Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6P4PX080D0RT2FS03VG

Run Details

Duration:
10.9s
Cost:
$0.000621
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The dim glow of the neon sign flickered softly against the Soho night, casting a faint green hue over the cobbled streets. Inside The Raven’s Nest, a hushed quiet reigned, broken only by the muffled hum of whispered conversations and the clink of glasses. Aurora Carter slipped behind the bar with practiced ease, her bright blue eyes fleeting over the familiar chaos—waitresses weaving through clusters of patrons, the bartender polishing a glass, the faint scent of aged whiskey mingling with the air of smoke and secrets. She moved with a calm precision that seemed almost detached, as if her mind were just slightly removed from the scene she occupied. Part-time for days, observer for years. That scar on her wrist caught the dim light as she reached for a bottle, a silent reminder of childhood accidents and reckless innocence long past. Somewhere in the shadows, a chair scraped against the floor, slow and deliberate, drawing her attention. She glanced sideways—faintly surprised, not by the movement but by the familiarity it carried. An instinctive flicker of recognition sparked, then sharpened: Hazel eyes, upright posture, that slight limp she never quite dismissed. Her heart skipped, and her fingers paused on the glass in front of her. He rose—Silas Blackwood. Taller than she remembered, the greying auburn hair, brush strokes of silver, framing a face still carrying the quiet authority of someone who had once seen too much. He looked older, of course, more defined, but that same careful control was woven into his movements. His eyes, hazel and sharp, locked onto hers. “Rory,” he said, voice low, almost cautious. The sound of her childhood nickname, so familiar, yet somehow distant. His lips curled into that faint, crooked smile that had once been reassuring, now edged with something darker, weightier. Her stomach clenched, a familiar mixture of warmth and wariness flooding her in a single breath. She hadn’t expected to see him tonight—a coincidence she would’ve argued was impossible before. She kept her tone even. “Silas. I didn’t think I’d run into you here.” He stepped forward, one hand gesturing vaguely to the empty seat across from her. “Mind if I sit?” She hesitated only briefly, then nodded, turning slightly as he claimed the seat. For a moment, silence stretched between them, thick with unspoken words. The bartender’s nod was almost imperceptible; she knew exactly who Silas was, and what he represented here. “So,” he began, voice softer now, “it’s been a while.” “Too long,” she replied, her fingers tapping lightly on the counter. Her eyes flicked to him, flickered with something unspoken—a mix of nostalgia and caution, as if she was gauging whether that gone quiet of years past could still be reached. He looked at her for a long moment, army of memories dancing behind his eyes. “You’ve changed,” he said simply, after a pause. She chuckled, a dry, quick sound. “Haven’t we all?” He leaned back, eyes narrowing at her face. “You’re different, Rory. I can see it. That fire—what was it I used to call it? That spark—” “Malphora,” she interrupted softly, voice tinged with steel. “That’s what you called me once. Doesn’t fit anymore.” He regarded her carefully, the slight limp in his gait as he settled into the chair revealing something he didn’t quite hide—an innate weariness. A soldier’s burden, perhaps. “No,” he said quietly. “It doesn’t.” She looked away, disdain flickering across her face. “You’re not wrong.” Silas studied her, patience etched into every line. “I heard about what you went through. After...” he hesitated, then finished, “Evan.” Her nostrils flared. The name tasted bitter—something she hadn’t spoken aloud in years. “It’s in the past,” she said, almost dismissively. He nodded, eyes sad, as if recalling ghosts. “Good. But some things... some truths don’t fade. They just settle, hardening into who we become.” Her fingers brushed the scar on her wrist—small, crescent-shaped, hide in plain sight. The childhood injury that had scarred her skin, but not her mind. Still, the memory lingered, bitter. They sat in silence for a moment, the ambient noise of the bar swirling around them, cloaking what had once been simple friendship, now tinged with layers of regret. “I never meant to disappear,” she finally whispered, voice barely audible over the murmur. “Not from your life... not from anyone’s.” He gave a small, crooked smile. “You had your reasons.” She looked down, eyes fixed on her hands—calloused from nights working the streets, from the years of fighting to keep herself afloat. “I had to get out,” she said. “Evan—he almost broke me.” Silas looked at her, the heaviness of that truth settling between them. “And now?” She took a breath, steadying herself. “Now I’m just trying to figure out who I am without all that noise. Without the past screaming in my ear.” He nodded slowly. “It’s a different world, Rory. And no matter how much we change, some shadows follow us.” Her gaze sharpened, that cool, calculated glint returning. “I don’t believe in shadows,” she said. “Not anymore. I believe in moving forward. I just... don’t know if I’m ready yet.” His expression softened, the lines around his eyes deepening. “You’ve been through a lot. But you’re still here. That counts for something.” She looked at him then, the silence between them heavy, thick with all the years lost and all the truths stubbornly refused to speak. She wondered if he saw the cracks beneath her calm façade, or if the years had hollowed her out in some way she couldn’t quite grasp. The bartender approached, setting two glasses of neat whiskey on the counter. She slid one toward him, and he took it, raising it in a silent toast. “To old friends,” he said softly. “Old ghosts,” she replied, clinking her glass against his. The night pressed on, shadows still lurking just beyond the flickering neon light, but in the quiet exchange of those few words, some things—pain, regret, hope—found a fragile space to breathe.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"she interrupted softly [softly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"he hesitated then [then]"
4"she finally whispered [finally]"
5"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.414
60.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"lightly"
3"carefully"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"fleeting"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count3
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"unspoken"
count2
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"tinged"
count2
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"calculated"
count1
15
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"practiced ease"
2"fleeting"
3"familiar"
4"reminder"
5"flicker"
6"stomach"
7"warmth"
8"silence"
9"unspoken"
10"flicked"
11"dancing"
12"tinged"
13"etched"
14"calculated"
15"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords995
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount804
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Hazel1
Silas4
Blackwood1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Hazel"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed almost detached as if her mind were just slightly removed from the scene she occupied"
1"quite hide—an innate weariness"
2"quite grasp"
99.50% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.005
wordCount995
matches
0"not by the movement but by the familiarity it carried"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean28.43
std17.03
cv0.599
sampleLengths
086
155
263
356
437
530
614
718
841
910
1041
1123
129
1326
1417
1534
1611
1721
1821
1924
2030
2129
2221
2310
2433
2514
2627
2719
2830
2922
3050
3127
326
339
3431
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"was woven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was gauging"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences79
ratio0.139
matches
0"Aurora Carter slipped behind the bar with practiced ease, her bright blue eyes fleeting over the familiar chaos—waitresses weaving through clusters of patrons, the bartender polishing a glass, the faint scent of aged whiskey mingling with the air of smoke and secrets."
1"She glanced sideways—faintly surprised, not by the movement but by the familiarity it carried."
2"He rose—Silas Blackwood."
3"She hadn’t expected to see him tonight—a coincidence she would’ve argued was impossible before."
4"The bartender’s nod was almost imperceptible; she knew exactly who Silas was, and what he represented here."
5"Her eyes flicked to him, flickered with something unspoken—a mix of nostalgia and caution, as if she was gauging whether that gone quiet of years past could still be reached."
6"He regarded her carefully, the slight limp in his gait as he settled into the chair revealing something he didn’t quite hide—an innate weariness."
7"The name tasted bitter—something she hadn’t spoken aloud in years."
8"Her fingers brushed the scar on her wrist—small, crescent-shaped, hide in plain sight."
9"She looked down, eyes fixed on her hands—calloused from nights working the streets, from the years of fighting to keep herself afloat."
10"The night pressed on, shadows still lurking just beyond the flickering neon light, but in the quiet exchange of those few words, some things—pain, regret, hope—found a fragile space to breathe."
74.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount817
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.06487148102815178
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.02447980416156671
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean12.59
std8.02
cv0.636
sampleLengths
022
122
242
323
46
526
616
714
819
914
103
1128
1217
138
147
1511
1619
1716
1814
195
209
2114
224
2313
2411
2517
2610
2711
2830
2915
308
316
323
338
3418
358
369
3724
384
394
402
418
423
438
4413
453
4610
478
488
4916
69.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43037974683544306
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners34
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Somewhere in the shadows, a"
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences61
matches
0"She moved with a calm"
1"She glanced sideways—faintly surprised, not"
2"Her heart skipped, and her"
3"He rose—Silas Blackwood."
4"He looked older, of course,"
5"His eyes, hazel and sharp,"
6"he said, voice low, almost"
7"His lips curled into that"
8"Her stomach clenched, a familiar"
9"She hadn’t expected to see"
10"She kept her tone even."
11"He stepped forward, one hand"
12"She hesitated only briefly, then"
13"he began, voice softer now"
14"she replied, her fingers tapping"
15"Her eyes flicked to him,"
16"He looked at her for"
17"he said simply, after a"
18"She chuckled, a dry, quick"
19"He leaned back, eyes narrowing"
ratio0.689
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"The dim glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter slipped behind the"
2"She moved with a calm"
3"That scar on her wrist"
4"She glanced sideways—faintly surprised, not"
5"An instinctive flicker of recognition"
6"Her heart skipped, and her"
7"He rose—Silas Blackwood."
8"He looked older, of course,"
9"His eyes, hazel and sharp,"
10"he said, voice low, almost"
11"The sound of her childhood"
12"His lips curled into that"
13"Her stomach clenched, a familiar"
14"She hadn’t expected to see"
15"She kept her tone even."
16"He stepped forward, one hand"
17"She hesitated only briefly, then"
18"The bartender’s nod was almost"
19"he began, voice softer now"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Taller than she remembered, the greying auburn hair, brush strokes of silver, framing a face still carrying the quiet authority of someone who had once seen too…"
1"His lips curled into that faint, crooked smile that had once been reassuring, now edged with something darker, weightier."
2"Her eyes flicked to him, flickered with something unspoken—a mix of nostalgia and caution, as if she was gauging whether that gone quiet of years past could sti…"
3"The childhood injury that had scarred her skin, but not her mind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, voice low, almost cautious"
1"he began, voice softer now,"
2"she replied, her fingers tapping lightly on the counter"
3"she interrupted softly, voice tinged with steel"
4"she finally whispered, voice barely audible over the murmur"
81.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she interrupted softly (interrupt)"
1"she finally whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.759
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.138
66.8103%