Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQFW81SCVDQWZSJFSTEQKB

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Duration:
4m 33s
Cost:
$0.017952
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon above the door had begun to sputter again, casting the wet pavement in a fitful emerald glow that matched the bruise Rory had been nursing on her elbow since morning. She pushed into The Raven's Nest, shaking rain from her straight black hair, the bell overhead chiming a flat note that died against the walls. The warmth inside hit her face—amber light, the smell of spilled stout and the particular pipe tobacco Silas Blackwood swore he'd quit three winters ago. The walls pressed close, lined with black-and-white photographs of old Soho and moth-eaten maps of places Rory had never visited, though she climbed past them every night to the flat that waited above. She was reaching up to touch the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—an old habit when she was bone-tired—when she saw him. Julian Ashford sat at the far end of the bar, his posture unchanged from their law school days: shoulders squared as if preparing for cross-examination, spine not touching the back of the stool. He wore a charcoal overcoat draped across the neighboring seat, the wool heavy enough to suggest a Savile Row tailor, and his right hand cupped a tumbler of Scotch in a way that suggested ownership rather than appetite. His hair had thinned at the temples and gone the color of early frost, but his profile still carried that prosecution-barrister sharpness, the kind that had made him notorious in the moot courts at Cardiff. Rory froze. She caught her reflection in the mirror behind the bar—straight black hair plastered dark by rain, skin pale, those bright blue eyes that had once convinced professors she was paying attention when she was actually planning her escape. She looked away quickly, but she'd been seen. Her fingers found the scar again, the small raised half-moon from a broken glass at her mother's birthday party when she was nine. She hadn't thought of Julian in eighteen months, perhaps longer. Not since she'd stopped checking the Cardiff alumni newsletter, not since she'd trained herself to see Evan's shadow in every unexpected male silhouette. She tried to step back toward the stairs, but her boot scuffed against the brass rail of the coat rack. The sound was small, but Julian turned. His eyes—grey-green, she remembered abruptly, the color of the Bristol Channel on an overcast day—found her immediately. Three years dissolved in the span of his blink. "Aurora?" The name landed like a stone in still water. In London, she was Rory. Even Silas, wiping glasses at the opposite end of the bar with his silver signet ring catching the light, called her Rory. The syllables felt foreign now, weighted down by her father's disappointed expectations and the echo of Evan's voice in the dark. Julian stood. He moved with the same controlled economy she remembered, though he favored his left leg slightly—no, that was Silas's limp she was noticing, the old knee injury from Prague. Julian moved with the fluidity of someone who still ran every morning before chambers. "Aurora Carter," he said, closer now, and she caught the scent of his cologne, sandalwood and something metallic, like coins held too long in a closed hand. "My God. I thought you were dead." Rory managed a smile that felt like it cracked something in her face. "Not quite. Just... relocated." "In Soho." His gaze traveled over her—taking in the damp Golden Empress delivery jacket she'd forgotten to remove, the jeans dark with rain at the cuffs, the boots worn soft at the heels. "You're working for Yu-Fei Cheung?" "Part-time," she said. Her voice sounded strange to her own ears, Cardiff-bred precision flattened by London consonants and three years of swallowing her words. "Deliveries. It keeps me mobile." Julian's expression flickered—confusion, perhaps, or the dawning realization that the trajectory they'd once shared had diverged so radically that they now occupied different atmospheres. He had been her study partner for two years, the brilliant boy from Penarth who corrected her Latin citations with red pen and brought her coffee during exam season. They had talked of silk, of appellate courts, of changing the machinery of justice from within. Now he looked at her as if she were a painting hung crooked, familiar in composition but jarring in execution. "You disappeared," he said quietly. "Three years ago. Middle of the Michaelmas term. Your father wouldn't say where you'd gone. Your mother stopped coming to the Inn's Christmas parties." Rory moved past him to the bar, needing the solid oak between her and the past. "Whiskey," she said to Silas, who nodded without comment, his hazel eyes flicking between them with the observant neutrality of a man who had once made his living decoding dangerous silences. He poured two fingers of Jameson and pushed it across the scarred wood with a hand that bore the silver ring, never speaking, always watching. "I had to leave," Rory said, wrapping her fingers around the glass. The scar on her wrist faced upward, exposed. Julian's eyes caught on it, and she saw him catalog it—new damage, he must think, though it was older than their friendship. "Personal reasons." "Evan," Julian said. It wasn't a question. Rory's hand tightened on the glass. She thought of the flat above them, the small rooms with the slanted ceiling where she slept with a chair wedged under the doorknob, though Evan was three hundred miles away and reportedly dating a solicitor from Bristol now. She thought of the scars he had left that no one could see, and this small crescent moon on her wrist that everyone assumed was his work but wasn't. "You knew?" she asked. "I suspected. He came looking for you, once. After you'd gone." Julian took his own seat again, but he didn't sit so tall now. The shoulders had dropped, imperceptibly. "He was... persuasive. Claimed you'd had a breakdown, that you needed protecting from yourself. Your father believed him. I didn't." Rory tasted copper on her tongue. The green neon above the door reflected in the whiskey, turning it bilious, sickly. "Why didn't you say something? Back then?" Julian looked at the maps on the walls, the photographs of strangers. "Because I was twenty-three and ambitious, and I didn't want to believe that someone like you—someone with your mind—could let yourself be diminished like that. It was easier to believe you were just stressed about exams. Then you were gone, and I spent three years learning exactly how much silence weighs." The bar filled with the evening crowd, shapes moving in the peripheral haze, but they remained in the amber pocket of light, suspended. Rory could see the lines around his eyes now, the cost of the success he wore like armor. He was silk now, she realized. Queen's Counsel, probably. Everything they had planned for her. "I couldn't stay," she said. "For what it's worth, I couldn't stay and I couldn't explain. Eva called, and I ran. I'm good at running now. It's one of my skills." "You live here," Julian said, gesturing upward at the ceiling with a motion that included the water stains and the faint bass notes of the flat above. "Above a bar in Soho." "Yes." "Your father still asks after you. At the Cardiff circuit." Rory touched the scar again, tracing the crescent. "I know. I send postcards." "Postcards." The word sounded bitter in Julian's mouth. He reached into his coat and withdrew a slim card case, extracted a rectangle of heavy cream stock. "I'm at the Royal Courts of Justice all week. Appeal case. If you wanted to talk. Properly." Rory took the card. His chambers' address embossed in gold. It felt like a ticket to a country whose citizenship she'd surrendered. "I won't," she said honestly, tucking it into her pocket anyway. "But thank you." Julian nodded as if she'd confirmed a suspicion. He finished his Scotch in one movement, the liquid disappearing like a magic trick. "You were the best moot court partner I ever had, Aurora. You would have been brilliant." "I was someone else then," she said. "Weren't we all." He stood, buttoning his coat. For a moment, he looked as though he might embrace her, but the space between them had grown too wide, filled with the unsaid things—her shame, his complicity in his own blindness, the years they'd both spent becoming people who could survive their younger selves' expectations. Instead, he touched her hand briefly, his fingers brushing the scar, not knowing it was from her childhood, perhaps thinking it was a souvenir of the war she'd fought alone. "Goodbye, Rory," he said. She didn't correct him. She watched him walk to the door, out into the green neon and the rain, becoming a silhouette and then nothing. Rory sat at the bar for a long time, the whiskey warming nothing, the weight of the card heavy in her pocket. Silas moved behind her, his limp barely perceptible as he collected Julian's empty glass, the silver signet ring flashing once before he retreated into the shadows. Upstairs, her flat waited, small and safe. She touched the scar one last time, a crescent moon in the dark, and finished her drink alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he said, closer now, and she caught the scent of his cologne, sandalwood and something metallic, like coins held too long in a closed hand [too]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"she said to Silas, who nodded without comment, his hazel eyes flicking between them with the observant neutrality of a man who had once made his living decoding dangerous silences [once]"
3"Julian said, gesturing upward at the ceiling with a motion that included the water stains and the faint bass notes of the flat above [flat]"
4"she said honestly, tucking it into her pocket anyway [honestly, anyway]"
87.1713% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.9282% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silk"
2"weight"
3"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"carried that prosecution"
1"believe that someone"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean38.33
std29.85
cv0.779
sampleLengths
0116
122
2106
3104
427
526
61
757
845
934
1017
1138
1229
1389
1429
1572
1644
173
1878
194
2049
2127
2263
2356
2431
2532
261
2710
2813
2943
3022
3114
3238
337
343
3551
3630
374
3825
3973
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"been seen"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was reaching"
1"was noticing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1300
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.038461538461538464
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011538461538461539
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean15.64
std11.38
cv0.727
sampleLengths
033
125
225
333
422
533
638
735
82
938
108
1123
1210
1323
1420
157
1617
179
181
199
205
2122
2221
232
2429
2514
2627
277
2813
294
3033
315
323
3321
345
3524
3629
3716
3820
395
4024
4116
4231
4325
4412
458
4622
472
483
494
60.5442% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3877551020408163
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners38
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he said, closer now, and she caught the scent of his cologne, sandalwood and something metallic, like coins held too long in a closed hand (say, catch like hold too)"
1"he said quietly (say quietly)"
2"she said to Silas, who nodded without comment, his hazel eyes flicking between them with the observant neutrality of a man who had once made his living decoding dangerous silences (say nod flick once make)"
3"Rory said, wrapping her fingers around the glass (say, wrap)"
4"Julian said, gesturing upward at the ceiling with a motion that included the water stains and the faint bass notes of the flat above (say, gesture include stain)"
5"she said honestly, tucking it into her pocket anyway (say honestly, tuck)"
86.2143%