| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 65.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1144 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1144 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "dance" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "palpable" | | 5 | "fleeting" | | 6 | "navigated" | | 7 | "profound" | | 8 | "uncanny" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "resolve" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "beacon" | | 16 | "looming" | | 17 | "flicked" | | 18 | "imposing" | | 19 | "otherworldly" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "sense of" | | 22 | "determined" | | 23 | "anticipation" | | 24 | "pulse" | | 25 | "amidst" | | 26 | "symphony" | | 27 | "intensity" | | 28 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1154 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Alone, she whispered into the stillness, seeking..." |
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| 89.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1154 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rory | 14 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.893 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if keeping rhythm with her increasingly erratic heartbeat" | | 1 | "bark that seemed to ripple like water under her scrutiny" | | 2 | "as if warning her of an impending presence" | | 3 | "felt like waiting eyes and bending time" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 8.10% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 42.74 | | std | 7.62 | | cv | 0.178 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "Given to her by an anonymous benefactor, the pendant was supposed to serve its purpose tonight — a guide and a warning." | | 1 | "Here, the world might age at its own capricious whim — minutes blurring into hours, hours evaporating into minutes." | | 2 | "She’d come for answers — for answers was she willing to brave this uncanny lull?" | | 3 | "A sudden movement caught her eye — a flicker at the periphery of her vision." | | 4 | "But then she remembered why she was there — memories of whispered legends, of paths between worlds and the tangle of her own past mingling with otherworldly secrets." | | 5 | "Though absence waited alongside her or within her, something else lured her focus — a presence felt more than seen." | | 6 | "Her father's voice echoed through time, recounting stories of courts and trade, diplomacy in threats — everything a tactic." | | 7 | "This was her courtroom now; she must tread its intricacies with finesse and precision." | | 8 | "Rory clung to her singular certainty — every fear confronted carved a path closer to the truth." | | 9 | "There, amidst what felt like waiting eyes and bending timelines, she made a silent vow — a promise born of night terror and hope." | | 10 | "Rory leaned into what she knew would follow — the revealing, the finding, the searing truth stashed at the cusp of dream and proved real by her heartbeat alone." |
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| 99.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1145 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.04104803493449782 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017467248908296942 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 14.79 | | std | 6.04 | | cv | 0.408 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 78.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.48717948717948717 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond lay the Fae" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, an" | | 2 | "Briefly, the grove seemed to" | | 3 | "Again, another shadow flicked past," | | 4 | "Perhaps here lay answers tied" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her leather jacket" | | 1 | "She moved forward, feet leaving" | | 2 | "Her eyes followed its trajectory" | | 3 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 4 | "She hesitated on the threshold," | | 5 | "She’d come for answers —" | | 6 | "She felt the tiniest of" | | 7 | "She walked, scanning the moonlit" | | 8 | "Her childhood shadowed by Evan," | | 9 | "Her mind raced, picking apart" | | 10 | "She cast her focus wider," | | 11 | "Its pale glow shifted, subtly" | | 12 | "She turned towards a central" | | 13 | "She inhaled deeply, grounding herself." | | 14 | "Her father's voice echoed through" | | 15 | "She felt their gaze, cold" | | 16 | "Her fingers brushed along the" |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind carried a chill" | | 1 | "The narrow trail wound through" | | 2 | "She pulled her leather jacket" | | 3 | "Rory glanced back once, the" | | 4 | "Rory felt its faint warmth" | | 5 | "She moved forward, feet leaving" | | 6 | "The air felt thick here," | | 7 | "A bird, startled from its" | | 8 | "Her eyes followed its trajectory" | | 9 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 10 | "Each slow, deliberate step felt" | | 11 | "Here, the world might age" | | 12 | "The grove opened up before" | | 13 | "A distortion in the air," | | 14 | "The wind stilled completely, leaving" | | 15 | "She hesitated on the threshold," | | 16 | "She’d come for answers —" | | 17 | "Silence wrapped the grove, oppressive" | | 18 | "She felt the tiniest of" | | 19 | "She walked, scanning the moonlit" |
| | ratio | 0.649 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, despite its beauty, something" | | 1 | "Though absence waited alongside her" | | 2 | "though what she sought even" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 85.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt its faint warmth pulsing slightly, as if keeping rhythm with her increasingly erratic heartbeat." | | 1 | "The air felt thick here, cloying, pressing in on her as if the very atmosphere was observing her trespass." | | 2 | "As Rory navigated between the stones, her sharp blue gaze picked out details in the grooved bark that seemed to ripple like water under her scrutiny." | | 3 | "She felt the tiniest of vibrations in the pendant, as if warning her of an impending presence." | | 4 | "Time sighed in rhythm with her breath, the grove's flow bending to her presence, its ancient guardians murmuring secrets she's yet to fathom." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |