| 59.2593% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she echoed back to him, taking a measured sip of wine [back]" | | 1 | "Michael said softly [softly]" |
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| 0.0000% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 581 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.5766% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 581 | | totalAiIsms | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 19.69 | | std | 12.55 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 24 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "being asked" | | 1 | "been groomed" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 87 | | matches | | |
| 86.1563% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 531 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.04896421845574388 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015065913370998116 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 8.04 | | std | 6.39 | | cv | 0.794 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 74.6479% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.5070422535211268 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 91.6667% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he returned, his voice unchanged—precise, controlled (return, unchange)" | | 1 | "she echoed back to him, taking a measured sip of wine (echo take)" | | 2 | "Michael said softly (say softly)" |
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