| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 78.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1380 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1380 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "down her spine" | | 7 | "lurch" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "lurched" | | 15 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 177 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 179 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 44 | | markdownWords | 57 | | totalWords | 1375 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "For when you’re ready" | | 1 | "A place between, neither here nor there." | | 2 | "watchful" | | 3 | "shift" | | 4 | "hitched" | | 5 | "Get a grip." | | 6 | "twitched" | | 7 | "lean" | | 8 | "veiny" | | 9 | "shuddered" | | 10 | "unfurled" | | 11 | "wet" | | 12 | "moved" | | 13 | "Breathing." | | 14 | "clicking" | | 15 | "bones" | | 16 | "scorching" | | 17 | "laugh" | | 18 | "wrong" | | 19 | "pulsing" | | 20 | "watching" | | 21 | "rustle" | | 22 | "ground" | | 23 | "see" | | 24 | "moving" | | 25 | "dirt itself" | | 26 | "seething" | | 27 | "hand" | | 28 | "twisted" | | 29 | "twitched" | | 30 | "heaved" | | 31 | "sat up" | | 32 | "human" | | 33 | "thing" | | 34 | "bendy" | | 35 | "smooth" | | 36 | "smiled" | | 37 | "burning" | | 38 | "standing" | | 39 | "flared" | | 40 | "froze" | | 41 | "breathe" | | 42 | "voice" | | 43 | "knew" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1373 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Grove | 9 | | Rory | 17 | | British | 1 | | Library | 1 | | London | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Didn | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "British" | | 4 | "Library" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.881 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if straining for something" | | 1 | "as if listening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.727 | | wordCount | 1375 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 76 | | mean | 18.09 | | std | 20.98 | | cv | 1.16 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 44 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "were locked" | | 2 | "were drawn" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "was being" | | 2 | "was *scorching" | | 3 | "was *pulsing" | | 4 | "was *watching" | | 5 | "was trying" | | 6 | "was *burning" | | 7 | "were *standing" |
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| 15.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 179 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "But the note left with it—*For when you’re ready*—had been too cryptic to ignore." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—deep violets, blues like crushed sapphires, whites that glowed faintly in the gathering dark." | | 2 | "But the petals—deep, velvety things, the color of dried blood—seemed to *lean* toward her, as if straining for something." | | 3 | "A sound escaped her—a sharp, involuntary gasp—as the flower *unfurled*, its petals peeling back like lips to reveal a dark, glistening core." | | 4 | "Should have—" | | 5 | "If she could just—" | | 6 | "Its face—" | | 7 | "And then—" |
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| 89.98% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1380 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 71 | | adverbRatio | 0.05144927536231884 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008695652173913044 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 179 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 179 | | mean | 7.68 | | std | 5.87 | | cv | 0.764 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 38.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.19553072625698323 | | totalSentences | 179 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "Too sweet, too thick, like" | | 1 | "Just a sudden, sickening lurch," | | 2 | "Just the sound of her" | | 3 | "Just an old bit of" | | 4 | "Just the trees, their branches" | | 5 | "Then another emerged beside it." | | 6 | "Just a lipless mouth, stretched" | | 7 | "Then it *smiled*." | | 8 | "Then, from the darkness beyond" |
| | ratio | 0.059 | |
| 94.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 1 | "She knew that now." | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have taken it." | | 4 | "It felt *watchful*." | | 5 | "She traced one with her" | | 6 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 7 | "It cloyed in her throat." | | 8 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 9 | "She staggered, her free hand" | | 10 | "She yanked her hand away." | | 11 | "She was being ridiculous." | | 12 | "It was just a clearing." | | 13 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 14 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 15 | "She held it up, turning" | | 16 | "She exhaled sharply, her fingers" | | 17 | "She took another step forward." | | 18 | "They weren’t moving." | | 19 | "She crouched slowly, her breath" |
| | ratio | 0.314 | |
| 90.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory Carter stepped past the" | | 2 | "The oaks loomed around her," | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 4 | "She knew that now." | | 5 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "The silver chain was cool" | | 7 | "She shouldn’t have taken it." | | 8 | "The Grove was supposed to" | | 9 | "That’s what the old books" | | 10 | "*A place between, neither here" | | 11 | "It felt *watchful*." | | 12 | "Rory exhaled, her breath curling" | | 13 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 14 | "She traced one with her" | | 15 | "A shiver ran down her" | | 16 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 17 | "The Grove stretched before her," | | 18 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—deep" | | 19 | "The scent was wrong, too." |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 98.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "If she could just—" | | 1 | "Now it was a *thing*," | | 2 | "Because Evan was dead." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain was cool against her collarbone, but the gemstone itself radiated a heat that seeped into her skin, a slow, creeping warmth that made her finge…" | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—deep violets, blues like crushed sapphires, whites that glowed faintly in the gathering dark." | | 2 | "But the petals—deep, velvety things, the color of dried blood—seemed to *lean* toward her, as if straining for something." | | 3 | "A sound escaped her—a sharp, involuntary gasp—as the flower *unfurled*, its petals peeling back like lips to reveal a dark, glistening core." | | 4 | "The gemstone was *pulsing* now, its light flickering like a dying flame." | | 5 | "The figures were *standing*, their bodies unfolding like broken marionettes." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |