| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" | | 1 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 70.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "perfectly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "methodical" | | 6 | "surreal" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1187 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Found something in my grandmother's journals. Meet me tonight?" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1156 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | October | 1 | | London | 3 | | Eva | 7 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.938 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it might have been an altar o" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.527 | | wordCount | 1187 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the peaceful quiet of an empty park, but an active, listening silence" | | 1 | "Not sounds from the grove itself, but sounds from elsewhere, muffled" | | 2 | "not with the steady pulse that indicated a portal, but with a different rhythm" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 25.8 | | std | 21.22 | | cv | 0.822 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 62 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was remembering" | | 2 | "was getting" |
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| 30.37% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been pulsing for the last twenty minutes—faint, insistent—leading her here like a compass needle drawn north." | | 1 | "The world didn't shift dramatically—there was no flash of light, no sensation of movement—but everything changed nonetheless." | | 2 | "She counted the standing stones—seven visible from where she sat." | | 3 | "But no—she'd marked its position earlier, unconsciously, relative to one of the standing stones." | | 4 | "Not close—maybe three meters away—but definitely there." |
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| 86.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1170 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.05555555555555555 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015384615384615385 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 9.35 | | std | 6.89 | | cv | 0.737 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 63.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.41732283464566927 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Just trees and flowers and" | | 1 | "Instead, she pressed her back" | | 2 | "Just a meter or so." | | 3 | "Just enough to notice if" | | 4 | "Then 11:55 PM." | | 5 | "Exactly where the crescent-shaped scar" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been pulsing for" | | 1 | "She'd passed this way a" | | 2 | "she muttered, her breath fogging" | | 3 | "She thought about Eva's text" | | 4 | "Her phone buzzed." | | 5 | "It had to be." | | 6 | "She forced herself to breathe" | | 7 | "Their branches wove together overhead," | | 8 | "She had thirteen minutes to" | | 9 | "It looked like it might" | | 10 | "She sat down, pulling her" | | 11 | "She counted the standing stones—seven" | | 12 | "Her eyes tracked across them" | | 13 | "She stood, turning in a" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 15 | "She didn't run." | | 16 | "she said, forcing her voice" | | 17 | "She couldn't tell which." | | 18 | "They came from no direction" | | 19 | "Her phone screen flickered." |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 99.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the low-hanging" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant lay against" | | 2 | "It had been pulsing for" | | 3 | "The standing stones appeared without" | | 4 | "She'd passed this way a" | | 5 | "The wrongness of that settled" | | 6 | "she muttered, her breath fogging" | | 7 | "October in London was chilly," | | 8 | "This was the kind of" | | 9 | "The pendant pulsed harder." | | 10 | "She thought about Eva's text" | | 11 | "A clearing in Richmond Park." | | 12 | "Rory had assumed she'd meant" | | 13 | "Her phone buzzed." | | 14 | "Rory stepped between the standing" | | 15 | "The world didn't shift dramatically—there" | | 16 | "The ambient glow of London," | | 17 | "Stars wheeled overhead, too many" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath" | | 19 | "The Fae Grove." |
| | ratio | 0.721 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient oaks twisted into something that wasn't quite natural, their bark scarred with symbols she couldn't read in the torchlight." | | 1 | "The kind that made you aware of your own breathing, your own heartbeat, the small sounds of your jacket rustling as you moved." | | 2 | "The flowers nearest her feet bent sideways, as if pressed by invisible hands." | | 3 | "The rational part of her mind, the part that had gotten her through law lectures and bitter breakup arguments and the surreal revelation that Fae and demons and…" | | 4 | "They came from no direction and every direction, as if the air itself was remembering sounds from other times, other visitors to this place." | | 5 | "The pendant warmed suddenly against her skin, not with the steady pulse that indicated a portal, but with a different rhythm." | | 6 | "Long, slow inhalations that sounded too deep for human lungs." | | 7 | "Every instinct she possessed told her that turning around would be a mistake, that seeing would be worse than not-seeing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her breath fogging in air that had turned suddenly cold" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |