Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPH3RQ84M76DWAS2G2363F

Run Details

Duration:
34.5s
Cost:
$0.017263
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green glow of The Raven’s Nest sign flickered against the drizzle-slicked sidewalks of Soho, transforming the night into a haze of damp luminescence. The door creaked slightly as Aurora Carter slipped inside, shaking raindrops from her black hair. She glanced around the dimly lit interior; the familiar scent of aged wood and something sharper—perhaps gin—lingered in the air. Maps and photographs clung to the walls, holding the stories of forgotten times and places between their paper fibers. “Rory! Mind the weather, d’ye?” Silas Blackwood greeted her from behind the bar, his voice keeping the warmth of whisky on a cold night. His hazel eyes flicked knowingly to the heavens beyond the window before returning to her, a ghost of a smile tugging at the corner of his lips. Despite the years and the retirement into the shadows of his own realm, he remained master of this domain, his authority lingering just beneath the surface of his easy demeanor. “Just the usual downpour, Silas,” Rory replied, her own smile a quicksilver flicker, barely visible before she crossed the room, her boots padding silently over the polished floor. “Looks like the Nest hasn’t changed a bit.” “That’s by design,” Silas chuckled, sliding a pint across the bar. “Drink’s on the house tonight. Not every day we get to celebrate an auspicious occasion.” “What occasion?” Rory lifted an eyebrow, curiosity piquing in her bright blue eyes. Before Silas could answer, the door swung open with a gust of cold air and wetness. For a moment, Rory’s attention shifted, only to snap back with electric shock as the newcomer’s presence filled the space. It was a face she had not seen in years—a face she hadn’t quite known she missed until now, with high cheekbones and eyes like shards of ice—changed, yes, but undeniably familiar. There, framed by the sallow light from the street, stood Eva Thomas, her once fiery auburn hair now a subdued copper, woven into an intricate braid that fell over one shoulder. Her presence resonated with an authority that hadn’t been there before, a confidence carved by unseen battles and silent victories. “Rory...” Eva’s voice broke the air's tension—a delicate thread tying the past to this unexpected present. “Eva,” Rory managed, feeling the warmth from her pint seep into her fingers, a grounding sensation in an otherwise tilted world. She wanted to say more, to bridge the years with words that eluded her, words heavy with the weight of unspoken regret and uncelebrated triumphs. Eva approached, her footfalls rhythmic and purposeful. The silent language of old friends seeped into the space between them, telling of changes unseen and stories untold. Rory watched the other woman’s approach with a mix of anticipation and the slightest hint of apprehension. Silas, perceptive as ever, quietly excused himself to the back, leaving the two women alone amidst the world-weary patrons of The Raven’s Nest. “How long has it been?” Eva asked once close enough, her voice wrapped in the soft burr of Welsh vowels. “Seven years, give or take,” Rory replied, tilting her head slightly, her attention focused solely on the woman before her. Eva nodded, her expression softening into a smile that felt like a shared secret. “Too long, definitely.” Rory gestured toward the bar stool beside her, inviting. Eva took the seat, resting her own hands, now ringless—a change Rory noticed with a brief flick of her gaze—upon the worn surface of the bar. “You look well, Rory,” Eva said, genuine admiration coloring her words. “So do you… Eva,” Rory responded, the careful drop of her friend’s name carrying both meaning and history. For a moment, silence enveloped them—comfortable yet filled with the echoes of a decade-long story, retold in the quiet spaces between breaths. Rory took a sip of her drink, the bitter liquid trailing warmth down her throat as she watched Eva from over the rim of the glass. “London suits you?” Eva inquired, more statement than question. Rory shrugged, a fluid motion she’d mastered to mask uncertainty. “It’s a world of opportunities… and challenges.” “Challenges?” Eva’s inflection lifted at the end, inviting further explanation. “Just life,” Rory replied, the phrase heavier than its two syllables. Images flickered through her mind’s eye—late nights delivering meals to faceless clients, the quiet loneliness of her flat above Silas’s bar, the palpable absence of one Evan, the man who now belonged to the shadows of her past. Eva, sensing the unspoken truths, nodded gently, offering an understanding Rory had once relied upon. Days long past when Eva had been her confidante, her solace. “And you? Seems like someone came out of a battle,” Rory said, alluding to the change in Eva’s demeanor, a warrior-like elegance tempered by some unseen fire. “Oh, plenty of battles, small victories…” Eva paused, a fondness in her gaze, as if recalling moments cherished and battles fought with purpose. “Took a position at a non-profit in Hastings.” “The one you always talked about?” “Yeah,” Eva smiled, wistful. “Been doing outreach, working with marginalized communities.” “Sounds like you’ve found your calling,” Rory commented, respect interwoven with her words. “Maybe,” Eva admitted softly, “but it’s challenging to balance the world’s needs against one’s own.” “Anyone special?” Rory finally dared to ask, curiosity prodding where she hadn’t dared before. Eva hesitated, the truth glinting momentarily in her eyes. “Not really,” she replied, her tone carefully neutral. Then, yielding to Rory’s slight frown, she added, softly, “Too complicated. Life has a way of taking the things I can’t quite hold onto.” Rory, understanding, nodded slowly. “I suppose it does.” They both fell silent once more, the weight of time between them withering beneath the gentle spell of acceptance. The bar around them continued its quiet hum of life—the clinking glasses, murmured conversations; a tapestry of simple existence. Silas returned then, bearing a knowing smile and his nimble grace despite the limp in his step. He busied himself, a silent guardian of sorts, aware of the intangible moment taking shape between the two women. Rory leaned toward Eva, a whisper of a smile threading her features. “Feels like we’ve both changed so much.” Eva met her gaze, light dancing across her irises, acknowledgment and memories shared in that enduring bond. “Change isn’t always a bad thing, Rory. We grow, we adapt... perhaps, that’s the gift time gives us.” A faint laugh escaped Rory, genuine and unguarded. “Of all the things to be grateful for,” she said, her gaze steady, full of a newfound confidence she hadn’t known she still possessed. They raised their glasses in silent toast, the clinking glass a small act of defiance against the passing years and quiet struggles, a testament to friendship reclaimed and promises of stories yet to be written. In the soft light of The Raven’s Nest, sheltered from the night’s chill, Rory and Eva found a fragile but genuine haven—a place where time folded upon itself, knitting together the torn threads of their shared history.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
8.3333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"Rory replied, her own smile a quicksilver flicker, barely visible before she crossed the room, her boots padding silently over the polished floor [barely silently]"
1"Rory replied, tilting her head slightly, her attention focused solely on the woman before her [slightly, solely]"
2"Eva admitted softly [softly]"
3"she replied, her tone carefully neutral [carefully]"
4"Then, yielding to Rory’s slight frown, she added, softly, [Then, softly,]"
5"she said, her gaze steady, full of a newfound confidence she hadn’t known she still possessed [still]"
23.4043% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"knowingly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count2
6
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"knowingly"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
5"softly"
6"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"testament"
count1
3
word"resonated"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"newfound"
count1
11
word"solace"
count1
12
word"anticipation"
count1
13
word"apprehension"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"amidst"
count1
17
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"tapestry"
2"testament"
3"resonated"
4"flickered"
5"flicker"
6"flicked"
7"glinting"
8"unspoken"
9"intricate"
10"newfound"
11"solace"
12"anticipation"
13"apprehension"
14"weight"
15"dancing"
16"amidst"
17"echoes"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean29.74
std18.36
cv0.617
sampleLengths
079
181
236
326
413
568
651
716
846
943
1023
1120
1220
1317
1435
1511
1618
1748
189
1917
2010
2149
2226
2327
2431
256
2611
2713
2815
2914
3041
318
3238
3336
3419
3535
3632
3735
3837
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount988
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.039473684210526314
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01720647773279352
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean17.06
std8.37
cv0.491
sampleLengths
025
115
220
319
424
527
630
728
88
911
1015
1113
1216
1320
1432
1531
1620
1716
1821
1925
207
2119
2217
2323
2420
2520
2614
273
289
2926
3011
3118
3222
3326
349
3510
367
3710
3811
3938
4015
4111
4227
4323
448
456
464
477
4813
4915
98.5294% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6617647058823529
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners45
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Rory replied, her own smile a quicksilver flicker, barely visible before she crossed the room, her boots padding silently over the polished floor (reply, cross pad silently)"
1"Silas chuckled, sliding a pint across the bar (chuckle, slide)"
2"Rory managed, feeling the warmth from her pint seep into her fingers, a grounding sensation in an otherwise tilted world (manage, feel tilt)"
3"Rory replied, tilting her head slightly, her attention focused solely on the woman before her (reply, tilt focus solely)"
4"Eva said, genuine admiration coloring her words (say, coloring)"
5"Rory responded, the careful drop of her friend’s name carrying both meaning and history (respond, carry)"
6"inquired (inquire)"
7"Rory said, alluding to the change in Eva’s demeanor, a warrior-like elegance tempered by some unseen fire (say, allude temper)"
8"Eva smiled, wistful (smile)"
9"Rory commented, respect interwoven with her words (comment, interwoven)"
10"Eva admitted softly (admit softly)"
11"Then, yielding to Rory’s slight frown, she added, softly, (yield add)"
12"she said, her gaze steady, full of a newfound confidence she hadn’t known she still possessed (say, does have not still possess)"
78.2510%