| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped close [close]" | | 1 | "Harlow said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "She glanced back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 90.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1078 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1078 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "furrowed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1063 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 731 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 13 | | Quinn | 2 | | London | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | Marshall | 7 | | Compass | 1 | | Running | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Seal | 1 | | Binding | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Market" | | 4 | "Marshall" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Kowalski" | | 7 | "Binding" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.611 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1063 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 32.21 | | std | 16.57 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 49 |
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| 95.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "were relaxed" | | 1 | "was prepared" |
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| 95.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "were still bagging" | | 1 | "wasn’t adding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.126 | | matches | | 0 | "The underground chamber reeked of damp stone and something metallic—blood, Detective Harlow Quinn thought, the scent growing stronger as she descended the cracked concrete steps." | | 1 | "Here, beneath Camden’s cluttered streets, the Veil Market once thrived in shadows—an unregistered labyrinth of ghosts and secrets." | | 2 | "Forensics were still bagging evidence, but the crime scene was sterile overall—too sterile." | | 3 | "The trajectory of the cut looked off—too clean, too precise." | | 4 | "Something caught the corner of her vision—a slight shimmer, subtle as a breath of smoke but out of place in this dim, stale space." | | 5 | "Its needle spun erratically before settling—pointing insistently toward the chipped tunnel wall behind the victim." | | 6 | "Then, her hand caught faint impressions—delicately carved sigils fading beneath layers of grime." | | 7 | "A hollow—just wide enough for a person." | | 8 | "She recognized the handwriting scrawled on a notebook margin—the same as Eva Kowalski’s." | | 9 | "It was the same symbol carved faintly in the tunnel wall—an ancient Seal of Binding, used to contain entities that slipped through realm fractures." | | 10 | "Harlow’s watch caught the light—a worn leather band wrapping her wrist, the face scratched but reliable." |
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| 87.84% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 744 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "resolute behind round glasses." |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.04704301075268817 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01747311827956989 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 12.22 | | std | 7.25 | | cv | 0.594 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 86.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5287356321839081 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, her hand caught faint" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "His tone betrayed a hint" | | 1 | "Her gaze drifted over the" | | 2 | "He flipped a page, eyes" | | 3 | "She crouched beside the corpse," | | 4 | "It was almost surgical." | | 5 | "She stood, her sharp jaw" | | 6 | "She pointed to the dark" | | 7 | "Her words died." | | 8 | "She squinted, heart picking up" | | 9 | "She pulled an old brass" | | 10 | "Its needle spun erratically before" | | 11 | "His skepticism was barely masked" | | 12 | "She stepped close to the" | | 13 | "She shook her head, pulling" | | 14 | "She recognized the handwriting scrawled" | | 15 | "It was the same symbol" | | 16 | "She glanced back at the" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 35.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The underground chamber reeked of" | | 1 | "The flickering glow of harsh" | | 2 | "Here, beneath Camden’s cluttered streets," | | 3 | "Harlow adjusted the collar of" | | 4 | "The body lay sprawled across" | | 5 | "A deep gash carved its" | | 6 | "Forensics were still bagging evidence," | | 7 | "Nothing crushed, no sign of" | | 8 | "His tone betrayed a hint" | | 9 | "Harlow narrowed her eyes." | | 10 | "Her gaze drifted over the" | | 11 | "He flipped a page, eyes" | | 12 | "Harlow’s brow furrowed." | | 13 | "She crouched beside the corpse," | | 14 | "Something wasn’t adding up." | | 15 | "The trajectory of the cut" | | 16 | "A blade that deep would" | | 17 | "It was almost surgical." | | 18 | "She stood, her sharp jaw" | | 19 | "An uneasy silence settled." |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She shook her head, pulling out a small flashlight and shining it along the wall, revealing a barely perceptible outline." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He flipped, eyes scanning his notes like a rehearsed script" | | 1 | "She stepped close, the compass needle twitching as if disturbed" | | 2 | "Harlow repeated, crouching to examine the man’s satchel" | | 3 | "Harlow said, voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Harlow repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |