| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 6 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "she interrupted softly [softly]" | | 2 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "he hesitated then [then]" | | 4 | "she finally whispered [finally]" | | 5 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.462 | | effectiveRatio | 0.414 | |
| 60.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1007 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1007 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "practiced ease" | | 2 | "fleeting" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "flicked" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "tinged" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "calculated" | | 15 | "glint" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 995 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 804 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Hazel | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Blackwood | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Hazel" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Blackwood" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed almost detached as if her mind were just slightly removed from the scene she occupied" | | 1 | "quite hide—an innate weariness" | | 2 | "quite grasp" |
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| 99.50% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.005 | | wordCount | 995 | | matches | | 0 | "not by the movement but by the familiarity it carried" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 28.43 | | std | 17.03 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 31 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.139 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter slipped behind the bar with practiced ease, her bright blue eyes fleeting over the familiar chaos—waitresses weaving through clusters of patrons, the bartender polishing a glass, the faint scent of aged whiskey mingling with the air of smoke and secrets." | | 1 | "She glanced sideways—faintly surprised, not by the movement but by the familiarity it carried." | | 2 | "He rose—Silas Blackwood." | | 3 | "She hadn’t expected to see him tonight—a coincidence she would’ve argued was impossible before." | | 4 | "The bartender’s nod was almost imperceptible; she knew exactly who Silas was, and what he represented here." | | 5 | "Her eyes flicked to him, flickered with something unspoken—a mix of nostalgia and caution, as if she was gauging whether that gone quiet of years past could still be reached." | | 6 | "He regarded her carefully, the slight limp in his gait as he settled into the chair revealing something he didn’t quite hide—an innate weariness." | | 7 | "The name tasted bitter—something she hadn’t spoken aloud in years." | | 8 | "Her fingers brushed the scar on her wrist—small, crescent-shaped, hide in plain sight." | | 9 | "She looked down, eyes fixed on her hands—calloused from nights working the streets, from the years of fighting to keep herself afloat." | | 10 | "The night pressed on, shadows still lurking just beyond the flickering neon light, but in the quiet exchange of those few words, some things—pain, regret, hope—found a fragile space to breathe." |
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| 74.50% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 817 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.06487148102815178 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02447980416156671 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 12.59 | | std | 8.02 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 69.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.43037974683544306 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the shadows, a" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved with a calm" | | 1 | "She glanced sideways—faintly surprised, not" | | 2 | "Her heart skipped, and her" | | 3 | "He rose—Silas Blackwood." | | 4 | "He looked older, of course," | | 5 | "His eyes, hazel and sharp," | | 6 | "he said, voice low, almost" | | 7 | "His lips curled into that" | | 8 | "Her stomach clenched, a familiar" | | 9 | "She hadn’t expected to see" | | 10 | "She kept her tone even." | | 11 | "He stepped forward, one hand" | | 12 | "She hesitated only briefly, then" | | 13 | "he began, voice softer now" | | 14 | "she replied, her fingers tapping" | | 15 | "Her eyes flicked to him," | | 16 | "He looked at her for" | | 17 | "he said simply, after a" | | 18 | "She chuckled, a dry, quick" | | 19 | "He leaned back, eyes narrowing" |
| | ratio | 0.689 | |
| 9.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim glow of the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter slipped behind the" | | 2 | "She moved with a calm" | | 3 | "That scar on her wrist" | | 4 | "She glanced sideways—faintly surprised, not" | | 5 | "An instinctive flicker of recognition" | | 6 | "Her heart skipped, and her" | | 7 | "He rose—Silas Blackwood." | | 8 | "He looked older, of course," | | 9 | "His eyes, hazel and sharp," | | 10 | "he said, voice low, almost" | | 11 | "The sound of her childhood" | | 12 | "His lips curled into that" | | 13 | "Her stomach clenched, a familiar" | | 14 | "She hadn’t expected to see" | | 15 | "She kept her tone even." | | 16 | "He stepped forward, one hand" | | 17 | "She hesitated only briefly, then" | | 18 | "The bartender’s nod was almost" | | 19 | "he began, voice softer now" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 56.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Taller than she remembered, the greying auburn hair, brush strokes of silver, framing a face still carrying the quiet authority of someone who had once seen too…" | | 1 | "His lips curled into that faint, crooked smile that had once been reassuring, now edged with something darker, weightier." | | 2 | "Her eyes flicked to him, flickered with something unspoken—a mix of nostalgia and caution, as if she was gauging whether that gone quiet of years past could sti…" | | 3 | "The childhood injury that had scarred her skin, but not her mind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice low, almost cautious" | | 1 | "he began, voice softer now," | | 2 | "she replied, her fingers tapping lightly on the counter" | | 3 | "she interrupted softly, voice tinged with steel" | | 4 | "she finally whispered, voice barely audible over the murmur" |
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| 81.03% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she interrupted softly (interrupt)" | | 1 | "she finally whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.379 | | leniency | 0.759 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.138 | |