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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGJ5B999S3NV6D3P37K1S
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Model:
Mistral Small Creative
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
12.4s
Cost:
$0.000787
Provider:
Mistral
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest*
flickered
like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the door, the
weight
of her delivery bag slung over one shoulder. The scent of aged whiskey and polished wood wrapped around her, familiar as an old sweater. She’d been coming here for months now, ever since she’d moved into the flat above, but the place still carried the ghost of its former life—back when it had been more than just a bar, back when it had been *his*. She didn’t expect to see him. Silas Blackwood stood behind the counter, his back to her as he wiped down a glass with slow, deliberate strokes. The years had
etched
themselves into the lines of his face, the silver threading through his auburn hair, the way his left leg bore the faintest hitch when he shifted his
weight
. But his hands were the same—steady, precise. The hands of a man who had once known how to dismantle a gun blindfolded. Rory froze. The last time she’d seen him, she’d
been seventeen
, sitting in the back of his car outside her parents’ house in Cardiff, her knuckles white around the strap of her schoolbag. *Don’t tell them where I’m going,* she’d said, and he’d only nodded, his hazel eyes
unreadable
in the dim glow of the streetlamp. *You’ll be safe,* he’d promised. And she had been. Because Silas Blackwood didn’t make promises he couldn’t keep. Now, here he
was, running
a bar in Soho like some kind of retired spy cliché. She should have turned around. Should have slipped out before he noticed her. But her feet carried her forward, drawn by some old, stubborn loyalty—or maybe just the sheer impossibility of him being here, of *her* being here, after all this time. The bell above the door chimed as it swung shut behind her. Silas didn’t turn. Didn’t react. But she knew he’d heard her. Knew the way his shoulders tensed, just
slightly
, the way his fingers stilled on the glass. “Evening,” he said, voice low, rough around the edges like gravel underfoot. “What’ll it be?” Rory exhaled, slow and controlled. *Cool-headed. Intelligent. Quick out-of-the-box thinking.* That’s what people said about her. That’s what she’d spent years proving she was. But standing here, in this bar, in front of *him*, she felt like that seventeen-year-old girl again, the one who had run because she didn’t know how to stay. “Whiskey,” she said. “Neat.” Silas finally turned, and his gaze landed on her like a physical thing. His eyes
flicked
over her—black hair, bright blue eyes, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—and for a second, she thought she saw something
flicker
in his expression. Recognition. Surprise. Maybe even something like relief. Then it
was gone
. “Rory,” he said, and her name in his voice was like a key turning in a lock she hadn’t even known
was rusted
shut. She swallowed. “Silas.” A beat of silence. The kind that str
etched
too long, that held too much. Then he set the glass down and reached for the bottle of Macallan behind him. “You’re a long way from Cardiff.” “So are you.” He poured the whiskey, the amber liquid catching the dim light. “Different reasons.” She took the glass when he slid it toward her, their fingers brushing for the briefest moment. His skin was warm. Rough. *Alive.* “You own this place now?” she asked, taking a sip. The whiskey burned, but she welcomed it. “Bought it five years back.” He leaned against the counter, arms crossed. “Retirement suited me.” She almost laughed. *Retirement.* As if a man like Silas Blackwood could ever
truly
retire. “You always did have a flair for the dramatic.” One corner of his mouth twitched. Almost a smile. “And you always did have a sharp tongue.” She took another sip, letting the silence settle between them again. It wasn’t uncomfortable, exactly. Just… heavy. Like the air before a storm. “You look well,” he said finally. She raised an eyebrow. “You look old.” That got a real smile out of him, quick and sharp. “Cheeky little shit.” She grinned, just for a second, before the
weight
of everything unsaid pressed down on her again. “I didn’t know you were here,” she said quietly. “In London. I would’ve—” She cut herself off. Would’ve what? Looked him up? Reached out? *Apologized?* Silas studied her for a long moment. Then he reached beneath the counter and pulled out a second glass. Poured himself a finger of whiskey. “You would’ve what, Rory?” She exhaled, sharp and frustrated. “I don’t know. Something.” He took a slow sip, his gaze never leaving hers. “You were always good at running.” The words hit like a punch to the gut. She set her glass down a little too hard. “That’s not fair.” “No?” He set his own glass aside, leaning forward
slightly
. “You ran from Cardiff. You ran from Evan. You ran from *me.*” Her fingers curled into fists. “I didn’t run from you.” “Didn’t you?” His voice was quiet. Dangerous. “You left without a word. No note. No call. Just… gone.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him he was wrong, that she’d had her reasons, that she’d
been *scared
.* But the words stuck in her throat because, deep down, she knew he was right. “I was seventeen,” she said finally, her voice
barely above a whisper
. “And I was the one who got you out.” His jaw tightened. “I was the one who made sure you were safe. And then you just… disappeared.” She looked away, her throat tight. The bar was nearly empty, just a handful of regulars scattered at the tables, their murmurs a low hum in the background. The walls
were lined
with old maps and black-and-white photographs, relics of a life she’d only glimpsed in passing. A life she’d never
truly
been part of. “I had to go,” she said. “I couldn’t stay. Not after—” She cut herself off again, shaking her head. “You know what Evan was like. What he *did.*” Silas’s expression darkened. “I know.” She swallowed hard. “I couldn’t risk him finding me. Not again.” “So you cut ties with everyone.” His voice was flat. “Including me.” She met his gaze, her own bright with unshed tears. “I didn’t have a choice.” “You always have a choice, Rory.” He pushed away from the counter, limping
slightly
as he moved around it. “You just don’t always like the consequences.” She watched him as he came to stand in front of her, his presence overwhelming in the small space between them. He smelled like whiskey and old books and something else—something that was just *him.* “Why are you here?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. He studied her for a long moment, his hazel eyes searching hers. “Because I own the place.” She shook her head. “No. Why *now?* Why this bar? Why London?” Silas exhaled, slow and controlled. “Because I needed a change. Because I was tired of the game. Because—” He hesitated, just for a second. “Because I thought maybe, one day, you’d walk through that door.” The words hung between them, heavy and impossible. Rory’s breath caught. “You *knew* I was here?” He didn’t answer. Didn’t have to. She looked away, her fingers tightening around her glass. “You could’ve found me. If you wanted to.” “I could’ve.” His voice was quiet. “But I didn’t.” “Why not?” “Because you needed to come to me.” He reached out, his fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist, the one she’d gotten the night she’d run. The night he’d saved her. “And you did.” She closed her eyes, her throat tight. “I didn’t know it was you. I didn’t know this was *your* place.” “Does it matter?” She opened her eyes, meeting his gaze. “Yes.” He held her stare for a long moment. Then,
slowly
, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, silver key. He pressed it into her palm, his fingers lingering for just a second. “What’s this?” she asked. “A key to the flat upstairs.” His voice was low. “In case you ever need a place to stay.” She looked down at the key, her fingers curling around it. “Silas—” “Don’t.” He cut her off, his voice firm. “Just take it. No strings. No expectations.” She swallowed hard, her throat tight. “Why?” “Because I owe you.” His gaze was steady. Unwavering. “And because, despite everything, I still care.” The words hung between them, raw and honest. Rory looked down at the key in her hand, her fingers trembling
slightly
. She thought of all the years that had passed, all the miles she’d put between them, all the things she’d never said. “I’m sorry,” she whispered. Silas reached out, his fingers tilting her chin up so she
was forced
to meet his gaze. “Don’t be. You did what you had to do.” She shook her head. “I should’ve—” “No.” His voice was firm. “You were a kid. You were scared. You did what you had to survive.” He paused, his thumb brushing against her cheek. “But you’re not a kid anymore, Rory. And you’re not scared.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him he was wrong, that she was still scared, that she still had nightmares, that she still woke up in a cold sweat some nights, her heart pounding. But the words died on her lips because, for the first time in a long time, she realized he was right. She wasn’t that girl anymore. She took a deep breath, her fingers tightening around the key. “I’m not staying,” she said. “Not forever.” Silas smiled, just a little. “I know.” She looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his. “But I’ll come back. If that’s okay.” His smile widened, just a fraction. “It’s more than okay.” She nodded, her throat tight. Then,
slowly
, she reached out and took his hand, her fingers intertwining with his. “Thank you, Silas.” He squeezed her hand, his grip warm and steady. “Anytime, kid.” And for the first time in a long time, Rory Carter felt like she was exactly where she
was supposed
to be.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:40:29.328224+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:40:29 AM
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tokens_completion
2711
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826
native_tokens_completion
2348
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"he said, and her name in his voice was like a key turning in a lock she hadn’t even known was rusted shut [like]"
1
"he said finally [finally]"
2
"she said quietly [quietly]"
3
"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper [finally, barely]"
47.3684%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1710
totalAiIsmAdverbs
9
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
4
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
3
adverb
"truly"
count
2
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
3
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
47.3684%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1710
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"flicker"
count
1
2
word
"flicked"
count
1
3
word
"unwavering"
count
1
4
word
"unreadable"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
3
6
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicker"
2
"flicked"
3
"unwavering"
4
"unreadable"
5
"weight"
6
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
143
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
143
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
193
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
83
mean
20.47
std
16.95
cv
0.828
sampleLengths
0
87
1
6
2
74
3
2
4
72
5
16
6
42
7
12
8
27
9
15
10
53
11
4
12
48
13
4
14
24
15
3
16
14
17
21
18
3
19
13
20
23
21
17
22
15
23
24
24
17
25
23
26
6
27
7
28
14
29
42
30
29
31
9
32
16
33
21
34
22
35
10
36
18
37
35
38
12
39
27
40
55
41
28
42
5
43
11
44
12
45
15
46
26
47
35
48
11
49
17
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
7
totalSentences
143
matches
0
"been seventeen"
1
"was gone"
2
"was rusted"
3
"been *scared"
4
"were lined"
5
"was forced"
6
"was supposed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
248
matches
0
"was, running"
85.4717%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1325
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
75
adverbRatio
0.05660377358490566
lyAdverbCount
20
lyAdverbRatio
0.01509433962264151
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
193
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
193
mean
8.8
std
7.43
cv
0.844
sampleLengths
0
30
1
16
2
41
3
6
4
20
5
32
6
7
7
15
8
2
9
31
10
23
11
5
12
4
13
9
14
16
15
5
16
8
17
29
18
12
19
3
20
2
21
6
22
16
23
12
24
3
25
5
26
1
27
1
28
9
29
8
30
29
31
3
32
1
33
13
34
28
35
1
36
1
37
5
38
4
39
24
40
2
41
1
42
4
43
10
44
15
45
6
46
3
47
11
48
2
49
17
48.1865%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.31088082901554404
totalSentences
193
uniqueOpeners
60
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"he said, voice low, rough around the edges like gravel underfoot (say, voice)"
1
"he said, and her name in his voice was like a key turning in a lock she hadn’t even known was rusted shut (say, be like turn does have not rust)"
2
"he said finally (say finally)"
3
"she said quietly (say quietly)"
4
"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper (say finally)"
5
"she whispered (whisper)"
82.3893%