Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQF2JVNE885YZZ14YTDQHH

Run Details

Duration:
49.9s
Cost:
$0.050356
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho didn't wash things clean; it just made the grime slicker. It drummed a relentless, uneven rhythm against the frosted glass of The Raven's Nest, blurring the erratic pulses of the green neon sign hanging above the entrance. Inside, the air was stale, smelling of damp wool, old beer, and the distinct, dusty scent of the maps plastering the walls—geographies of places that no longer existed, borders shifted by wars Silas Blackwood had likely watched from shadows. Aurora Carter sat at the far end of the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a water glass. She wasn't drinking. Her shift at the Golden Empress started in an hour, and Yu-Fei didn't look kindly on delivery drivers who smelled of gin. She was just existing, suspended in the quiet lull before London’s evening rush truly began. Behind the bar, Silas moved with his characteristic economy of motion. He favored his left leg, the slight limp a rhythmic hitch as he navigated the narrow space between the rail and the shelves. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked softly against a bottle of bourbon as he shelved it. He didn't speak to her; he rarely felt the need to fill the silence. That was why she lived upstairs. Silence was a currency Rory had learned to value after twenty-five years of noise—her father’s booming legal arguments, her mother’s anxious fluttering, and the shouting matches that had marked the end of her life in Cardiff. The bell above the door chimed, a sharp, cheerful sound that seemed at odds with the gloom. Rory didn't turn immediately. She watched the reflection in the mirror behind the bar, observing the newcomer through the distortions of age-spotted glass. A woman shook out a wet umbrella, the movement sharp and aggressive. She wore a camel trench coat, tailored to within an inch of its life, and heels that clicked like gunfire on the hardwood floor. Then the woman turned, and the green neon light washed over her face. Rory’s breath hitched, a small, violent arrest of her lungs. Her hand spasmed, knocking her glass. Water sloshed over her knuckles, cold and shocking, running down to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was Eva. Not the Eva of sticky pub floors in Cardiff, nor the Eva who had whispered fierce, drunken promises of escape in the girls' bathroom of the student union. This was a streamlined, high-definition version. Her hair, once a frizzy brown halo, was now a sleek, chemically straightened curtain. Her jaw seemed tighter, her eyes harder. Rory considered sliding off the stool and bolting for the bookshelf that hid the back room. She knew the mechanism; she could disappear before Eva cleared the threshold of the seating area. But instincts, the cool-headed pragmatism that had gotten her out of the abusive mess with Evan, kept her rooted. Motion attracted the eye. Stillness was camouflage. It didn't work. Eva’s gaze swept the room, dissecting the few patrons huddled in the booths, before locking onto the solitary figure at the bar. The recognition was immediate. There was no squinting, no hesitation. Just a widening of the eyes, followed by a mask slipping into place—a practiced, professional pleasantness that Rory didn't recognize at all. "Rory?" The name hung in the air, weighted with three years of unanswered text messages. Rory turned on the stool, wiping her wet hand on her jeans. "Eva. Hell of a night for a walk." Eva closed the distance, her heels loud in the quiet bar. Up close, she smelled of expensive rain and sandalwood. She stopped two feet away, honoring a boundary that hadn't existed when they were sharing a cramped flat and cigarettes. "I didn't think I’d find you here," Eva said. Her accent had shifted, the Welsh lilt flattened into something distinctly Estuary, polished for boardrooms. "I mean, I heard you were in London. My mum bumped into Mrs. Ellis at Tesco. But I didn't think you frequented... places like this." She glanced at the peeling maps, then at Silas, who was polishing a glass with deliberate slowness, his hazel eyes missing nothing. "I live upstairs," Rory said. "Oh." Eva blinked, processing this. "Right. The glamorous London life." "Ideally located," Rory countered, her voice steady. "Low commute." "And you're..." Eva gestured vaguely at Rory’s outfit—a waterproof windbreaker and dark cargo trousers, practical gear for a night on a scooter. "You're working?" "Delivery. Golden Empress." Eva’s expression cracked, just for a second. Pity. It was the one thing Rory had dreaded more than anger. Anger she could parry; pity was a fog she couldn't punch through. "Oh, Rory. With your grades? You were top of the cohort. Dad still talks about your tort law essay." "Dad can frame it if he likes," Rory said, picking up her water glass again. "I prefer the bike. Clears the head." "It’s a waste." "It’s a living." Eva sighed, unbuttoning her coat and sliding onto the stool next to Rory. She signaled Silas. "White wine. Whatever you have that isn't swill." Silas didn't blink. He simply turned to the fridge. "I’m an associate now," Eva said, the words rushing out as if she needed to balance the ledger of their status immediately based on Rory's delivery jacket. "Corporate litigation. It’s brutal. eighty-hour weeks, partners who scream, the whole cliché. But the money... well." She touched a heavy gold chain at her throat. "It buys comforts." "You always wanted that," Rory said, not unkindly. "The suit. The office. The influence." "We both did," Eva corrected sharply. "We were going to run the firm. Remember? Carter and Lewis. We had the stationery picked out before we even passed A-Levels." "I remember." "Then you left." Eva accepted the glass from Silas, not bothering to thank him. She took a long swallow. "You just vanished, Rory. One night you’re crying on my sofa about Evan, the next you’re gone. I had to handle your parents. I had to handle *him*." Rory flinched. The name struck a nerve, vibrating down to the scar on her wrist—not from Evan, but from a childhood fall, yet somehow, all her pain seemed to map back to that same jagged white line. "I couldn't stay, Eva. You know that. If I had stayed, I would have become... small. Or dead." "I would have helped you." "You were telling me to stick it out," Rory said softly. The memory was clear, sudden and sharp. The kitchen table in Cardiff, the smell of burnt toast. Eva holding her hand, saying *he loves you, he’s just stressed, don’t throw away the degree over a bad patch.* "You told me it would look bad if I dropped out. You worried about the optics." Eva stiffened, twisting the stem of her wine glass. "I was twenty-two. I didn't know what I was talking about. I was trying to keep you on the path." "The path was killing me." "And this isn't?" Eva gestured around the bar, her hand sweeping over the shadowed corners, the silent, limping barman, the dusty history on the walls. "Delivering noodles in the rain? Living above a dive bar? You’re smarter than everyone in this room, Rory. You’re smarter than me. And look at us." Rory looked. She really looked. She saw the fatigue etched into the corners of Eva’s eyes, the tension held in the set of her shoulders. Eva looked like a woman who was running a race she was terrified of losing. She looked expensive, successful, and incredibly brittle. Then Rory looked at her own reflection in the back bar mirror. Her straight black hair was pulled back, practical and severe. Her eyes were bright, alert. She was tired, yes, but it was a physical tiredness, earned by miles on the road and stairs climbed. It wasn't the soul-deep exhaustion of performing a role she hated. "I'm not unhappy," Rory said, and realized with a jolt of surprise that it was true. Eva scoffed, a harsh, incredulous sound. "Please. You’re Aurora Carter. You don't settle." "I didn't settle. I exited." Rory turned fully toward her friend. "I woke up every day in Cardiff feeling like I was wearing a corset that was getting tighter. Everyone had an idea of who I was supposed to be. My dad, the uni, Evan... even you. Especially you." "I just wanted the best for you." "You wanted me to be you," Rory said. "You wanted a partner in the firm. A mirror." Eva stared at her, her mouth slightly open. The accusation landed, not with a bang, but with the dull thud of undeniable truth. She took another drink, finishing the glass in a gulp that betrayed a desperate need for the alcohol. "I hate it," Eva whispered. The confession slid out before she could stop it. "I hate the firm. I hate the partners. I haven't slept through the night in six months." Rory felt a phantom ache, a ghost of the old friendship trying to bridge the gap. She wanted to reach out, to cover Eva’s hand with her own. But the distance was too great now. It was filled with three years of silence and two entirely different worlds. "Then leave," Rory said. "I can't. I have the mortgage. The lease on the Audi. The expectations." Eva laughed, a brittle, jagged sound. "I can't just... pack a bag and disappear to Soho. We can't all be runaways, Rory." The word hung there. *Runaway.* Rory stood up. The legs of her stool scraped against the floor. "I didn't run away, Eva. I ran *toward* something. Even if it’s just the right to breathe without asking permission." She checked her watch. "I have to go. Shift starts in twenty." Eva looked up, her eyes glossy, the hard shell trembling. "You're leaving? Just like that?" "I have a job to do." Rory reached into her pocket, pulled out a crumpled five-pound note, and placed it on the bar next to Eva’s empty glass. "For the drink." "Rory," Eva said, her voice dropping. "If I... if I called you. Would you answer?" Rory looked down at her. She saw the shared history, the sleepovers, the revision sessions, the desperate terrifying nights. She also saw the judgment, the refusal to understand, the heavy weight of a life Rory had severed with a surgical cut. "I don't have the same number," Rory said. She didn't offer the new one. Rory turned and walked toward the door. As she passed the end of the bar, Silas looked up. He caught her eye—a brief, acknowledging nod. He understood the weight of the past, and the necessity of leaving it buried. She pushed open the door and stepped out into the rain. The cold air hit her face, sharp and clean, smelling of exhaust and wet pavement. She took a deep breath, filling her lungs, and felt the tightness in her chest loosen. behind her, the green neon sign buzzed, and the door to The Raven's Nest swung shut, sealing the past inside with the maps of countries that no longer existed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
44.4444% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory said, picking up her water glass again [again]"
1"Eva said, the words rushing out as if she needed to balance the ledger of their status immediately based on Rory's delivery jacket [immediately]"
2"Eva corrected sharply [sharply]"
3"Rory said softly [softly]"
67.8112% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1864
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"really"
4"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.1760% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1864
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"solitary"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"solitary"
1"weight"
2"etched"
3"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences118
matches
0"was terrified"
1"a jolt of surprise"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"wanted that,\" Rory"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean29.81
std23.28
cv0.781
sampleLengths
080
159
2109
317
459
513
635
73
855
958
1057
111
1214
1320
1440
1549
1622
175
1810
199
2024
213
2250
2322
243
253
2624
279
2855
2914
3028
312
3247
3355
345
3564
3629
375
3851
3947
4057
4116
4213
4349
447
4517
4641
4731
4848
494
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"was terrified"
1"was pulled"
2"was filled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs239
matches
0"wasn't drinking"
1"were sharing"
2"was polishing"
3"was running"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1378
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"same jagged white line."
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.02902757619738752
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.013788098693759071
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean12.24
std8.47
cv0.692
sampleLengths
014
127
239
319
43
522
615
711
823
919
1014
116
1236
1317
144
1519
1612
1724
1813
1910
206
2119
223
2328
246
2514
267
2716
2816
2919
304
313
323
3322
344
356
3622
371
3814
3912
408
4111
429
4320
449
4515
4625
4722
485
495
40.0662% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2913907284768212
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners44
25.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Rory countered, her voice steady (counter)"
1"Rory said, picking up her water glass again (say, pick up)"
2"Eva said, the words rushing out as if she needed to balance the ledger of their status immediately based on Rory's delivery jacket (say, rush need balance immediately base)"
3"Eva corrected sharply (correct sharply)"
4"Rory said softly (say softly)"
5"Rory said, and realized with a jolt of surprise that it was true (say, realize be)"
6"Eva whispered (whisper)"
7"laughed (laugh)"
8"Eva said, her voice dropping (say, drop)"
84.6175%