Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6PDB9JPFKQR6W166H1G

Run Details

Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.000569
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like the memory of a half-remembered dream. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, the weight of the Heartstone pendant pressing against her sternum through the thin fabric of her hoodie. It had been warm all evening, a faint, insistent pulse against her skin, and now it thrummed like a second heartbeat, urging her forward. She shouldn’t have come at night. The thought slithered through her mind, unwelcome. She *knew* that. Knew the park closed at dusk, knew the standing stones at the edge of the grove were supposed to be off-limits, knew the way the trees here leaned in too close, their branches knitting together like skeletal fingers. But the pendant had grown hotter with every mile she’d biked from her flat, and the note tucked into her pocket—*Find the grove. Bring the stone. Midnight.*—had been too cryptic, too *urgent*, to ignore. Rory exhaled sharply, her breath fogging in the unnaturally still air. The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces carved with spirals and symbols that made her eyes ache if she stared too long. She hesitated at the boundary, her fingers brushing the rough bark of an oak. The pendant flared against her skin, a sharp, almost painful heat. “Right,” she muttered. “No turning back now.” She stepped between the stones. The world *shifted*. Not a sound, not a gust of wind—just a sudden, sickening lurch, like the ground had tilted beneath her feet. Rory staggered, her boots sinking into soft moss that hadn’t been there a second ago. The air was warmer here, thick with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been in bloom in October. She turned slowly, her pulse hammering in her throat. The grove was wrong. Not in any way she could immediately name, but in the way a half-remembered face is wrong when you realize the eyes don’t quite match. The trees were too tall, their trunks too smooth, their leaves too *still*, as if they weren’t leaves at all but something else, something pretending. The wildflowers at her feet glowed faintly, their petals pulsing with a light that wasn’t quite light, more like the afterimage of a dream. Rory swallowed hard. “Okay. Just… find whatever you’re supposed to find and get out.” She forced herself to move, her boots making no sound against the moss. The pendant’s heat was a brand now, searing through her hoodie. She pulled it out, the silver chain cool against her fingers, the crimson gemstone glowing like a dying ember. It pulsed once, twice—then the glow steadied, pointing toward the center of the grove. Toward the *thing* standing there. Rory froze. At first, she thought it was a statue. A figure carved from pale stone, its features too sharp, too *precise*, to be human. It stood in the center of a ring of mushrooms, their caps glowing the same eerie blue as the flowers. Then it *moved*. Not a twitch, not a shift—just a slow, deliberate turn of its head, as if it had been waiting for her. Its eyes were black, depthless, and when it smiled, its teeth were too white, too *many*. “You brought it,” it said. Its voice was like wind through dead leaves, dry and whispering. “Good.” Rory’s breath hitched. She took a step back, her fingers tightening around the pendant. “Who—what are you?” The thing tilted its head, the movement too fluid, too *wrong*. “You don’t know?” It took a step forward, and the mushrooms at its feet withered, their glow snuffing out like candles. “I am the door. And you, little thief, are the key.” The pendant burned against her palm. Rory’s mind raced. *Door. Key.* The Hel portals. The notes Eva had shown her, the ones that talked about gateways and things that slipped through. She’d thought it was all metaphor. She’d been *wrong*. “You’re not supposed to be here,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. The thing laughed, a sound like cracking ice. “Neither are you.” A rustle in the trees. Rory’s head snapped toward the sound, her heart hammering. The branches trembled, though there was no wind. Shadows pooled at the base of the trunks, too thick, too *deep*, and for a second, she thought she saw *eyes* in the dark. Dozens of them. Watching. The pendant pulsed again, urgent now. Rory didn’t think—she *ran*. She didn’t know where she was going, only that she had to get away from the thing in the grove, away from the watching shadows, away from the way the air itself seemed to press in around her. The trees blurred past, their branches snagging at her hair, her clothes. The pendant’s glow was her only light, casting long, wavering shadows that didn’t match the movement of her body. Something *laughed* behind her. Not the thing from the grove. This was higher, lighter, like a child’s giggle—but wrong, *so wrong*, because it came from too many directions at once. Rory’s skin prickled. She didn’t look back. A root snagged her ankle. She went down hard, her palms scraping against the moss. The pendant flew from her grip, skittering across the ground. She lunged for it, her fingers closing around the chain just as the laughter cut off. Silence. Then—a *breath*. Warm. Wet. Right against the back of her neck. Rory *screamed*. She twisted, her fist swinging blindly. Her knuckles connected with something solid, something that *hissed* in pain. She didn’t wait to see what it was. She scrambled to her feet and ran, the pendant clutched in her fist, its glow the only thing keeping the dark at bay. The trees thinned. Ahead, she could see the standing stones, their symbols glowing faintly in the dark. *Almost there. Almost—* A hand closed around her wrist. Rory *screamed* again, wrenching free. She stumbled, her back hitting one of the stones. The moment she touched it, the world *lurched* again, the grove twisting, the trees groaning as if in pain. The thing from the grove was there, its black eyes wide, its mouth stretched in a snarl. “You don’t belong here,” it hissed. Rory didn’t answer. She *shoved* the pendant against the stone. Light *exploded*. A sound like a thousand voices screaming at once. The ground trembled. The thing in the grove *shrieked*, its form unraveling like smoke in the wind. The trees groaned, their branches twisting, their leaves blackening. Rory clapped her hands over her ears, her eyes squeezed shut— And then. Silence. She opened her eyes. She was back in Richmond Park. The standing stones loomed around her, their symbols dark. The air was cold, the scent of damp earth and autumn leaves sharp in her nose. Her hands trembled. The pendant was cool against her palm, its glow faded to a dull ember. Rory looked down at her wrist. The crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident was *gone*. In its place was a mark—black as ink, shaped like a key.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1183
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1183
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"lurch"
count1
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count3
8
word"wavering"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"lurched"
count1
11
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"loomed"
3"lurch"
4"searing"
5"pulsed"
6"raced"
7"trembled"
8"wavering"
9"silence"
10"lurched"
11"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"realize"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans27
markdownWords37
totalWords1176
ratio0.031
matches
0"knew"
1"Find the grove. Bring the stone. Midnight."
2"urgent"
3"shifted"
4"still"
5"thing"
6"precise"
7"moved"
8"many"
9"wrong"
10"Door. Key."
11"wrong"
12"deep"
13"eyes"
14"ran"
15"laughed"
16"so wrong"
17"breath"
18"screamed"
19"hissed"
20"Almost there. Almost—"
21"screamed"
22"lurched"
23"shoved"
24"exploded"
25"shrieked"
26"gone"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1126
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory15
Heartstone1
October1
Hel1
Eva1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"October"
globalScore0.834
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite match"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.85
wordCount1176
matches
0"Not in any way she could immediately name, but in the way a half-remembered face is wrong"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean25.57
std24.55
cv0.96
sampleLengths
080
16
282
358
47
55
63
763
84
974
1014
1157
125
132
1446
1537
1617
1717
1843
1940
2014
2111
2250
2310
2469
254
2633
2741
281
292
309
312
3248
3320
346
3550
366
3710
382
3946
402
411
424
4348
4415
4512
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"were supposed"
1"was *gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences118
ratio0.093
matches
0"But the pendant had grown hotter with every mile she’d biked from her flat, and the note tucked into her pocket—*Find the grove."
1"Midnight.*—had been too cryptic, too *urgent*, to ignore."
2"Not a sound, not a gust of wind—just a sudden, sickening lurch, like the ground had tilted beneath her feet."
3"It pulsed once, twice—then the glow steadied, pointing toward the center of the grove."
4"Not a twitch, not a shift—just a slow, deliberate turn of its head, as if it had been waiting for her."
5"Rory didn’t think—she *ran*."
6"This was higher, lighter, like a child’s giggle—but wrong, *so wrong*, because it came from too many directions at once."
7"Then—a *breath*."
8"Almost—*"
9"Rory clapped her hands over her ears, her eyes squeezed shut—"
10"In its place was a mark—black as ink, shaped like a key."
88.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1137
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount60
adverbRatio0.052770448548812667
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008795074758135445
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean9.97
std7.97
cv0.8
sampleLengths
032
124
224
36
47
53
638
723
83
98
1011
1122
1214
1311
143
154
165
173
1820
1915
2019
219
224
2325
2425
2524
263
2711
2813
2911
3019
3114
325
332
348
3515
3620
373
3821
3916
405
4111
421
433
4411
453
4611
4721
4811
496
45.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3220338983050847
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners38
34.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Then it *moved*."
ratio0.01
90.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences96
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"It had been warm all"
2"She shouldn’t have come at"
3"She *knew* that."
4"She hesitated at the boundary,"
5"She stepped between the stones."
6"She turned slowly, her pulse"
7"She forced herself to move,"
8"She pulled it out, the"
9"It pulsed once, twice—then the"
10"It stood in the center"
11"Its eyes were black, depthless,"
12"Its voice was like wind"
13"She took a step back,"
14"It took a step forward,"
15"She’d thought it was all"
16"She’d been *wrong*."
17"she said, her voice steadier"
18"She didn’t know where she"
19"She didn’t look back."
ratio0.323
32.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences96
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"It had been warm all"
3"She shouldn’t have come at"
4"The thought slithered through her"
5"She *knew* that."
6"Midnight.*—had been too cryptic, too"
7"Rory exhaled sharply, her breath"
8"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
9"She hesitated at the boundary,"
10"The pendant flared against her"
11"She stepped between the stones."
12"The world *shifted*."
13"Rory staggered, her boots sinking"
14"The air was warmer here,"
15"She turned slowly, her pulse"
16"The grove was wrong."
17"The trees were too tall,"
18"The wildflowers at her feet"
19"Rory swallowed hard."
ratio0.854
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like the memory of a half…"
1"The air was warmer here, thick with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been in bloom in October."
2"The trees were too tall, their trunks too smooth, their leaves too *still*, as if they weren’t leaves at all but something else, something pretending."
3"The wildflowers at her feet glowed faintly, their petals pulsing with a light that wasn’t quite light, more like the afterimage of a dream."
4"Not a twitch, not a shift—just a slow, deliberate turn of its head, as if it had been waiting for her."
5"The pendant’s glow was her only light, casting long, wavering shadows that didn’t match the movement of her body."
6"Her knuckles connected with something solid, something that *hissed* in pain."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"it hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.364
74.9839%