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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPH73PZ6WEPJ9XP2H23BBD
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
40.6s
Cost:
$0.001029
Provider:
Novita
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The door to The Raven's Nest swung open with a soft creak, and a gust of cold autumn air swept through the dimly lit bar. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stepped inside, her black hair tousled from the wind. She paused, allowing her eyes to adjust to the low light. The walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs,
seemed to
whisper stories of the past. The bar's distinctive green neon sign pulsed above the entrance, casting a soft glow. Rory scanned the room, her bright blue eyes searching for a familiar face. She spotted Silas Blackwood behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair neatly trimmed, and a neat beard matching his hair. His right hand, adorned with a silver signet ring, expertly poured a whiskey. Her heart warmed at the sight of him. Silas had always been a grounding presence, a steady hand in the tumultuous currents of her life. "Evening, Rory," Silas called out, his voice carrying a quiet authority. "The usual?" She nodded, making her way to her usual spot at the bar. As she sat down, her fingers brushed against the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident long left behind. Silas set a glass of her favorite whiskey in front of her, the amber liquid reflecting the neon light. "Thanks, Si," she said, lifting the glass in a small toast. She took a sip, savoring the familiar burn. The bar was relatively quiet, the muffled hum of conversation and the occasional clink of glasses providing a comforting backdrop. "Long day?" Silas asked, leaning against the bar. Rory shrugged, a half-smile playing on her lips. "You know me. Same old, same old. Deliveries, dodging traffic, trying to stay afloat." Silas nodded, his hazel eyes watching her closely. "And how's that, exactly?" She chuckled, a wry note in her voice. "It's... manageable. I suppose. How about you? Still playing the role of the spymaster?" Silas laughed, a deep, resonant sound that
seemed to
fill the room. "Retired, remember? Though I do still keep an ear to the ground. Can't help myself, I suppose." Their conversation
was interrupted
by the sound of the door opening again. Rory's eyes followed the new arrival, and her breath caught in her throat. Standing in the doorway was a man she hadn't seen in years. His dark hair was longer now, falling in waves over his forehead, and his eyes, once bright and mischievous, now held a weariness that spoke of a life well-lived but not without its scars. "Evan," she whispered, her voice barely audible. Evan's eyes swept the room, and when they landed on her, a mixture of surprise and something else—regret, perhaps—
flickered
in their depths. He hesitated for a moment before making his way over to the bar. "Rory," he said, his voice low and gravelly. "I... didn't expect to see you here." Rory felt a familiar tension tighten in her chest. "Yeah, well, life has a funny way of bringing people back together," she replied, her tone neutral. Silas watched the exchange, his expression
unreadable
. He slid a whiskey in front of Evan, who nodded his thanks and took a sip, his gaze never leaving Rory's. "How've you been?" Evan asked, the question hanging in the air like a challenge. Rory shrugged, the casualness of the gesture belying the turmoil inside her. "I've been busy. Working, you know. Trying to keep my head above water." Evan nodded, his eyes lingering on her. "You look... good," he said, the words coming out more like a statement than a compliment. "Thanks," she said, her voice steady. "You look different. Changed." Evan's smile
was bitter
. "Time does that to a person, doesn't it? I guess we both have." There was an
unspoken
weight
in his words, a acknowledgment of the years that had passed, the paths they had taken, and the rift that had grown between them. Rory felt a
pang
of something she couldn't quite name—nostalgia, perhaps, or a residue of the love that had once burned so brightly. "Would you like to sit down and catch up?" she asked, her voice
tinged
with a hint of steel. She wasn't sure if she was ready for this, but there was a part of her that needed to know. Evan hesitated for a moment, then nodded. They moved to a small table in the corner, away from the prying eyes of the other patrons. Silas watched them go, his expression thoughtful. Rory and Evan settled into the booth, the dim lighting casting long shadows across their faces. The air between them was thick with
unspoken
words and unresolved tensions. "How long has it been?" Evan asked, breaking the silence. "Five years?" "Six," Rory corrected, her voice steady. "Six years." Evan nodded, his fingers absently tracing the rim of his glass. "I've thought about you," he admitted. "Wondered how you were doing. If you were happy." Rory's smile was tight. "I've been fine. Not happy, necessarily, but... functional. What about you?" Evan sighed, a heavy, resigned sound. "I've had my ups and downs. Lost touch with a lot of people. Started a new job, moved around a bit. But I never
really
got over what happened between us." Rory's fingers clenched around the glass, the familiar
weight
of guilt and anger rising in her chest. "You have a way of making people feel like they're the problem," she said, her voice low but steady. "But it wasn't all on me, Evan. You have to take some responsibility for what went down." Evan's expression softened, a
flicker
of remorse in his eyes. "I know. I've regretted it every day. I was... I was a mess, Rory. I didn't handle things well. I should have been better, for you, for us." Rory's jaw tightened, but she nodded,
the weight of his words
sinking in. "It's a lot to process," she admitted. "A lot of things happened. A lot of hurt." Evan nodded, his eyes meeting hers. "I'm sorry," he said, the sincerity in his voice unmistakable. "Truly. I wish I could go back and do things differently." Rory looked away, her gaze settling on the old maps that covered the walls. "Time doesn't
work that way
," she said
softly
. "We have to live with the choices we've made. But maybe... maybe we can at least find a way to move forward." Evan's hand reached across the table, his fingers brushing against hers. Rory felt a spark of something—familiarity, perhaps, or a lingering connection. She hesitated for a moment, then allowed her hand to rest in his, the touch both comforting and unsettling. "Thank you," Evan said, his voice
barely above a whisper
. "For hearing me out. For not shutting me out
completely
." Rory nodded, her throat tight. "We both have a lot to carry. Maybe... maybe we can help each other a little." Evan's smile was small but genuine. "I'd like that." The moment stretched between them, a fragile peace settling over the table. Rory felt a sense of release, a lightening of the burden she had carried for so long. They may have been different people now, but there was a part of them that still recognized each other, still understood the depths of their shared history. Silas approached their table, a bottle of whiskey in hand. "On the house," he said, setting the bottle down between them. "Might as well make it a proper reunion." Rory and Evan shared a look, a silent acknowledgement of the past and the future. They poured themselves another drink, the amber liquid a symbol of the complexities of their journey. "Cheers," Rory said, raising her glass. Evan clinked his glass against hers, a soft, resonant sound. "To new beginnings," he said, his voice filled with hope. They drank, the whiskey burning a path down their throats, a toast to the life they had lived and the one they were still writing.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
53.9683%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
21
adverbTagCount
5
adverbTags
0
"she whispered, her voice barely audible [barely]"
1
"he said, his voice low and gravelly [gravelly]"
2
"he said, the words coming out more like a statement than a compliment [more]"
3
"she said softly [softly]"
4
"Evan said, his voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
62.4906%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1333
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"completely"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
4
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"completely"
1
"softly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
3
"really"
4
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
24.9812%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1333
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"pang"
count
1
1
word
"tinged"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"flicker"
count
1
4
word
"unspoken"
count
2
5
word
"unreadable"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
3
highlights
0
"pang"
1
"tinged"
2
"flickered"
3
"flicker"
4
"unspoken"
5
"unreadable"
6
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"the weight of his words"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
81
matches
0
"was bitter"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
81
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
104
matches
0
"work that way"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
45
mean
29.4
std
17.87
cv
0.608
sampleLengths
0
83
1
71
2
13
3
55
4
39
5
8
6
22
7
12
8
22
9
29
10
71
11
7
12
35
13
15
14
26
15
28
16
14
17
25
18
23
19
10
20
17
21
52
22
39
23
32
24
28
25
12
26
8
27
26
28
15
29
37
30
53
31
38
32
29
33
27
34
44
35
41
36
20
37
21
38
9
39
56
40
29
41
31
42
6
43
20
44
25
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"was interrupted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
159
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
987
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.03343465045592705
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.011144883485309016
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
104
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
104
mean
12.72
std
6.57
cv
0.516
sampleLengths
0
25
1
17
2
11
3
16
4
14
5
13
6
20
7
13
8
8
9
17
10
11
11
2
12
12
13
24
14
19
15
11
16
8
17
20
18
8
19
8
20
14
21
8
22
4
23
8
24
14
25
12
26
17
27
12
28
13
29
12
30
34
31
7
32
22
33
13
34
8
35
7
36
9
37
17
38
7
39
21
40
14
41
12
42
13
43
7
44
16
45
6
46
4
47
4
48
13
49
29
59.6154%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.375
totalSentences
104
uniqueOpeners
39
44.0476%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
21
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"Silas called out, his voice carrying a quiet authority (call out, carry)"
1
"she said, lifting the glass in a small toast (say, lift)"
2
"she whispered, her voice barely audible (whisper)"
3
"he said, the words coming out more like a statement than a compliment (say, more like)"
4
"Rory corrected, her voice steady (correct)"
5
"he admitted (admit)"
6
"she admitted (admit)"
7
"she said softly (say softly)"
8
"he said, setting the bottle down between them (say, set)"
9
"Rory said, raising her glass (say, raise)"
10
"he said, his voice filled with hope (say, fill)"
85.0061%