| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 77.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "depths" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "wavered" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "footsteps" | | 17 | "vibrated" | | 18 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1111 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1104 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | October | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "October" | | 2 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed unnaturally loud in the stillness" | | 1 | "seemed muffled as if the air itself had thickened around her" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources" | | 3 | "as if holding its breath" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 91.97% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 38.31 | | std | 18.08 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 22 |
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| 91.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "was amplified" | | 1 | "was connected" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 13.78% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "was dragging" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "was waking" | | 4 | "was studying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't be here—not at half past midnight, not alone, not when every instinct screamed at her to turn around and drive back to the familiar glow of London's streetlights." | | 1 | "Time moved differently here—she'd heard the stories, read the warnings Eva had left scattered through her research." | | 2 | "A sound made her freeze—soft, rhythmic, like breathing." | | 3 | "Whatever she'd come here to find—or whatever had drawn her here—was very close now." | | 4 | "More than once, she caught glimpses of movement in her peripheral vision—tall shapes that melted away the moment she turned her head." | | 5 | "The sound was wrong—too light for something as large as the breathing suggested, but too heavy for human feet." |
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| 88.57% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1112 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.053057553956834536 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0170863309352518 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.62 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 51.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3815789473684211 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Even her own footfalls seemed" | | 1 | "More than once, she caught" | | 2 | "Then, from somewhere behind her," | | 3 | "Always staying just outside the" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't be here—not at" | | 1 | "She fumbled for her torch," | | 2 | "They swayed without wind." | | 3 | "She took another step into" | | 4 | "Her voice cracked slightly, and" | | 5 | "She swept the beam in" | | 6 | "Her torch beam wavered as" | | 7 | "It reminded her of her" | | 8 | "She tried to inject authority" | | 9 | "She started to turn toward" | | 10 | "She was not the hunter" | | 11 | "She was the prey." |
| | ratio | 0.164 | |
| 90.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's breath misted in the" | | 1 | "The delivery van's engine ticked" | | 2 | "She shouldn't be here—not at" | | 3 | "The ancient oaks loomed ahead," | | 4 | "These weren't the carefully maintained" | | 5 | "These were older, darker things" | | 6 | "She fumbled for her torch," | | 7 | "The pendant's warmth intensified as" | | 8 | "The silence was too complete." | | 9 | "Aurora crossed the threshold between" | | 10 | "The world shifted, like stepping" | | 11 | "The grove beyond the oaks" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 13 | "They swayed without wind." | | 14 | "Time moved differently here—she'd heard" | | 15 | "An hour inside could be" | | 16 | "She took another step into" | | 17 | "The van was still visible," | | 18 | "A sound made her freeze—soft," | | 19 | "The flowers at her feet" |
| | ratio | 0.74 | |
| 68.49% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the darkness, Aurora" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 8.09% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The delivery van's engine ticked behind her, cooling metal contracting with soft pops that seemed unnaturally loud in the stillness." | | 1 | "But the pendant at her throat had been burning against her skin for hours now, its crimson depths pulsing with that strange warmth that meant only one thing: a …" | | 2 | "The ancient oaks loomed ahead, their massive trunks forming a rough circle that hurt to look at directly." | | 3 | "Even her own footfalls seemed muffled, as if the air itself had thickened around her." | | 4 | "The flowers at her feet trembled, their petals catching starlight that shouldn't exist under the heavy canopy of leaves overhead." | | 5 | "But now she caught something else underneath it: a wet, sliding sound, as if something large was dragging itself across the forest floor just beyond the edge of…" | | 6 | "Her torch beam wavered as her hand trembled, creating dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources." | | 7 | "But this was amplified, echoing off trees that stretched impossibly high into a sky she could no longer see." | | 8 | "Aurora spun, heart hammering, but found only empty air and the gentle sway of flowers that reached barely to her waist." | | 9 | "The wet sliding sound returned, closer now, accompanied by something that might have been laughter if laughter could sound like breaking glass." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |