| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 792 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 792 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "footfall" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "looming" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "unraveling" | | 6 | "calculating" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 795 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.69% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 795 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 6 | | Earth | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.997 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "accident that seemed to mock her now" | | 1 | "felt like the very fabric of reality wa" | | 2 | "seemed rooted to the spot, her gaze drawn inexorably back to the standing stones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 795 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.74% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "told that time" | | 1 | "realized that she" |
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| 1.57% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 61.15 | | std | 9.51 | | cv | 0.156 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 69 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 45 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "been warned" | | 1 | "been told" |
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| 5.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was happening" | | 2 | "was unraveling" | | 3 | "was being" |
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| 18.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "The first sound came from behind her – the soft crunch of gravel beneath footfall." | | 1 | "The sounds – the crunching gravel, the swaying branch – grew louder, more intense, until it felt like the very fabric of reality was unraveling around her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 796 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03768844221105527 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011306532663316583 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 46 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 73.01% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 46 | | mean | 17.28 | | std | 5.75 | | cv | 0.333 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 11 |
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| 43.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.2608695652173913 | | totalSentences | 46 | | uniqueOpeners | 12 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been warned not" | | 1 | "She had been told that" | | 2 | "She took a step back," | | 3 | "She was alone in the" | | 4 | "It was nothing, just the" | | 5 | "She turned her attention to" | | 6 | "Her hand drifted to the" | | 7 | "She took a step back," | | 8 | "It was a presence, a" | | 9 | "She knew she had to" | | 10 | "It was tall, impossibly tall," | | 11 | "She knew, in that moment," |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 46.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 1 | "She had been warned not" | | 2 | "The wind rustled the wildflowers" | | 3 | "She had been told that" | | 4 | "The clock read 9:47 PM," | | 5 | "A faint humming noise, like" | | 6 | "Aurora's gaze swept the clearing," | | 7 | "The air seemed to thicken," | | 8 | "She took a step back," | | 9 | "The first sound came from" | | 10 | "Aurora spun around, her heart" | | 11 | "The crunch came again, louder" | | 12 | "This was not right." | | 13 | "She was alone in the" | | 14 | "A branch on a nearby" | | 15 | "It was nothing, just the" | | 16 | "Something was watching her, waiting" | | 17 | "She turned her attention to" | | 18 | "The energy emanating from them" | | 19 | "Her hand drifted to the" |
| | ratio | 0.826 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind rustled the wildflowers that bloomed year-round, releasing a sweet, heady scent that caught in her throat." | | 1 | "But as she glanced down at her phone, the screen's glow illuminated the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood accident that seemed…" | | 2 | "The humming noise grew louder, a low vibration that began to rattle her teeth." | | 3 | "She took a step back, her eyes darting around the clearing in a desperate bid to find some clue, some sign that would tell her what was happening." | | 4 | "The pendant on her chest seemed to be growing warmer, its glow intensifying as if it sensed the same threat." | | 5 | "Aurora's breath caught, her fingers instinctively curling around the pendant's chain as if it might anchor her to the world." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |