| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1183 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1183 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "lurch" | | 4 | "searing" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "raced" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "lurched" | | 11 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 27 | | markdownWords | 37 | | totalWords | 1176 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "knew" | | 1 | "Find the grove. Bring the stone. Midnight." | | 2 | "urgent" | | 3 | "shifted" | | 4 | "still" | | 5 | "thing" | | 6 | "precise" | | 7 | "moved" | | 8 | "many" | | 9 | "wrong" | | 10 | "Door. Key." | | 11 | "wrong" | | 12 | "deep" | | 13 | "eyes" | | 14 | "ran" | | 15 | "laughed" | | 16 | "so wrong" | | 17 | "breath" | | 18 | "screamed" | | 19 | "hissed" | | 20 | "Almost there. Almost—" | | 21 | "screamed" | | 22 | "lurched" | | 23 | "shoved" | | 24 | "exploded" | | 25 | "shrieked" | | 26 | "gone" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1126 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 1 | | October | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 0.834 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.85 | | wordCount | 1176 | | matches | | 0 | "Not in any way she could immediately name, but in the way a half-remembered face is wrong" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 25.57 | | std | 24.55 | | cv | 0.96 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 82 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 69 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 46 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 12 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "were supposed" | | 1 | "was *gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "But the pendant had grown hotter with every mile she’d biked from her flat, and the note tucked into her pocket—*Find the grove." | | 1 | "Midnight.*—had been too cryptic, too *urgent*, to ignore." | | 2 | "Not a sound, not a gust of wind—just a sudden, sickening lurch, like the ground had tilted beneath her feet." | | 3 | "It pulsed once, twice—then the glow steadied, pointing toward the center of the grove." | | 4 | "Not a twitch, not a shift—just a slow, deliberate turn of its head, as if it had been waiting for her." | | 5 | "Rory didn’t think—she *ran*." | | 6 | "This was higher, lighter, like a child’s giggle—but wrong, *so wrong*, because it came from too many directions at once." | | 7 | "Then—a *breath*." | | 8 | "Almost—*" | | 9 | "Rory clapped her hands over her ears, her eyes squeezed shut—" | | 10 | "In its place was a mark—black as ink, shaped like a key." |
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| 88.83% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1137 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.052770448548812667 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008795074758135445 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 9.97 | | std | 7.97 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 45.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3220338983050847 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 34.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 90.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It had been warm all" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 3 | "She *knew* that." | | 4 | "She hesitated at the boundary," | | 5 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 6 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 7 | "She forced herself to move," | | 8 | "She pulled it out, the" | | 9 | "It pulsed once, twice—then the" | | 10 | "It stood in the center" | | 11 | "Its eyes were black, depthless," | | 12 | "Its voice was like wind" | | 13 | "She took a step back," | | 14 | "It took a step forward," | | 15 | "She’d thought it was all" | | 16 | "She’d been *wrong*." | | 17 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 18 | "She didn’t know where she" | | 19 | "She didn’t look back." |
| | ratio | 0.323 | |
| 32.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It had been warm all" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 4 | "The thought slithered through her" | | 5 | "She *knew* that." | | 6 | "Midnight.*—had been too cryptic, too" | | 7 | "Rory exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 8 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 9 | "She hesitated at the boundary," | | 10 | "The pendant flared against her" | | 11 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 12 | "The world *shifted*." | | 13 | "Rory staggered, her boots sinking" | | 14 | "The air was warmer here," | | 15 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 16 | "The grove was wrong." | | 17 | "The trees were too tall," | | 18 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 19 | "Rory swallowed hard." |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like the memory of a half…" | | 1 | "The air was warmer here, thick with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been in bloom in October." | | 2 | "The trees were too tall, their trunks too smooth, their leaves too *still*, as if they weren’t leaves at all but something else, something pretending." | | 3 | "The wildflowers at her feet glowed faintly, their petals pulsing with a light that wasn’t quite light, more like the afterimage of a dream." | | 4 | "Not a twitch, not a shift—just a slow, deliberate turn of its head, as if it had been waiting for her." | | 5 | "The pendant’s glow was her only light, casting long, wavering shadows that didn’t match the movement of her body." | | 6 | "Her knuckles connected with something solid, something that *hissed* in pain." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "it hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |