Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6P18999MMW158XENJN8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.025607
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
uate the silence. (Okay, writing now.) The air inside the boundary tasted different, thick with the scent of blooming jasmine and damp earth, though it was November and midnight in Richmond Park. Aurora Carter stepped past the ancient oak standing stones, the rough bark scraping against her sleeve as she crossed the threshold. The noise of London, the distant hum of the A307 and the rustle of normal night creatures, vanished instantly. It was replaced by a silence so absolute it felt like pressure against her eardrums. Rory pulled her jacket tighter around herself. She was five feet six inches of nervous energy wrapped in black denim and delivery leathers, but she forced her breathing to slow. Panic was useless. Panic got you killed, or worse, sent back to Evan. She touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habitual grounding mechanism, before her fingers found the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone pendant lay against her sternum, cold at first. Then, as she moved deeper into the clearing, it began to pulse. A faint warmth spread through the deep crimson gemstone, roughly the size of her thumbnail. It was the reason she was here. The unknown benefactor who had slipped it into her pocket weeks ago had given no instructions, only a warning that it would glow when the veil was thin. It was glowing now, emitting a faint inner light that cast sickly red shadows against the wildflowers blooming at her feet. They were wrong, the flowers. Violets and poppies sprawled across the grass, vibrant and open despite the lack of sun. They shouldn't exist here. Nothing about this place respected the rules of the earth she knew. Rory stopped in the center of the grove. The pendant grew hotter, burning slightly against her skin. She looked around, her bright blue eyes scanning the tree line. The oaks surrounding the clearing stood too still. There was no wind, yet the leaves trembled. She checked her watch. The second hand was spinning counter-clockwise, a blur of motion. She tapped the glass face, but it didn't stop. Time moved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes outside, or days. She had told Silas she would be back before closing, that she needed to drop off keys for the flat above his bar. If she stayed too long, she might return to find weeks had passed. Or she might not return at all. A snap of a twig came from her left. Rory froze. She turned slowly, her hand dipping toward the pocket where she kept her pepper spray, though she doubted chemical irritants would work on whatever lived in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. Nothing was there. Just the wildflowers and the dark trunks of the trees. She exhaled, a white plume in the cold air. You are alone, she told herself. You are just jumpy. It is the job. It is the delivery runs in the dark alleys of London making you see things. Another sound. A shuffle, like fabric dragging over grass. This time from behind. She spun around. The pendant swung with the movement, the crimson light flaring brighter. The warmth was becoming uncomfortable, bordering on painful. She knew the artifact's behavior; it pulsed when near a Hel portal. She had assumed the Grove itself was the anomaly, but the heat suggested something else was here with her. Something opening a door. The shadows between the trees seemed to lengthen, stretching toward her like fingers. They moved independently of the light source. Rory took a step back, her boot crushing a patch of white clover. The scent was overwhelming, cloying, like perfume used to mask decay. She needed to leave. The cool-headed intelligence that had helped her navigate law school before she fled Cardiff, that had helped her escape Evan without a trace, screamed at her to run. But her feet felt heavy, as if the gravity in the Grove was stronger than outside. Do not run, she thought. Running triggers the chase. She stood her ground, forcing her muscles to unlock. She watched the tree line. The silence had changed. It was no longer empty; it was holding its breath. A whisper brushed against her ear. It sounded like her name, but distorted, as if spoken through water. Rory. She didn't turn. She kept her eyes on the shadows ahead. I am not alone. The certainty settled in her gut, cold and hard. There was something standing just outside her peripheral vision, shifting whenever she tried to look directly at it. The pendant burned now. She could smell ozone and burnt hair. The crimson glow illuminated the immediate area, revealing that the wildflowers nearest to her were wilting rapidly, petals turning black and curling into ash within seconds of the light touching them. She reached up to unclasp the chain, to drop the artifact, but her fingers wouldn't obey. They hovered over the silver link, trembling. The air pressure dropped, popping her ears. The shadows coalesced into a shape taller than a man, thin and elongated, standing just beyond the ring of oak stones. It had no face, only a smooth surface where features should be, yet she felt its attention fixed on her with predatory intensity. Rory swallowed the lump in her throat. She thought of her mother in Wales, her father in Cardiff, the life she had left behind to survive. She thought of the flat above Silas' bar, the safety of the mundane world. The shape took a step forward. The grass beneath it did not bend. She forced her hand down from her neck and took a deliberate step backward, then another. The movement seemed to agitate the air. The whispering grew louder, a chorus of voices now, overlapping, speaking in languages she didn't know but felt in her teeth. The pendant gave a final, searing pulse. The light flared blindingly bright, turning the grove into a stark negative image of black and white. In that flash, she saw them. Not just one. Dozens of shapes standing among the trees, watching. Waiting. Then the light died, plunging her back into darkness. The warmth vanished from the stone, leaving it cold and dead against her chest. The silence returned, heavier than before. Rory did not wait to see if they would move again. She turned and walked, not ran, toward the gap in the standing stones. She kept her eyes forward, ignoring the sensation of hundreds of eyes tracking her retreat. She stepped past the ancient oak boundary, and the noise of London crashed back into her world—the distant traffic, the wind in the normal trees, the cold bite of a normal November night. She stood on the other side of the stones, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. She looked back into the Grove. The wildflowers were gone. The clearing was just grass and dirt, dark and empty. But the pendant remained cold, and the scar on her wrist throbbed in time with her pulse. She zipped her jacket up to her chin and walked away into the night, knowing with absolute certainty that the silence had followed her out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
83.3749% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.4372% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"searing"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"searing"
2"trembled"
3"stark"
4"navigate"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"warning that it"
1"closing, that she"
2"revealing that the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean41.34
std23.31
cv0.564
sampleLengths
03
184
267
393
436
544
679
79
836
913
1038
1113
1257
1344
1448
159
1628
1719
1842
1942
2074
2140
2213
2344
2442
2529
2672
2739
2842
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"was replaced"
1"were gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs209
matches
0"was glowing"
1"was spinning"
2"was holding"
3"were wilting"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1203
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03408146300914381
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010806317539484621
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11
std7.4
cv0.673
sampleLengths
03
13
226
321
419
515
67
723
83
910
1024
1110
1212
1315
147
1528
1621
175
1815
194
2012
218
229
2311
248
258
264
2710
289
294
309
3123
3213
337
349
352
3634
373
3810
399
406
414
424
4315
442
457
464
473
4811
498
32.5688% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.28440366972477066
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners31
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
92.2577%