| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 86.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "fluttered" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "fragmented" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 38 | | totalWords | 1116 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Laila" | | 1 | "between" | | 2 | "You’re tired. You’re stressed. You’ve been having nightmares—all because of the pendant, because of the stress with—" | | 3 | "head" | | 4 | "“Laila…”" | | 5 | "had" | | 6 | "“You came back.”" | | 7 | "“You opened the door.”" | | 8 | "“You carry the key.”" | | 9 | "crack" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "“Welcome home, Laila.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1071 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.48 | | wordCount | 1116 | | matches | | 0 | "not of stone at all but of blackened, petrified wood, carved with symbols" | | 1 | "not trees, not people, but something in between, something ancient" | | 2 | "not people, but something in between, something ancient" | | 3 | "not warm, but *searing*, as if the stone had caught fire" | | 4 | "not in her mind this time, but in the air, all around, from the trees, the stones, the dyin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 18.6 | | std | 18.6 | | cv | 1 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 94.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "stressed" | | 1 | "been, hadn’t" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was swallowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "Not literally, of course—she could breathe just fine—but something in the quality of the night resisted her." | | 1 | "Not because she believed—no, she didn’t believe—but because something had changed in the last week." | | 2 | "Not sharply—just enough that her breath curled in front of her in slow, visible wisps, though the night had been mild only fifty yards back." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters beneath her feet—bluebells, snowdrops, even a few roses—out of season, out of sense." | | 4 | "You’ve been having nightmares—all because of the pendant, because of the stress with—*" | | 5 | "The air smelled different now—still sweet, but laced with something coppery, something old." | | 6 | "In the fragmented memories she couldn’t place—of firelight, of a woman with silver hair singing in a language that twisted the air." | | 7 | "Its skin—if it was skin—was the color of bruised bark, its face smooth and featureless except for two dark hollows where eyes should be." | | 8 | "And the voice—no, voices now—spoke as one, threading through her mind like roots." | | 9 | "For a split second, she saw them clearly—not trees, not people, but something in between, something ancient and ravenous." | | 10 | "From within, something glistened—a wet, pulsing mass, veined and breathing." | | 11 | "And the pendant—her chest—burned now, not warm, but *searing*, as if the stone had caught fire." | | 12 | "And then—silence." |
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| 88.97% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1093 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04574565416285453 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008234217749313814 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 7.7 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.852 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 48.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3448275862068966 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the dreams: a voice" | | 1 | "Just the drip of unseen" | | 2 | "Then came the whisper." | | 3 | "Then the sound began." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, one hand brushing" | | 1 | "It hadn’t pulsed yet, but" | | 2 | "She moved forward, crunching over" | | 3 | "They were taller, their trunks" | | 4 | "She’d read about it in" | | 5 | "She crossed between two oaks" | | 6 | "Their scent was cloying, thick" | | 7 | "she said aloud, just to" | | 8 | "She unzipped her coat, fingers" | | 9 | "She took three steps forward." | | 10 | "It had come from *between*" | | 11 | "She turned slowly." | | 12 | "she called, voice too loud" | | 13 | "You’ve been having nightmares—all because" | | 14 | "She snapped her head toward" | | 15 | "she whispered, and hated herself" | | 16 | "She took a step back." | | 17 | "Her breath came fast." | | 18 | "She wanted to rip it" | | 19 | "She saw it fully this" |
| | ratio | 0.255 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The usual hush of woodland" | | 2 | "She hesitated, one hand brushing" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay warm" | | 4 | "It hadn’t pulsed yet, but" | | 5 | "That was probably just her" | | 6 | "She moved forward, crunching over" | | 7 | "The trees here weren’t the" | | 8 | "They were taller, their trunks" | | 9 | "This was the boundary." | | 10 | "She’d read about it in" | | 11 | "The Fae Grove." | | 12 | "Rory had come for proof." | | 13 | "The pendant had appeared on" | | 14 | "Tonight, it had thrummed like" | | 15 | "She crossed between two oaks" | | 16 | "The moment she did, the" | | 17 | "The grove opened before her:" | | 18 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters beneath" | | 19 | "Their scent was cloying, thick" |
| | ratio | 0.632 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "As if guiding her." | | 1 | "To her right." | | 2 | "Because now there were more" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "They were taller, their trunks smooth and silver-barked, their roots looping from the soil like sleeping serpents." | | 1 | "She’d read about it in Eva’s old notebooks, half-dreamt annotations about liminal places, about the grove that wasn’t on any map." | | 2 | "The grove opened before her: a perfect clearing ringed by standing stones, not of stone at all but of blackened, petrified wood, carved with symbols that made h…" | | 3 | "In the fragmented memories she couldn’t place—of firelight, of a woman with silver hair singing in a language that twisted the air." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, voice too loud in the silence" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |