| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.44 | | leniency | 0.88 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "tinged" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "quivered" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "throbbed" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "footsteps" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "silk" | | 18 | "warmth" | | 19 | "trembled" | | 20 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 218 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 218 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 232 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.92% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 23 | | markdownWords | 67 | | totalWords | 1300 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Click." | | 1 | "patterns" | | 2 | "moved" | | 3 | "reaching" | | 4 | "were" | | 5 | "around" | | 6 | "saw" | | 7 | "“Lost girl,”" | | 8 | "“You wear the key. But you do not know the lock.”" | | 9 | "“No. But we remember him. And what he left behind.”" | | 10 | "“Step,”" | | 11 | "“Walk through. See what waits.”" | | 12 | "“She called you. The one in chains.”" | | 13 | "“Malphora,”" | | 14 | "“Your sister.”" | | 15 | "“You *are" | | 16 | "“Split. Forgotten. But the blood remembers.”" | | 17 | "her" | | 18 | "“You are already through the door,”" | | 19 | "“Look behind you.”" | | 20 | "Recognition." | | 21 | "pressed" | | 22 | "watched" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "But for a moment, she swore the flower had quivered, like something beneath its stem had twitched." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1169 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 5 | | Petersham | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | January | 1 | | Precise | 1 | | London | 1 | | Like | 4 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Petersham" | | 3 | "Road" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "January" | | 7 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.308 | | wordCount | 1300 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just absence of sound, but a thick, velvet quiet, like the world had been wrapped in fe" | | 1 | "Not with heat, but with weight" | | 2 | "not at her, but at the stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 232 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 95 | | mean | 13.68 | | std | 16.35 | | cv | 1.195 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 102 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 98.83% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "been wrapped" | | 1 | "being tested" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | | 0 | "was bracing" | | 1 | "were rearranging" | | 2 | "was breaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 232 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "Not vanished—shifted." | | 1 | "The air changed first—crisp and sweet, tinged with the scent of crushed mint and damp earth, though it hadn’t rained in days." | | 2 | "Then, a soft rustle—too deliberate to be the wind." | | 3 | "But Rory had learned—after the bruises, after Evan’s voice in her ear like oil on water—that some instincts were survival." | | 4 | "Not trees—standing stones, ancient and massive, their bark ridged like knuckled hands clasped in prayer." | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells in January, scarlet poppies nodding in the still air." | | 6 | "Even the distant pulse of London—gone." | | 7 | "Then—movement." | | 8 | "A stone lay half-buried in the moss—a flat, dark slab, veined with threads of crimson crystal." | | 9 | "But the scent—sudden and cloying—of burnt sugar and iron." | | 10 | "Its face—smooth." | | 11 | "The figure extended a hand—fingers too long, joints reversed." | | 12 | "Images flickered behind her eyes—flame." | | 13 | "In their place—endless trees, black and sharp as blades, stretching into a violet sky." | | 14 | "But as her skin brushed the silver chain—warmth surged." | | 15 | "And the stone slab—cracked now." | | 16 | "Not toward any path—there was none—but through the impossible brightness, through the silence that now *pressed* against her ears, through the feeling of being *watched* from every patch of shadow, every bloom, every blade of moss." | | 17 | "When she burst out between the oaks—real ones this time, rooted in Richmond Park—dawn was breaking." | | 18 | "But in her pocket, the Heartstone pendant pulsed once—slow, deep—like a sleeping heart." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1197 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03842940685045948 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005012531328320802 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 232 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 232 | | mean | 5.6 | | std | 5.08 | | cv | 0.907 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 61.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.40086206896551724 | | totalSentences | 232 | | uniqueOpeners | 93 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Just stars too bright, too" | | 1 | "Then, a soft rustle—too deliberate" | | 2 | "Just a smudge of dirt." | | 3 | "Even the distant pulse of" | | 4 | "Just pale, waxy skin stretched" | | 5 | "Then she ran." |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a breath, held" | | 1 | "She’d come to The Fae" | | 2 | "It had begun thrumming an" | | 3 | "She scanned the trees." | | 4 | "They ringed the clearing: eight" | | 5 | "She’d never believed him." | | 6 | "She moved deeper." | | 7 | "She knelt, fingers brushing a" | | 8 | "She lifted it." | | 9 | "She stood, pulse a quiet" | | 10 | "She checked her phone: no" | | 11 | "Her breath fogged." | | 12 | "She stepped toward the center" | | 13 | "She snapped her gaze." | | 14 | "Her breath caught." | | 15 | "she said, voice steady" | | 16 | "She walked slowly now, deliberately," | | 17 | "They were rearranging." | | 18 | "She tore her eyes away." | | 19 | "Her left wrist throbbed." |
| | ratio | 0.281 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "The path into Richmond Park" | | 1 | "One second, tarmac under her" | | 2 | "The air changed first—crisp and" | | 3 | "Moonlight pooled on the moss" | | 4 | "She took a breath, held" | | 5 | "The air was still as" | | 6 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "She’d come to The Fae" | | 8 | "It had begun thrumming an" | | 9 | "Yu-Fei would have called it" | | 10 | "Eva would have told her" | | 11 | "She scanned the trees." | | 12 | "They ringed the clearing: eight" | | 13 | "She’d never believed him." | | 14 | "The pendant warmed again, a" | | 15 | "She moved deeper." | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells in" | | 17 | "She knelt, fingers brushing a" | | 18 | "She lifted it." | | 19 | "She stood, pulse a quiet" |
| | ratio | 0.619 | |
| 71.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the Grove had" | | 1 | "To her left." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 79.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight pooled on the moss in unnatural clarity, silvering each frond as if spotlighted." | | 1 | "Just stars too bright, too close, arranged in patterns that tugged at her memory like half-remembered dream logic." | | 2 | "The gem pulsed crimson, light bleeding from its core, casting jagged shadows." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice steady" | | 1 | "she said, voice tight" | | 2 | "she said, louder" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "it sighed (sigh)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "it sang (sing)" | | 4 | "the thing whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |