Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6PBSTG28KZ8QQD8Z20G

Run Details

Duration:
47.5s
Cost:
$0.049816
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of The Raven’s Nest buzzed with a low, electric hum that seemed to vibrate against the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door, the damp chill of the London streets clinging to her nylon jacket. She shook her head, sending droplets of water flying from her shoulder-length black hair, and exhaled a long breath that tasted of petrol and fatigue. Inside, the world was amber and dust. The bar smelled of gin, old paper, and the peculiar, comforting mustiness of a library that served alcohol. The walls were plastered with yellowing maps and black-and-white photographs—captured moments of landscapes that no longer existed and people who had long since stopped waiting for anything. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany counter, his movements economical and precise. He was polishing a tumbler with a rag that had seen better decades. As Rory approached, he looked up, his hazel eyes catching the dim light. "You look like a drowned rat, Rory," Silas said, his voice a gravelly baritone. He set the glass down. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against the wood. "Charming as ever, Silas," she replied, unzipping her jacket. She could still smell the faint aroma of five-spice and roasted duck on her clothes—a souvenir from her shift at the Golden Empress. "It’s coming down in sheets out there. I think the gutters are finally surrendering." "Gin?" "Tea. Please." Silas didn't smile, but the crinkles around his eyes deepened. He turned to the kettle, his left leg dragging slightly—a rhythmic hitch, the legacy of a Prague winter and a botched extraction he never spoke about. Rory watched him, grateful for his quiet solidity. She turned to scan the room, a habit she had picked up from living above a bar frequented by people who preferred shadows. The Nest was mostly empty on a Tuesday. A couple whispered in a booth near the hidden bookshelf entrance. An old man nursed a stout near the radiator. And then there was the woman at the corner table. She was staring at Rory. Rory froze, her hand halfway to her hair. The woman wore a camel-hair coat that probably cost more than Rory’s entire year of rent. Her hair was a blonde bob, sharp enough to cut glass, and her posture was rigid, terrified, and painfully familiar. "Laila?" the woman whispered. The name hit Rory like a physical blow. It was a dead name, a ghost from Cardiff, a sound that belonged to lecture halls and Sunday roasts and the heavy expectations of Brendan Carter. "It’s Aurora now," she said, her voice dropping an octave, stripping away the Welsh lilt she had worked so hard to bury under London concrete. The woman stood up. It was Sarah. Sarah Jenkins. Top of the class in Contract Law, daughter of a judge, and the person Rory had been intended to become. "My God," Sarah said, stepping forward but stopping short of a hug. She looked at Rory’s wet jacket, the worn denim, the scuffed boots. Her eyes cataloged the details with the ruthlessness of a surveyor assessing a condemned building. "We thought... honestly, Laila, we didn't know if you were alive. Your father said—" "I imagine he said a lot of things." Rory walked over to the table, moving with a weary grace. She didn't invite Sarah to sit, but she sat down herself, needing the support. "What are you doing here, Sarah?" "Review conference. Commercial litigation." Sarah sank back into her chair, looking around the bar with thinly veiled distaste. "I saw the green sign. I just needed a drink. I had no idea you... frequented places like this." "I live here," Rory said. "Upstairs." Sarah’s eyes widened. "In Soho? Above a pub?" "It’s a bar," Rory corrected. She placed her hands on the table. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a souvenir from a childhood fall off a garden wall—caught the light. Sarah’s gaze locked onto it. It was the only punctuation mark in their history that remained unchanged. "You look different," Sarah said softly. "Harder." "I’m twenty-five, Sarah. Not eighteen." "It’s been three years since you left. Just vanished." Sarah leaned in, her voice lowering to a conspiratorial whisper. "Evan was a wreck, you know. He played the grieving saint for months." Rory felt a cold spike of adrenaline in her gut, sharp and familiar. "I’m sure he did." "He told everyone you had a breakdown. That the pressure of the Pre-Law program was too much for you." Sarah reached out, her manicured fingers hovering over Rory’s rugged hand but not touching it. "But looking at you... you don't look broken. You look like you're ready to hit someone." "I make deliveries," Rory said flatly. "I negotiate traffic. I deal with people who think they own the pavement. It requires a certain level of alertness." Silas appeared at the table. He didn't ask; he simply placed a steaming mug of tea in front of Rory and a fresh glass of Pinot Noir in front of Sarah. He lingered for a fraction of a second, his auburn beard twitching as he assessed Sarah. He offered no greeting, just a silent, protective presence before limping back to his station. "Who is that?" Sarah asked, watching him go. "My landlord. My friend." "He looks dangerous." "Only if you cross him," Rory said, taking a sip of the tea. It was Earl Grey, strong and hot. "Why did you really stop, Sarah? You don't drink Pinot Noir in dive bars alone." Sarah swirled the wine, watching the red legs cling to the glass. "I hate it." "The wine?" " The firm. The hours. The way my father looks at me like I’m an investment portfolio that’s performing adequately." Sarah looked up, and for the first time, the polished veneer cracked. Her plenty-colored eyes were rimmed with exhaustion. "I saw you, Laila. I mean, Aurora. I saw you walk in. You looked wet and tired, but you walked in like you owned the place. Like you weren't afraid of what anyone thought of you." Rory traced the rim of her mug. "I stopped caring about what people thought when I realized their opinions wouldn't pay my rent or keep me safe." "Brendan misses you," Sarah lied. It was a clumsy lie, poorly constructed. "Brendan misses the idea of me," Rory corrected gently. "He misses the daughter who was going to take over the practice. He doesn't miss the girl who packed a bag in the middle of the night because her boyfriend had a temper that he experimented with behind closed doors." Sarah flinched. The confirmation of the rumor hung in the air between them, heavy as smoke. "We suspected. But nobody asked." "No. Nobody asked." Theme silence stretched, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator behind the bar and the distant sirens on Shaftesbury Avenue. Rory looked at Sarahreally looked at her—and saw the cage she had escaped. It was a gilded cage, lined with silk and statute books, but it was a cage nonetheless. Sarah was still inside, rattling the bars with her expensive wine and her hollow career. "I’m happy, Sarah," Rory said. The truth of it surprised her. It wasn't a euphoric happiness; it was the quiet, sturdy satisfaction of survival. "I’m not rich. I’m not a barrister. But I sleep at night." Sarah looked at Rory’s hands again. The fingernails were short, unpainted. There was a small burn mark on her thumb from a hot sauce container earlier that day. "I envy you," Sarah whispered. The admission seemed to terrify her. "God, that sounds stupid. I make six figures. I have a flat in Kensington. But I look at you, and I feel... trapped." Rory leaned back, the leather of the booth creaking. "Door's always open, Sarah. The way out isn't hidden. It’s just heavy." Sarah finished her wine in one long gulp. She stood up, smoothing the front of her coat, reassembling the armor of the successful solicitor. The moment of vulnerability was closing, sealing up like a wound healing over too fast to be clean. "If I see your father," Sarah said, her voice regaining its professional crispness, "what should I tell him?" Rory looked at the crescent scar on her wrist. She remembered the day she got it, crying in the garden while her mother fussed and her father checked his watch, worried about being late for court. "Tell him you didn't see me," Rory said. "Tell him Laila is gone." Sarah nodded. A brief, sharp nod. She hesitated, as if she wanted to say something more, perhaps an apology for the years of silence, or for the defense she never mounted on Rory's behalf. But the words died in her throat. She turned and walked toward the door, her heels clicking a rhythmic retreat on the wooden floorboards. Rory watched her go. The heavy door swung shut, cutting off the view of the street. Silas moved from behind the bar. He came around with the pot of tea and refilled her mug. He didn't ask who the woman was. He didn't need to. In his line of work, he knew what it looked like when the past came knocking. "She forgot her umbrella," Silas noted, nodding toward the stand by the door. "She won't come back for it," Rory said. "No. I suppose not." Silas rested his hand on the back of the booth. "You alright, Rory?" Rory looked up at him. His face was a map of its own, scarred and lined, grave and kind. She took a breath, inhaling the scent of the bar—her home. "Yeah, Si," she said, wrapping her hands around the warm ceramic. "I'm just fine." She took a sip of tea, the heat spreading through her chest, chasing away the damp chill of the rain and the colder chill of memory. Outside, the green neon sign buzzed on, a beacon for the lost and the found.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Silas said, his voice a gravelly baritone [gravelly]"
1"she said, her voice dropping an octave, stripping away the Welsh lilt she had worked so hard to bury under London concrete [away so]"
2"Sarah said softly [softly]"
3"Rory said flatly [flatly]"
4"Rory corrected gently [gently]"
70.2558% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1681
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"really"
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Sarah"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.1535% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1681
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"cataloged"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"silk"
2"cataloged"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"is that?\" Sarah"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean28.22
std19.39
cv0.687
sampleLengths
069
152
238
331
446
51
62
744
851
910
105
1144
124
1334
1425
1529
1653
1739
1837
196
208
2148
227
235
2432
2517
2650
2726
2862
298
304
313
3235
3315
342
3575
3627
3712
3849
3921
403
4166
4236
4328
4434
4521
4642
4718
4836
4913
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"were plastered"
1"been intended"
2"were rimmed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was staring"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1227
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.027709861450692746
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011409942950285249
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean11.98
std7.96
cv0.664
sampleLengths
024
120
225
37
418
527
612
713
813
914
105
1112
129
1323
1414
151
162
1710
1826
198
2023
218
2211
239
2410
255
268
2716
2820
294
308
3126
3225
334
343
352
3620
3712
3812
3915
4014
4119
4214
436
4418
4519
465
471
483
495
44.8441% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.31654676258992803
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners44
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"Silas said, his voice a gravelly baritone (say, gravelly baritone)"
1"she replied, unzipping her jacket (reply, unzip)"
2"whispered (whisper)"
3"she said, her voice dropping an octave, stripping away the Welsh lilt she had worked so hard to bury under London concrete (say, drop strip away work so bury)"
4"Sarah said, stepping forward but stopping short of a hug (say, step stopping short)"
5"Rory corrected (correct)"
6"Sarah said softly (say softly)"
7"Rory said flatly (say flatly)"
8"Rory said, taking a sip of the tea (say, take)"
9"Sarah lied (lie)"
10"Rory corrected gently (correct gently)"
11"Sarah whispered (whisper)"
12"Sarah said, her voice regaining its professional crispness (say, regain)"
13"Silas noted, nodding toward the stand by the door (note, nod)"
14"she said, wrapping her hands around the warm ceramic (say, wrap)"
81.6424%