Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6P8Q1CQAGT77DJ158WV

Run Details

Duration:
48.0s
Cost:
$0.047440
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
rain hammered against the pavement of Soho, a relentless rhythm that usually drove patrons into The Raven’s Nest seeking warmth and gin. Tonight, however, the bar was nearly empty, save for a couple in the corner murmuring over a shared bottle of red wine and the low hum of the refrigerator motors. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany counter, a linen cloth in his hand, polishing a highball glass until it caught the gleam of the overhead lights. His left knee throbbed—a deep, dull ache that always flared when the barometric pressure dropped. It was a physical receipt from a night in Prague he had spent the last decade trying to forget, a reminder that the past was never truly a foreign country; it was a tenant that refused to be evicted. The bell above the door chimed, cutting through the jazz playing softly on the speakers. Silas didn’t look up immediately. He finished the rotation of the cloth, set the glass down with a deliberate click, and then lifted his hazel eyes. The distinctive green neon sign mounted above the entrance cast a sickly, emerald wash over the newcomer. The man standing in the doorway was shaking off a dripping umbrella. He wore a charcoal wool coat that cost more than the annual lease on the bar, tailored to hide the shoulder holster Silas knew would be beneath the left arm. He was older now, the hair silvering at the temples, but the posture was unchanged—spine rigid, eyes sweeping the room in a single, practiced arc to assess threats and exits. "You need to fix that sign," the man said. His voice was smooth, cultured, and laced with a familiarity that made the hair on Silas’s arms stand up. "Green makes everyone look seasick." Silas felt the weight of the silver signet ring on his right hand as he gripped the edge of the bar. "It scares off the tourists, Arthur. Keeps the place quiet." Arthur Thorne walked toward the bar, his footsteps muffled by the damp runners. He didn't sit immediately. He stood looking at the wall behind Silas, where framed, yellowing maps of Europe and black-and-white photographs of indiscriminate street scenes were hung. He was studying a grainy photo of a bridge in Budapest. "Quiet," Arthur repeated, testing the word as if it were a coin he suspected was counterfeit. "I never took you for a man who enjoyed quiet, Silas. You used to say silence was just the fuse burning down." "People change." "Do they?" Arthur finally took the stool directly across from the taps. He placed his hands on the wood, fingers manicured, devoid of scars. "I’ll have a Laphroaig. Neat. If you have anything that isn’t watered down." Silas reached for the bottle without looking, the muscle memory of the barman overtaking the reflexes of the operative. He poured a generous measure and slid it across. "On the house. For the novelty of seeing a ghost." Arthur picked up the glass, swirled the amber liquid, and took a sip. "I’m not the ghost, Silas. You are. You vanished. Poof. One bad night in the Czech Republic and the Spymaster dissolves into the London fog." "I retired," Silas corrected, his voice dropping an octave. He shifted his weight to his right leg, easing the pressure on the bad knee. "There's a difference." "Is there?" Arthur’s eyes locked onto Silas’s. They were grey, cold, and assessing. "You’re running a pub in Soho. A front, we assumed. A safe house. But I’ve been watching for twenty minutes from the cafe across the street. You’re actually cleaning glasses. You’re actually... this." "It’s an honest living." "It’s a waste," Arthur snapped, the veneer of politeness cracking. "We have a situation in Beirut. The network is fractured. We need someone who knows how to pull the strings without getting tangled in them. I didn't come here for the whisky." Silas picked up another glass, if only to have something to do with his hands. "I’m done, Arthur. I have a mortgage. I have VAT receipts to file." "You have a limp," Arthur pointed out, gesturing with his glass toward the hidden side of the bar. "And you have a history. You think you can just play landlord? Pretend the things we did, the decisions you made, don't weigh more than these kegs you haul?" The door opened again, a violent shove that sent the bell jangling wildly. A young woman burst in, bringing a gust of wet wind with her. She was soaked, her straight, shoulder-length black hair plastered to her cheeks. She wore a bright yellow waterproof jacket with a stylized dragon logo on the breast, contrasting sharply with the dim, moody aesthetic of the bar. "I swear to god, Silas," she announced, breathless and shaking water from her sleeves. "If that lift breaks down one more time, I’m deducting it from the rent. I just walked up four flights with a backpack full of textbooks." Silas’s expression, previously made of granite, softened instantly. "Hello, Rory. Rough shift?" Aurora Carter, "Rory" to anyone who mattered within a three-mile radius, leaned against the end of the bar, wiping rain from her bright blue eyes. She didn't seem to notice the tension radiating from the two men, or perhaps she just didn't care. "Golden Empress got slammed. Tips were rubbish. And I think I failed my Tort Law mid-term." She finally looked at Arthur, offering a polite, tired nod. "Evening." Arthur stared at her, then looked back at Silas. The transition in Silas’s face—from the guarded operative to the weary, paternal figure—was jarring. "Arthur, this is Rory," Silas said, his voice firm, drawing a line in the sand. "She lives in the flat upstairs." "Tenant?" Arthur asked, his eyebrow arching. "Friend," Silas said. "Rory, there’s a shepherds pie in the warm oven back there if you haven't eaten." Rory’s face lit up. She pushed up her wet sleeve to check a cheap watch, revealing a small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "You’re a lifesaver, Si. Seriously. I might actually pay you on time this month." She grabbed a napkin, dried her face, and vanished through the door behind the bar that led to the private kitchen and the back stairs, oblivious to the fact that she had just walked through a field of tripwires. Silence reclaimed the room, but the texture of it had changed. It wasn't empty anymore; it was full of the life Rory had just dragged in. Arthur finished his drink in one long swallow and set the glass down hard. "She has no idea, does she?" "About what?" "About who you are." "She knows exactly who I are," Silas said, leaning forward, his hazel eyes hardening into flint. "I’m the guy who fixes the radiator and makes sure the front door locks properly. That’s the only identity that matters now." Arthur laughed, a dry, humorless sound. "You’re keeping a pet. Trying to simulate a normal life to make up for the red ink in your ledger. It’s sentimental, Silas. It’s dangerous. Civilians are liabilities." "She’s not a liability," Silas said quietly. "She’s the reason I get up. You wouldn’t understand, Arthur. You’re still in the game. You think the game is the world. It isn't." Arthur stood up, buttoning his expensive coat. He looked diminished somehow, despite the tailoring. The neon light caught the hollows under his eyes, revealing the exhaustion the adrenaline usually hid. "We were kings, Silas," Arthur whispered. "We were mechanics," Silas corrected. "And we broke more than we fixed." Arthur reached into his pocket and pulled out a business card. It was blank, save for a single phone number embossed in black. He slid it across the polished wood. "If the radiator gets boring," Arthur said. "If the knee starts hurting too much and you need to feel useful again." Silas didn't touch the card. He let it sit there, a small white rectangle on the dark mahogany. "Goodbye, Arthur. Don't come back." Arthur hesitated, looking at the door where Rory had disappeared, then back at his old friend. He nodded once, a sharp military gesture, and turned away. Silas watched him go. The door opened and closed, the bell chimed, and the green light swallowed Arthur Thorne back into the London night. Silas stood alone in the dim quiet. His knee throbbed with a vengeance. He looked at the card for a long time, his thumb brushing the silver signet ring on his other hand. Then, with a slow, deliberate movement, he picked up the card, tore it in half, and dropped the pieces into the bin beneath the sink. From the back room, the smell of heated shepherds pie began to drift out, savory and warm, overpowering the scent of stale rain and old regrets. Silas picked up the linen cloth and went back to polishing the glass.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.8889% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora Carter, to anyone who mattered within a three-mile radius, leaned against the end of the bar, wiping rain from her bright blue eyes. [bright]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
79.8387% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1488
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"softly"
2"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.6774% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1488
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"throbbed"
count2
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"fractured"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"fix that sign"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean31.45
std19.57
cv0.622
sampleLengths
052
180
215
343
472
533
631
751
838
92
1037
1138
1238
1327
1446
154
1642
1728
1847
1913
2050
2140
2212
2370
2423
2521
266
2718
2877
2926
3020
312
324
3338
3434
3531
3630
376
3812
3930
4021
4118
425
4326
4424
4558
4639
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"was unchanged"
1"were hung"
2"was soaked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was shaking"
1"was studying"
2"was jarring"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1038
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03275529865125241
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.016377649325626204
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean14.35
std9.12
cv0.635
sampleLengths
022
130
226
315
439
515
65
721
817
912
1030
1130
129
1319
145
1521
1610
1713
184
1923
2011
2116
2222
232
2412
2512
2613
2719
289
2910
3013
3125
329
3315
343
357
366
3733
384
3910
4032
4115
4213
4318
4429
4513
4613
4712
4825
4914
44.9838% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.33980582524271846
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners35
8.3333% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Arthur repeated, testing the word as if it were a coin he suspected was counterfeit (repeat, test be suspect be)"
1"Silas corrected, his voice dropping an octave (correct, drop)"
2"Arthur snapped, the veneer of politeness cracking (snap, crack)"
3"Arthur pointed out, gesturing with his glass toward the hidden side of the bar (point out, gesture)"
4"she announced, breathless and shaking water from her sleeves (announce)"
5"Aurora Carter, to anyone who mattered within a three-mile radius, leaned against the end of the bar, wiping rain from her bright blue eyes. (matter lean wipe)"
6"Silas said, leaning forward, his hazel eyes hardening into flint (say, harden)"
7"Silas said quietly (say quietly)"
8"Arthur whispered (whisper)"
9"Silas corrected (correct)"
86.8072%