| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1515 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1515 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "quickened" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1505 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1504 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | November | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a stone from a riverbed, heav" | | 1 | "tasted like copper and old earth" |
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| 67.11% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.329 | | wordCount | 1505 | | matches | | 0 | "Not colder, exactly, but thinner, as if the oxygen had been diluted with something el" | | 1 | "not immediately, but the wrongness settled into her bones like a chill" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 26.88 | | std | 20.32 | | cv | 0.756 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 64 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 59 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 48 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 61 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 86.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "been diluted" | | 1 | "been carved" | | 2 | "been crushed" | | 3 | "been placed" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "been used" | | 6 | "was gone" | | 7 | "been given" |
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| 66.67% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 250 | | matches | | 0 | "was warming" | | 1 | "were playing" | | 2 | "were trying" | | 3 | "was like stepping" | | 4 | "were already blooming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 151 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd expected warmth—that was what it did, wasn't it?" | | 1 | "This was something else—a presence that swallowed noise whole." | | 2 | "But she couldn't help it—the pattern had been carved deep, those years of learning to read the silences in a room, to track the movements of someone who meant her harm." | | 3 | "She didn't disbelieve, either—not after everything she'd seen since the pendant had found its way to her." | | 4 | "The whisper came again, and this time she caught the edge of it—a word, maybe, or something that had once been a word." | | 5 | "Not the gentle pulse she'd felt before—this was urgent, insistent." | | 6 | "She was good at that—had practiced it for years without knowing it." | | 7 | "The trees still stood solid and unbroken, but she could feel it now—a thinness in the air, a spot where the barrier between here and there was weak." | | 8 | "It was like stepping through a waterfall—cold and disorienting, the air rushing past her ears." | | 9 | "She didn't stop until she reached the road, until she found a streetlamp, until she could see other people—a couple walking their dog, a jogger in a reflective vest." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1515 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.031023102310231022 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005280528052805281 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 151 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 151 | | mean | 9.97 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.712 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 43.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.31788079470198677 | | totalSentences | 151 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 75.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Just shadows and standing stones" | | 1 | "Just tree after tree after" | | 2 | "Then she was through, stumbling" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 75.64% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd never noticed the old" | | 1 | "She'd never felt the pull" | | 2 | "She'd expected warmth—that was what" | | 3 | "She should have turned back" | | 4 | "She couldn't have said why," | | 5 | "It was November." | | 6 | "She'd seen frost on her" | | 7 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 8 | "She'd heard owls on her" | | 9 | "She stood in the center" | | 10 | "Her voice came out thin," | | 11 | "She spun toward it, her" | | 12 | "She thought of Evan." | | 13 | "She hated that she still" | | 14 | "She told herself that." | | 15 | "She didn't believe in the" | | 16 | "She didn't disbelieve, either—not after" | | 17 | "Her hand came up instinctively," | | 18 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 19 | "Her heel caught on something," |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 87.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones waited in" | | 1 | "Rory had passed through Richmond" | | 2 | "She'd never noticed the old" | | 3 | "She'd never felt the pull" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant hung cold" | | 5 | "She'd expected warmth—that was what" | | 6 | "Pulsed with heat when something" | | 7 | "She should have turned back" | | 8 | "The grass whispered against her" | | 9 | "The air changed." | | 10 | "Something that tasted like copper" | | 11 | "Wildflowers dotted the clearing, their" | | 12 | "That was wrong." | | 13 | "She couldn't have said why," | | 14 | "It was November." | | 15 | "She'd seen frost on her" | | 16 | "These flowers shouldn't exist." | | 17 | "Rory's breath misted in front" | | 18 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 19 | "The silence pressed against her" |
| | ratio | 0.744 | |
| 75.19% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it felt like a" | | 1 | "As if nothing had ever" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 90.34% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd never felt the pull that had drawn her here tonight, an itch beneath her skin that wouldn't let her sleep until she answered it." | | 1 | "But she couldn't help it—the pattern had been carved deep, those years of learning to read the silences in a room, to track the movements of someone who meant h…" | | 2 | "The pendant was warming against her chest, a gradual heat that built with each passing second." | | 3 | "Like something massive drawing air deep into lungs that had not been used in centuries." | | 4 | "The wildflowers recoiled from the light, their stems bending backward like they were trying to flee." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |