Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6P1F9TZ45QVNX5CZKFA

Run Details

Duration:
21.9s
Cost:
$0.010259
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park thickened as Rory stepped beyond the ring of ancient oaks. Not literally, of course—she could breathe just fine—but something in the quality of the night resisted her. The usual hush of woodland at midnight had gone taut, like a drumskin pulled too tight. She hesitated, one hand brushing the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit when nerves whispered too close. The Heartstone Pendant lay warm against her collarbone, hidden beneath her coat. It hadn’t pulsed yet, but its weight felt heavier than before. That was probably just her imagination. Or the cold. She moved forward, crunching over twigs that cracked louder than they should have. The trees here weren’t the same as the rest of the park. They were taller, their trunks smooth and silver-barked, their roots looping from the soil like sleeping serpents. This was the boundary. She’d read about it in Eva’s old notebooks, half-dreamt annotations about liminal places, about the grove that wasn’t on any map. The Fae Grove. Rory had come for proof. Not because she believed—no, she didn’t believe—but because something had changed in the last week. The pendant had appeared on her doorstep wrapped in cloth, no note, no postmark. Then the dreams: a voice calling *Laila*, a name she didn’t know, from deep within a forest that smelled of crushed laurel and iron. And every night since, the pendant had fluttered against her chest, warm fingers of light spreading beneath her skin when she passed certain alleys, certain shadows. Tonight, it had thrummed like a second heartbeat the moment she stepped onto the path leading into Richmond Park. As if guiding her. She crossed between two oaks standing farther apart than the others, their branches interlaced overhead like clasped hands. A threshold. The moment she did, the temperature dropped. Not sharply—just enough that her breath curled in front of her in slow, visible wisps, though the night had been mild only fifty yards back. The grove opened before her: a perfect clearing ringed by standing stones, not of stone at all but of blackened, petrified wood, carved with symbols that made her eyes ache if she stared too long. Wildflowers bloomed in clusters beneath her feet—bluebells, snowdrops, even a few roses—out of season, out of sense. Their scent was cloying, thick with honey and something darker, like spoiled wine. Rory exhaled, shaky. “Okay,” she said aloud, just to hear her own voice. “Just look. That’s all. Look and leave.” She unzipped her coat, fingers brushing the pendant again. The crimson gem glowed faintly from within, like embers banked under ash. Not pulsing. Not yet. Just… watching. She took three steps forward. Then stopped. A sound. From behind. A rustle. Not in the bushes. Not in the trees. It had come from *between* the stones. Like fabric dragging over bark. She turned slowly. Nothing moved. The wildflowers swayed slightly, though there was no breeze. “Hello?” she called, voice too loud in the silence. No answer. Just the drip of unseen moisture, the faint creak of wood. She swallowed. *You’re tired. You’re stressed. You’ve been having nightmares—all because of the pendant, because of the stress with—* A flicker. To her right. She snapped her head toward it. A shadow, just beyond the edge of her vision, retreating behind one of the standing trees. Not animal. Too tall. Too still. “You’re not alone,” she whispered, and hated herself for saying it, because now it was real. The pendant warmed. A pulse. Gentle, like a heartbeat. Then another. She took a step back. The flowers beneath her boots felt spongy, yielding, as if the earth had softened. The air smelled different now—still sweet, but laced with something coppery, something old. Then came the whisper. Not in her ears. In her *head*. A voice, dry as dead leaves, curling through her thoughts like smoke. *“Laila…”* She flinched. Her breath came fast. “That’s not my name.” But it *had* been, hadn’t it? In the dreams. In the fragmented memories she couldn’t place—of firelight, of a woman with silver hair singing in a language that twisted the air. Of running. Always running. The voice came again, softer, closer. *“You came back.”* “No,” she breathed. “I don’t even know where I am.” The pendant pulsed harder. Warmth spread down her chest, up into her throat. She wanted to rip it off, but her fingers wouldn’t obey. Between the trees, something shifted. She saw it fully this time. A figure. Tall, too tall, limbs elongated like stretched candle wax. It stood motionless, just within the ring of stones, facing her. Its skin—if it was skin—was the color of bruised bark, its face smooth and featureless except for two dark hollows where eyes should be. And its hands… long, too long, fingers ending in points like splintered wood. It didn’t move. It didn’t need to. Because now there were more of them. Silent. Still. Peering from behind the trunks. Framed in the arch of the oaks. Watching. The flowers at her feet began to wilt. One petal at a time, the bluebells blackened, the roses collapsed into themselves, their scent turning to rot. The ground beneath her boots grew soft, then slick. And the voice—no, voices now—spoke as one, threading through her mind like roots. *“You opened the door.”* “I didn’t,” she said, backing away. “I didn’t open anything.” *“You carry the key.”* The pendant flared. Crimson light flared across the grove, illuminating the figures. For a split second, she saw them clearly—not trees, not people, but something in between, something ancient and ravenous. Then the sound began. Not a roar. Not a scream. A *crack*, like splitting timber. From deep beneath the earth. The standing stones groaned. The ground trembled. One of the trees split open down the middle, steam rising from the fissure. From within, something glistened—a wet, pulsing mass, veined and breathing. The figures stepped forward in unison. Rory turned and ran. But the path was gone. The oaks had shifted. The clearing now stretched too far in every direction, the flowers dead and the air thick with the stench of decay. Behind her, the cracking grew louder. And the pendant—her chest—burned now, not warm, but *searing*, as if the stone had caught fire. She stumbled, fell to her knees. The soil gave way like wet paper. And from beneath, cold fingers, black and root-like, curled around her ankle. The whisper came again, not in her mind this time, but in the air, all around, from the trees, the stones, the dying flowers: *“Welcome home, Laila.”* She screamed. The sound didn’t echo. It was swallowed. And then—silence. The grove stood empty. The wildflowers, now, began to bloom again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud, just to hear her own voice [just]"
73.6380% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.4886% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"searing"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"fragmented"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"searing"
1"flicker"
2"trembled"
3"fluttered"
4"fragmented"
5"weight"
6"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean18.6
std18.6
cv1
sampleLengths
068
132
270
384
423
552
665
720
827
97
104
1122
1214
139
1413
1519
165
1728
1816
1911
2032
214
2219
231
2410
2535
269
2710
2824
295
306
3159
327
337
3415
358
3627
3713
384
3910
404
4131
424
436
4410
4531
466
474
4830
496
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences141
matches
0"stressed"
1"been, hadn’t"
2"was gone"
3"was swallowed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was cloying"
89.9517% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1098
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.044626593806921674
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00819672131147541
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean7.7
std6.56
cv0.852
sampleLengths
015
117
216
320
412
511
66
73
813
912
1017
114
1221
133
145
1515
1614
1724
1826
1919
204
2118
222
237
2425
2535
2617
2713
283
2910
307
319
3212
332
342
351
361
375
382
392
402
412
424
434
447
455
463
472
489
499
48.5057% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3448275862068966
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners50
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she said aloud, just to hear her own voice (say hear)"
1"she whispered, and hated herself for saying it, because now it was real (whisper, hate say be)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"she said, backing away (say, back away)"
83.3677%