slightly into the dew-damp earth. The narrow trail wound through trees thick with shadows, their branches reaching out like skeletal fingers in the moonlight. She pulled her leather jacket tighter around herself, the faint metallic sound of the zipper breaking the nocturnal silence. Rory glanced back once, the receding glow of the park's lampposts like distant stars in the enveloping blackness. Ahead, the trees thickened until they formed an impenetrable wall. Somewhere beyond lay the Fae Grove, a hidden clearing caught in the perpetual dance between her world and another, where wildflowers defied seasons and time twisted like a living thing. Round her neck, the Heartstone Pendant rested cool against her skin, its deep crimson stone catching the silver gleam of moonlight. Rory felt its faint warmth pulsing slightly, as if keeping rhythm with her increasingly erratic heartbeat. Given to her by an anonymous benefactor, the pendant was supposed to serve its purpose tonight — a guide and a warning. She moved forward, feet leaving barely a trace in the carpet of fallen leaves, their russet hues turned charcoal in the dark. The air felt thick here, cloying, pressing in on her as if the very atmosphere was observing her trespass. A bird, startled from its perch, darted overhead with a rustle of wings, drawing Rory's attention. Her eyes followed its trajectory before reality snapped back into focus. She shook her head, trying to dislodge the eerie feeling that had settled at the base of her spine. At the grove's boundary, marked by ancient oaks twisted into natural totems, time's fluid nature became palpable. Each slow, deliberate step felt both eternal and fleeting. Here, the world might age at its own capricious whim — minutes blurring into hours, hours evaporating into minutes. As Rory navigated between the stones, her sharp blue gaze picked out details in the grooved bark that seemed to ripple like water under her scrutiny. Somewhere in the distance, an owl hooted, the sound low and mournful. The grove opened up before her, a large clearing bathed in silver, an ethereal wonderland where wildflowers thrived defiantly against winter's creeping tide. Yet, despite its beauty, something felt wrong. A distortion in the air, a ripple of reality that unnerved her fundamentally. The wind stilled completely, leaving a hush so profound it muffled even Rory's breath. She hesitated on the threshold, instinct twitching just beneath her skin. She’d come for answers — for answers was she willing to brave this uncanny lull? There was, she realized, a palpable absence. No hum of insects, no rustling of leaves. Silence wrapped the grove, oppressive and watchful. She felt the tiniest of vibrations in the pendant, as if warning her of an impending presence. Shoving caution into the part of her brain reserved for future regrets, Rory moved inward, the whisper of her steps swallowed by the surrounding hush. She walked, scanning the moonlit clearing, each step deliberate. Her childhood shadowed by Evan, the tremor of past pain ever lingering, emboldened her resolve. A sudden movement caught her eye — a flicker at the periphery of her vision. Startled, she turned sharply, her black hair swinging like a pendulum. Nothing. No movement, save for the subtle quiver of flowers bowing to an unfelt breeze. Her mind raced, picking apart the sensation. Was it merely the trickery of tired eyes or had something actually moved? She cast her focus wider, the silence now punctuated by the insistent thud of her heart. The Heartstone Pendant pressed against her skin, its glow pulsing gently, a beacon in the darkness. Rory resisted the irrational urge to discard it, knowing instinctively it was both her guide and her anchor. Overhead, clouds slid across the sky, framing the moon in soft, dark fingers. Its pale glow shifted, subtly transforming the landscape. Briefly, the grove seemed to twist, the ancient oaks looming menacingly. Again, another shadow flicked past, playful and just beyond reach. Rory clenched her fists, nails biting into palms, fighting to maintain her composure. Panic rose, hot and insistent, a primal urge to run, flee this place with its imposing stillness. But then she remembered why she was there — memories of whispered legends, of paths between worlds and the tangle of her own past mingling with otherworldly secrets. Perhaps here lay answers tied to the pendant and its mysterious bearer. She turned towards a central point in the clearing where the ground rose gently, a mound adorned with blooming unknowns. Though absence waited alongside her or within her, something else lured her focus — a presence felt more than seen. There, she was certain she would find what she sought. A twig snapped suddenly behind her. Rory spun around, breath caught in her throat. Shadows stretched toward her, taunting those edges again, stretching long and thin in the moonlight before retreating. Instinct screamed that things not seen could still be watching. She inhaled deeply, grounding herself. Her father's voice echoed through time, recounting stories of courts and trade, diplomacy in threats — everything a tactic. This was her courtroom now; she must tread its intricacies with finesse and precision. Ignoring the rising sense of dread, she took a determined step forward. She felt their gaze, cold and hungry, already weaving a cocoon of anticipation around her resolve. Rory clung to her singular certainty — every fear confronted carved a path closer to the truth. Moonlight gathered ahead, pooling thick on the mound's surface where a single stone lay, its surface unblemished, untouched by time. As Rory approached, the stone seemed to exude a luminescent aura, its pale light drawing out the crimson kernal of Heartstone's hue. The pendant warmed against her chest, the pulse steadying. Rory halted, her breath exiting in quiet plumes, a mix of anticipation and resolve. Here, within the heart of the grove, a bridge perhaps awaited, a fleeting tether across realms. Stepping reverently, she settled before the stone. Her fingers brushed along the cool surface. The solid reality grounded her amidst the lurking shadows that watched with silent intent. Time sighed in rhythm with her breath, the grove's flow bending to her presence, its ancient guardians murmuring secrets she's yet to fathom. Alone, she whispered into the stillness, seeking... though what she sought even she could no longer name. Sound returned with a symphony of whispers, wind threading through the treetops. Rory pushed back the doubt crawling like insects beneath her skin. There, amidst what felt like waiting eyes and bending timelines, she made a silent vow — a promise born of night terror and hope. As the Heartstone glowed with renewed intensity, something stirred beyond the veil. Rory leaned into what she knew would follow — the revealing, the finding, the searing truth stashed at the cusp of dream and proved real by her heartbeat alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
30.1310% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"gently"
2"sharply"
3"slightly"
4"suddenly"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"palpable"
count2
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"symphony"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count1
9
word"uncanny"
count1
10
word"looming"
count1
11
word"imposing"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"anticipation"
count2
14
word"dance"
count1
15
word"amidst"
count2
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"ethereal"
2"symphony"
3"beacon"
4"searing"
5"flicker"
6"flicked"
7"oppressive"
8"otherworldly"
9"uncanny"
10"looming"
11"imposing"
12"profound"
13"anticipation"
14"dance"
15"amidst"
16"echoed"
17"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"screamed that things"
8.1047% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean42.74
std7.62
cv0.178
sampleLengths
062
158
259
341
446
545
638
743
840
939
1049
1141
1236
1334
1432
1540
1640
1750
1841
1938
2045
2142
2239
2328
2440
2547
2641
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was supposed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was observing"
99.0830% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1145
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.04104803493449782
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.017467248908296942
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean14.79
std6.04
cv0.408
sampleLengths
024
119
219
318
410
530
621
716
822
922
1019
1116
1211
1319
1417
159
1619
1726
1812
1923
207
2113
2214
2311
2415
257
268
277
2817
2925
309
3115
3215
3311
341
3514
367
3713
3816
3916
4018
4113
428
4311
4410
4513
4617
4728
4812
4920
78.6325% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.48717948717948717
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners38
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
83.2912%