| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory's voice cracked slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 89.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1436 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1436 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "comfortable" | | 8 | "resolved" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1423 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1407 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | November | 3 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 12 | | Hel | 1 | | Coming | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 43.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite sound like wind, she realized" | | 1 | "quite wind rustled through the flowers" | | 2 | "sounded like wind over broken glass, like" | | 3 | "felt like protection" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.703 | | wordCount | 1423 | | matches | | 0 | "not the fine misting of a cold night, but thick plumes of vapor as if she'd stepped into a freezer" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 35.58 | | std | 25.61 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 95 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 59 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 75 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 53 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't answering" | | 1 | "were getting" | | 2 | "was thinning" | | 3 | "were viewing" | | 4 | "were ascending" | | 5 | "was getting" | | 6 | "was beginning" | | 7 | "was cooling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "That was new—it had been cool when she'd left the flat an hour ago, hanging beneath her jumper like it always did." | | 1 | "Not just any clearing—*that* clearing, the one with the perpetually blooming wildflowers that shouldn't exist in November, the one that existed in a fold between worlds." | | 2 | "She could see her breath now—not the fine misting of a cold night, but thick plumes of vapor as if she'd stepped into a freezer." | | 3 | "Wildflowers in impossible profusion—lupines and foxgloves and roses that should have withered weeks ago." | | 4 | "Above, the sky was a different quality of dark than the sky outside; the stars were dimmer, somehow farther away, as if she were viewing them through layers of glass." | | 5 | "The air tasted wrong—sweet and mineral, like licking a battery." | | 6 | "Just the wind—which didn't quite sound like wind, she realized." | | 7 | "Not tentative, uncertain footsteps—confident ones." | | 8 | "A scent drifted across the clearing—sweet rot, like fruit left too long in the sun." | | 9 | "In the silence that followed, Rory became aware of how her own breathing sounded—loud, rapid, the sound of prey animal prey." | | 10 | "It was laughter—except it wasn't." | | 11 | "But the moment her eyes moved away, she could sense it again—a dark shape, man-shaped but subtly wrong about the proportions." | | 12 | "There seemed to be movement everywhere now—shadows flowing between the flowers, shapes that resolved into nothing the moment she focused on them." | | 13 | "She could see the outline of it—the too-long arms, the head that tilted at that impossible angle." | | 14 | "The flowers seemed to grab at her ankles—she fell, hands slamming into the grass, and she felt it then, a touch on the back of her neck." |
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| 89.78% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1428 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, springy beneath her" |
| | adverbCount | 64 | | adverbRatio | 0.04481792717086835 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00980392156862745 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 10.46 | | std | 8.08 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 49.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3602941176470588 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere nearby, the boundary between" | | 1 | "Just the wind—which didn't quite" | | 2 | "Just wildflowers and dark and" | | 3 | "Just a shadow, just a" | | 4 | "Too tall to be a" | | 5 | "Too purposeful to be anything" | | 6 | "Then came a sound that" | | 7 | "Fully corporeal, close enough to" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd memorized the way here" | | 1 | "She'd come to the grove" | | 2 | "She stepped through the standing" | | 3 | "Her lungs seized." | | 4 | "She could see her breath" | | 5 | "Her ears popped as if" | | 6 | "She'd been in the grove" | | 7 | "It had a hollow quality," | | 8 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 9 | "Her eyes strained in the" | | 10 | "Her voice sounded smaller than" | | 11 | "She cleared her throat, tried" | | 12 | "She spun around, but the" | | 13 | "Her hands were trembling." | | 14 | "She curled them into fists." | | 15 | "It was laughter—except it wasn't." | | 16 | "It had the shape and" | | 17 | "It sounded like wind over" | | 18 | "She forced her hands to" | | 19 | "It seemed to come from" |
| | ratio | 0.271 | |
| 78.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory ducked beneath the oak's" | | 1 | "The boundary stones rose before" | | 2 | "She'd memorized the way here" | | 3 | "The usual dog walkers and" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant hung warm" | | 5 | "That was new—it had been" | | 6 | "She'd come to the grove" | | 7 | "Isolde's grove, Eva had called" | | 8 | "The pendant pulsed again, warmer" | | 9 | "Rory's jaw tightened." | | 10 | "A Hel portal." | | 11 | "That's what the heat meant." | | 12 | "She stepped through the standing" | | 13 | "The temperature dropped immediately, ten" | | 14 | "Her lungs seized." | | 15 | "She could see her breath" | | 16 | "The shift was so abrupt" | | 17 | "The grove spread before her," | | 18 | "Wildflowers in impossible profusion—lupines and" | | 19 | "The grass was green and" |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 42.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 17.54% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary stones rose before her like crooked teeth, older than memory, their bark crusted with lichen that gleamed silver in the moonlight." | | 1 | "Not just any clearing—*that* clearing, the one with the perpetually blooming wildflowers that shouldn't exist in November, the one that existed in a fold betwee…" | | 2 | "The shift was so abrupt that her body protested, a primal resistance that made her teeth ache." | | 3 | "Wildflowers in impossible profusion—lupines and foxgloves and roses that should have withered weeks ago." | | 4 | "Above, the sky was a different quality of dark than the sky outside; the stars were dimmer, somehow farther away, as if she were viewing them through layers of …" | | 5 | "The place felt different in the dark, watchful in a way that made her aware of how utterly isolated she was." | | 6 | "In the silence that followed, Rory became aware of how her own breathing sounded—loud, rapid, the sound of prey animal prey." | | 7 | "The wind picked up, carrying that rotten-fruit stench, and the flowers began to sway in patterns that didn't match the direction of the wind." | | 8 | "She could see the outline of it—the too-long arms, the head that tilted at that impossible angle." | | 9 | "But the whispering intensified, becoming a chorus, becoming a sound that was almost like applause." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |