| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 630 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 630 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "solace" | | 4 | "amidst" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "fleeting" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "scanning" | | 16 | "macabre" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 12 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seem to" | | 3 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 630 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 627 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.782 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening to her every thought" | | 1 | "shape that seemed to be waiting" | | 2 | "presence that seemed to be growing more solid by the second" | | 3 | "susurration that seemed to come from all directions" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 630 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 17.32% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 52.5 | | std | 11.06 | | cv | 0.211 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 577 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.02772963604852686 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010398613518197574 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 46 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 46 | | mean | 13.7 | | std | 5.49 | | cv | 0.401 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 22 |
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| 47.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.21739130434782608 | | totalSentences | 46 | | uniqueOpeners | 10 | |
| 74.07% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the figure vanished." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "She shivered, despite the warmth" | | 1 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 2 | "She stopped in front of" | | 3 | "She took a deep breath," | | 4 | "She slowly turned, her eyes" | | 5 | "It simply stood, a dark" | | 6 | "She tried to step forward," | | 7 | "It simply stood, a presence" | | 8 | "She forced herself to take" | | 9 | "Her heart racing, Rory turned" | | 10 | "She stumbled to a halt," | | 11 | "She took off, dashing through" |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 37.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped into the Fae" | | 1 | "The air inside the clearing" | | 2 | "She shivered, despite the warmth" | | 3 | "The park beyond was dark" | | 4 | "Rory had come to the" | | 5 | "The pendant, now a constant" | | 6 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 7 | "The only sound was the" | | 8 | "Rory's eyes scanned the darkness," | | 9 | "The wildflowers seemed to lean" | | 10 | "She stopped in front of" | | 11 | "The wood felt cool to" | | 12 | "A shiver ran down her" | | 13 | "The pendant pulsed faster, its" | | 14 | "A faint whisper seemed to" | | 15 | "Rory spun around, but there" | | 16 | "The whisper seemed to come" | | 17 | "She took a deep breath," | | 18 | "Rory froze, her heart racing." | | 19 | "She slowly turned, her eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A name, whispered over and over, a soft susurration that seemed to come from all directions." | | 1 | "She took off, dashing through the darkness, the pendant's warmth a fragile comfort against the horrors that lurked in the Fae Grove." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |