| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she demanded again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 86.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1453 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1453 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "looming" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "loomed" | | 15 | "tinged" | | 16 | "grave" | | 17 | "symphony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 97.89% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Panic makes you miss the细节." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1444 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "Breathe." | | 1 | "Ror... y..." | | 2 | "Laila." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1439 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Grove | 3 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a hole in the world, a space" | | 1 | "sounded like wind rushing through a hollow" |
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| 61.50% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.385 | | wordCount | 1444 | | matches | | 0 | "not according to any city map, but here they stood, silent sentinels guarding a threshold" | | 1 | "not a voice, but a simulation of one" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 28.31 | | std | 20.45 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 100 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 93.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "was made" | | 1 | "were twisted" | | 2 | "was tinged" | | 3 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 241 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "was almost burning" | | 2 | "wasn't warning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the earth ahead—great, rough-hewn monoliths of petrified oak that marked the edge of the Grove." | | 1 | "The sounds of the distant city—the hum of the A205, the sirens, the late-night traffic—vanished as if sliced off by a blade." | | 2 | "The flora here didn’t obey the seasons; it bloomed with a frantic, parasitic vitality, feeding on the magic that leaked through the pocket dimension." | | 3 | "This wasn't the gentle warmth she associated with the proximity of a Hel portal; this was an aggressive, biting heat." | | 4 | "They were still, yet Rory felt a sudden, prickling sensation at the nape of her neck—the instinctive certainty of eyes watching." | | 5 | "It was subtle—dry leaves skittering over stone." | | 6 | "A sound drifted from it—not a voice, but a simulation of one." | | 7 | "She could hear it—a slithering, wet sound, like raw meat dragged across stones." | | 8 | "A hand, or something shaped like one—long, impossibly thin, and cold as ice—brushed the back of her neck." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1453 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ahead—great, rough-hewn" | | 1 | "white-hot against her" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.025464556090846524 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007570543702684102 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 11.65 | | std | 7 | | cv | 0.601 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 37.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the sound." | | 1 | "Just the looming darkness of" | | 2 | "Then, a rustle." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 72.99% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She could feel the pull." | | 1 | "It wasn't a sound or" | | 2 | "They shouldn't have been there," | | 3 | "She paused, her breath misting" | | 4 | "Her cool-headed nature, the trait" | | 5 | "It was a warning, yes," | | 6 | "She ducked between two of" | | 7 | "It was beautiful, in a" | | 8 | "She took a few steps" | | 9 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 10 | "It was reacting to something" | | 11 | "They were still, yet Rory" | | 12 | "She stopped walking." | | 13 | "You're being paranoid, she told" | | 14 | "She reached up and touched" | | 15 | "It was almost burning now." | | 16 | "It was subtle—dry leaves skittering" | | 17 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 18 | "She wasn't a fighter, but" | | 19 | "She looked for the path" |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 54.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The GPS on her phone" | | 3 | "She could feel the pull." | | 4 | "It wasn't a sound or" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant, usually a" | | 6 | "Rory stepped over a gnarled" | | 7 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 8 | "They shouldn't have been there," | | 9 | "She paused, her breath misting" | | 10 | "Her cool-headed nature, the trait" | | 11 | "This was stupid." | | 12 | "It was a warning, yes," | | 13 | "She ducked between two of" | | 14 | "The transition was instantaneous, a" | | 15 | "The sounds of the distant" | | 16 | "Rory stood in the Fae" | | 17 | "It was beautiful, in a" | | 18 | "Wildflowers, impossible hybrids of violet" | | 19 | "The flora here didn’t obey" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "To anyone else, this was" | | 1 | "To Rory, the boundary was" | | 2 | "Just as she crossed the" | | 3 | "To anyone else, it would" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the earth ahead—great, rough-hewn monoliths of petrified oak that marked the edge of the Grove." | | 1 | "They shouldn't have been there, not according to any city map, but here they stood, silent sentinels guarding a threshold that didn't belong in modern London." | | 2 | "Her cool-headed nature, the trait that had got her through three years of an abusive relationship and a frantic escape to the city, urged her to turn back." | | 3 | "But the pendant pulsed again, a rhythmic heat that seared through her skin, dragging her forward." | | 4 | "The transition was instantaneous, a physical pressure change that popped her ears." | | 5 | "The sounds of the distant city—the hum of the A205, the sirens, the late-night traffic—vanished as if sliced off by a blade." | | 6 | "Wildflowers, impossible hybrids of violet and crimson, bloomed in thick carpets across the clearing, their petals glowing with a faint, sickly luminescence that…" | | 7 | "The flora here didn’t obey the seasons; it bloomed with a frantic, parasitic vitality, feeding on the magic that leaked through the pocket dimension." | | 8 | "The earth here felt spongy, too yielding, as if the soil was made of decomposing matter centuries old." | | 9 | "It was reacting to something specific, something that set the stone on edge." | | 10 | "It sounded like wind rushing through a hollow cavity, a sighing resonance that formed syllables she almost recognized." | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed in time with the sound, vibrating against her sternum, syncing with the entity before her." | | 12 | "She sprinted toward the standing stones, her boots tearing through the fleshy flowers, crushing them underfoot." | | 13 | "The stones loomed ahead, jagged silhouettes against a sky that was suddenly the wrong color." | | 14 | "She hurdled a fallen log, stumbling as she landed, her wrist twisting painfully." | | 15 | "Rory knelt on the damp grass, her chest heaving, clutching the Heartstone Pendant." | | 16 | "She stood up, her legs trembling, and didn't stop running until she reached the streetlights." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she demanded again (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |