Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGR6YCV0JACD8SEMMMBWZ

Run Details

Duration:
49.0s
Cost:
$0.001392
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shifted first. It went from the damp, brackish smell of damp earth and rhododendron leaves in Richmond Park to something sharp and ancient, like ozone and crushed lavender. Aurora pressed her hand against the rough bark of an ancient oak, anchoring herself. The city lights of London were gone, swallowed by the heavy, velvet black of the canopy above. The shadows here weren’t soft; they were thick, tangible things that pressed against her jacket like a second layer of clothing. She checked her phone. Screen dead. Of course. She’d sent a text twenty minutes ago to meet her contact, the one who knew how to sever the threads tying her to Evan. They’d arranged it through an encrypted burner number, a voice that had sounded oily and kind on the other end. *Come to the standing stones. After midnight.* The stones were ten yards away, standing in a rough circle that seemed to undulate in the periphery of her vision. They were ancient, grey and lichen-encrusted, but beneath the grime, Aurora knew they glowed faintly with that terrifying, geometric light she’d seen in her pre-law textbooks—Sidhe geometry. The code of the Fae. She walked toward them. Her boots crunched on leaves that shouldn't have existed this late in the season, vibrant green blades untouched by frost. *Stay cool. Think.* Rory unclasped the Heartstone pendant from her throat. The crimson gem lay against her collarbone, roughly the size of a thumbnail. Usually, it pulsed with a faint warmth when a Hel portal was near, a subconscious indicator of danger. Right now, it was lukewarm. Too lukewarm. That was the problem. It wasn't reacting to magic; it was just sitting there, dormant and heavy. “Hello?” she called out. Her voice cracked in the unnatural silence. The trees didn't answer, but the silence itself seemed to deepen. It wasn't empty; it was waiting. She was about to try again when a sound came from her left. It wasn't a snap of a twig or a rustle of wind. It was a wet, sucking sound, like a heavy, wet boot being pulled out of deep mud. *Squelch. Pause. Squelch.* Aurora froze, her hand dropping to the strap of her messenger bag. Inside, she had a small flashlight, a notebook, and a thermos of lukewarm tea. The noise stopped. The air smelled of flowers—wild, intoxicating lilies that bloomed even in the gloom. The scent was suffocating, cloying, and made Aurora’s mouth water in a way that felt sickeningly nostalgic. *Don't breathe it in.* She stepped back, toward the thick brambles. The path from the entrance was gone. She could see the circle of stones clearly, but the trees had grown between her and them, their branches twisting into impossible angles, gnarled like the claws of giant spiders. Then, the ground beneath her boots vibrated. Not a tremor, but a pulse. A rhythmic thrumming that matched the erratic skip of her heart. From the inner circle of the stones, a shape emerged. It wasn't a person. The geometry was wrong. Too many limbs, too many angles, shifting on legs that were too long. It moved with a liquid grace, sliding over the moss without touching it. Aurora backed up until her spine hit the rough bark of an oak. The tree seemed to lean in, its bark abrading her shoulder blades, as if welcoming her. “Heartstone,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “Heartstone, alert me.” The pendant remained inert. The creature stopped just outside the circle of stone, ten feet away. It had no face, just a swirling vortex of colors that looked like bruises on a bruised sky. Aurora squeezed her eyes shut for a second, forcing herself to focus. She couldn't run; she didn't know where the path was. She had to stall. “Evan sent me,” she lied. The lie tasted like copper on her tongue, tasting of blood. “To end the contract. The blood debt.” The creature tilted its head. A sound like dry leaves skittering on glass emanated from it. It took a step forward. Aurora’s breath hitched. Her eyes snapped open, locking onto the vivid blue of the creature’s center. It wasn't eyes. It was a lens. And it was looking *through* her, not at her. It was cataloging her. Measuring her fear. It was hungry for the confusion she felt in the pit of her stomach. The wind picked up, howling through the trees, but it didn't sound like wind. It was a chorus of voices, thousands of whispers overlapping and melting into a singular, unhinged laugh. *Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Tick-tock.* The pendant, the red stone, flared suddenly. A burst of heat seared her collarbone, sudden and intense enough to make her gasp and drop it. The chain slipped from her fingers. The Heartstone clattered onto the moss and rolled. It stopped, glinting in the sudden, bloody light of the creature’s center. The creature lunged. It wasn't fast, not in a blur, but it was too fast for the terror to process. Aurora scrambled backward, her heels catching on a root. She fell hard, the impact driving the air from her lungs. Pain radiated from her shoulder, and her wrist throbbed where she had struck the ground. The Heartstone was close. Six inches away. She reached for it, her fingers numb, her mind screaming for her to move. But the creature was over her now, looming. The scent of the flowers was overwhelming now, a cloying sweetness that choked her. *Sculpture the world, Rory. Don't just perceive it. Control it.* The ambient magic of the Grove was heavy here, thick enough to chew. She focused on the stone beneath her palm. It was cold, then hot, then cold again. The geometry of the stone felt familiar, the same structure as the standing stones. *Break the pattern.* A thought coursed through her—a sharp, intrusive image of her scar. The crescent-shaped slash on her left wrist, the one she got falling out of a tree when she was seven. She envisioned it red and raw. She envisioned the pain. She envisioned the self-loathing. *Force the stone to match the wound.* The Heartstone surged. It pulsed with a deep crimson light, so bright it illuminated the dirt and moss, turning them into shades of crimson and black. The creature recoiled as if burned. The colors swirling in its center fought with the red light of the pendant, a battle of geometry and will. The swirling stopped. The creature shrieked—a sound like steam escaping a radiator—and dissolved into mist, pulled violently toward the glow of the Heartstone. Aurora scrambled to her feet, panting, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. She grabbed the Heartstone, the silver chain hot in her hand. The circle of standing stones was gone. The ancient oak was gone. The woods were gone. She stood on a gravel path in Richmond Park. The moon hung high, silver and cold, and the air smelled of damp grass and city smog. She was ten yards from the edge of the deer paddock, the metal fence rattling softly in the wind. A car passed on the main road, its headlights sweeping over her. Aurora didn't run. She didn't wait. She walked, her legs weak, her hands shaking. She clutched the pendant, the heat fading back into a dull throb against her chest. The wrongness was gone, but the silence was heavier than before, pressing against her ears like a hand. She had a new scar forming on her wrist, invisible to anyone but her, a mark of the contract that had just been renewed in blood and geometry. And she knew, with a cold, terrifying certainty, that she wasn't free of the Grove yet. She had just survived its greeting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she whispered, her voice barely audible [barely]"
84.6272% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.8816% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"looming"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"throb"
2"throbbed"
3"glinting"
4"looming"
5"velvet"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences132
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean28.69
std19.12
cv0.666
sampleLengths
030
152
259
353
424
53
663
711
817
945
1026
113
1230
134
1444
1524
1610
1763
1810
194
2056
2123
2216
235
2453
2534
2631
2720
283
2952
307
3136
3210
3343
343
3545
367
3726
3849
3927
4016
4145
4212
4347
4450
92.9293% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences132
matches
0"were gone"
1"being pulled"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
5"were gone"
6"was gone"
7"been renewed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs219
matches
0"wasn't reacting"
1"was waiting"
2"was suffocating"
3"was looking"
4"was cataloging"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1286
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.029548989113530325
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007776049766718507
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean9.63
std6.66
cv0.691
sampleLengths
04
126
214
317
421
54
62
72
824
920
105
112
1221
1327
145
154
1620
172
181
198
2013
2118
225
232
244
2513
264
277
2811
296
3013
3112
3217
331
341
351
3612
3714
383
3913
4017
414
427
437
4430
457
466
4711
4810
494
35.0746% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.291044776119403
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners39
8.3333% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered, her voice barely audible (whisper)"
1"she lied (lie)"
82.1805%