Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQEN1JE7D7D1SKBYQC8ER9

Run Details

Duration:
9.0s
Cost:
$0.002006

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The grove's silence pressed against Aurora's eardrums like a physical weight. Moonlight filtered through ancient oak branches, casting fractured shadows across wildflowers that shouldn't bloom this late in autumn. Her breath formed small clouds in air that felt too still, too cold. She'd come seeking answers — about the pendant hanging against her chest, about the whispers that had been haunting her dreams. The silver chain felt heavier than usual, the deep crimson heartstone pulsing with a subtle warmth that seemed to synchronize with her own heartbeat. Something moved at the edge of her vision. A flicker. A suggestion of movement that vanished when she turned her head. The standing stones ringed the clearing, massive oak sentinels with bark so old and gnarled it looked like twisted faces frozen mid-scream. Her fingers traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — a nervous habit from childhood. The scar tingled, almost as if it were remembering something she'd forgotten. A sound. Soft. Like fabric brushing against dry leaves. Behind her. Aurora didn't turn immediately. Years of quick thinking had taught her that panic was the enemy. She breathed slowly, listening. The wildflowers seemed to lean away from her, their petals trembling despite the absolute absence of wind. When she did turn, nothing was there. Nothing except the sense that something was watching her. Not with malevolence. With something closer to curiosity. The heartstone pendant grew warmer.
total_cost0.0020064

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
78.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount234
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount234
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"sentinels"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"fractured"
3"warmth"
4"flicker"
5"sentinels"
6"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences24
matches(empty)
23.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences24
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences24
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords236
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions2
wordCount236
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
persons
0"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences15
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"warmth that seemed to synchronize with her own heartbeat"
1"looked like twisted faces frozen mid-scre"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean23.6
std17.55
cv0.743
sampleLengths
042
145
221
351
49
52
637
77
817
95
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs40
matches
0"were remembering"
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences24
ratio0.083
matches
0"She'd come seeking answers — about the pendant hanging against her chest, about the whispers that had been haunting her dreams."
1"Her fingers traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — a nervous habit from childhood."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount236
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.03389830508474576
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00847457627118644
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences24
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences24
mean9.83
std6.82
cv0.693
sampleLengths
011
118
213
321
424
58
62
711
822
917
1012
112
121
136
142
154
1612
174
1817
197
209
213
225
235
95.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.625
totalSentences24
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences20
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences20
matches
0"Her breath formed small clouds"
1"She'd come seeking answers —"
2"Her fingers traced the small"
3"She breathed slowly, listening."
ratio0.2
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount16
totalSentences20
matches
0"The grove's silence pressed against"
1"Moonlight filtered through ancient oak"
2"Her breath formed small clouds"
3"She'd come seeking answers —"
4"The silver chain felt heavier"
5"Something moved at the edge"
6"A suggestion of movement that"
7"The standing stones ringed the"
8"Her fingers traced the small"
9"The scar tingled, almost as"
10"Aurora didn't turn immediately."
11"Years of quick thinking had"
12"She breathed slowly, listening."
13"The wildflowers seemed to lean"
14"Nothing except the sense that"
15"The heartstone pendant grew warmer."
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences20
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences11
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Moonlight filtered through ancient oak branches, casting fractured shadows across wildflowers that shouldn't bloom this late in autumn."
1"She'd come seeking answers — about the pendant hanging against her chest, about the whispers that had been haunting her dreams."
2"The silver chain felt heavier than usual, the deep crimson heartstone pulsing with a subtle warmth that seemed to synchronize with her own heartbeat."
3"A suggestion of movement that vanished when she turned her head."
4"The scar tingled, almost as if it were remembering something she'd forgotten."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
71.7425%