| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1418 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1418 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "pounding" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "predictable" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "synchronized" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "trembled" | | 17 | "racing" | | 18 | "dancing" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "chilling" | | 21 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "d in anger" | | 1 | "was afraid" |
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| 65.64% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1417 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1391 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Hel | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | November | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Rory | 8 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Tylwyth | 1 | | Teg | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Earth | 2 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "November" | | 6 | "Golden" | | 7 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "faces that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "seemed closer than it had been a moment before" | | 2 | "felt like an invitation" | | 3 | "felt like the final mistake, the thing" | | 4 | "as if waiting for her decision" | | 5 | "sounded like her own name spoken in a doze" |
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| 58.86% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.411 | | wordCount | 1417 | | matches | | 0 | "Not swaying in a breeze, but rotating on their stems, their vibrant faces tilting to foll" | | 1 | "not toward the edge, but deeper into the center of the glade, toward the darkest clus" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.85% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 50.61 | | std | 22.97 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 101 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 82 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 76 |
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| 92.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "was illuminated" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "was distorted" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 87.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 237 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "were turning" | | 2 | "was reacting" | | 3 | "was pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moved differently here; an hour inside could be minutes or days outside." | | 1 | "It wasn't just hot; it throbbed, a slow, rhythmic beat that matched the erratic pounding of her own heart." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in violent swathes of color that didn't exist in nature—neon purples, bleeding reds, and whites so bright they seemed to emit their own light." | | 3 | "The silence wasn't an absence of sound; it was a presence, a held breath waiting to be exhaled." | | 4 | "They didn't attack; they just watched, converging slowly from the periphery." | | 5 | "Hiding wouldn't work; they could smell her fear, taste the adrenaline in the air." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 433 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.025404157043879907 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009237875288683603 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 12.32 | | std | 7.67 | | cv | 0.622 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 46.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3652173913043478 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 31.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe it was through the" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 72.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the boundary" | | 1 | "She had come because the" | | 2 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 3 | "It wasn't just hot; it" | | 4 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 5 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 6 | "They shouldn't be blooming in" | | 7 | "They shouldn't be blooming at" | | 8 | "She kept her hand near" | | 9 | "She needed to find the" | | 10 | "It came from her left," | | 11 | "She turned slowly, her muscles" | | 12 | "It was the sensation of" | | 13 | "She told herself it was" | | 14 | "His violence was predictable, grounded" | | 15 | "She forced her feet to" | | 16 | "She gritted her teeth, refusing" | | 17 | "It was her only guide." | | 18 | "She blinked, rubbing her eyes" | | 19 | "It came from everywhere and" |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 73.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Grove" | | 1 | "She stepped over the boundary" | | 2 | "Here, the air was still" | | 3 | "Rory checked her watch, a" | | 4 | "Time moved differently here; an" | | 5 | "The thought tightened a knot" | | 6 | "She had come because the" | | 7 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gem, no" | | 9 | "It wasn't just hot; it" | | 10 | "The unknown benefactor who had" | | 11 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 12 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed in violent swathes" | | 14 | "They shouldn't be blooming in" | | 15 | "They shouldn't be blooming at" | | 16 | "That was the first wrongness." | | 17 | "The second was the silence." | | 18 | "The silence wasn't an absence" | | 19 | "Rory took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.774 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "If the stone was this" | | 1 | "If time was distorted, running" | | 2 | "Now, standing in a pocket" | | 3 | "If the portal was here," |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 85.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the boundary where the ancient oak standing stones rose from the earth, their bark gnarled into faces that seemed to shift when she wasn't look…" | | 1 | "It wasn't just hot; it throbbed, a slow, rhythmic beat that matched the erratic pounding of her own heart." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in violent swathes of color that didn't exist in nature—neon purples, bleeding reds, and whites so bright they seemed to emit their own ligh…" | | 3 | "Rory took a step forward, her boots sinking into moss that felt spongy, almost fleshy beneath her soles." | | 4 | "Tall, impossibly thin figures with faces that were smooth blanks, save for mouths that hung open in silent screams." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice sounding flat and dead in the heavy air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |