| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "tangible" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "glinting" | | 11 | "throbbed" | | 12 | "looming" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 41 | | totalWords | 1291 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Come to the standing stones. After midnight." | | 1 | "Stay cool. Think." | | 2 | "Squelch. Pause. Squelch." | | 3 | "Don't breathe it in." | | 4 | "through" | | 5 | "Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Tick-tock." | | 6 | "Sculpture the world, Rory. Don't just perceive it. Control it." | | 7 | "Break the pattern." | | 8 | "Force the stone to match the wound." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1276 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Sidhe | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Evan" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "circle that seemed to undulate in the periphery of her vision" | | 1 | "as if welcoming her" | | 2 | "looked like bruises on a bruised sky" | | 3 | "tasted like copper on her tongue, tasting" |
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| 45.08% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.549 | | wordCount | 1291 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a tremor, but a pulse" | | 1 | "not in a blur, but it was too fast for the terror to process" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 28.69 | | std | 19.12 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 49 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 47 | | 44 | 50 |
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| 84.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "were gone" | | 6 | "was gone" | | 7 | "been renewed" |
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| 17.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | 0 | "was just sitting" | | 1 | "wasn't reacting" | | 2 | "was waiting" | | 3 | "was suffocating" | | 4 | "was looking" | | 5 | "was cataloging" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The shadows here weren’t soft; they were thick, tangible things that pressed against her jacket like a second layer of clothing." | | 1 | "They were ancient, grey and lichen-encrusted, but beneath the grime, Aurora knew they glowed faintly with that terrifying, geometric light she’d seen in her pre-law textbooks—Sidhe geometry." | | 2 | "It wasn't reacting to magic; it was just sitting there, dormant and heavy." | | 3 | "It wasn't empty; it was waiting." | | 4 | "The air smelled of flowers—wild, intoxicating lilies that bloomed even in the gloom." | | 5 | "She couldn't run; she didn't know where the path was." | | 6 | "A thought coursed through her—a sharp, intrusive image of her scar." | | 7 | "The creature shrieked—a sound like steam escaping a radiator—and dissolved into mist, pulled violently toward the glow of the Heartstone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1286 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.029548989113530325 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007776049766718507 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 9.63 | | std | 6.66 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 35.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.291044776119403 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 84.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, it pulsed with a" | | 1 | "Then, the ground beneath her" | | 2 | "Too many limbs, too many" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 60.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "It went from the damp," | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "She’d sent a text twenty" | | 3 | "They’d arranged it through an" | | 4 | "They were ancient, grey and" | | 5 | "She walked toward them." | | 6 | "Her boots crunched on leaves" | | 7 | "It wasn't reacting to magic;" | | 8 | "she called out" | | 9 | "Her voice cracked in the" | | 10 | "It wasn't empty; it was" | | 11 | "She was about to try" | | 12 | "It wasn't a snap of" | | 13 | "It was a wet, sucking" | | 14 | "She stepped back, toward the" | | 15 | "She could see the circle" | | 16 | "It wasn't a person." | | 17 | "It moved with a liquid" | | 18 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 19 | "It had no face, just" |
| | ratio | 0.398 | |
| 32.03% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted first." | | 1 | "It went from the damp," | | 2 | "Aurora pressed her hand against" | | 3 | "The city lights of London" | | 4 | "The shadows here weren’t soft;" | | 5 | "She checked her phone." | | 6 | "She’d sent a text twenty" | | 7 | "They’d arranged it through an" | | 8 | "The stones were ten yards" | | 9 | "They were ancient, grey and" | | 10 | "The code of the Fae." | | 11 | "She walked toward them." | | 12 | "Her boots crunched on leaves" | | 13 | "Rory unclasped the Heartstone pendant" | | 14 | "The crimson gem lay against" | | 15 | "That was the problem." | | 16 | "It wasn't reacting to magic;" | | 17 | "she called out" | | 18 | "Her voice cracked in the" | | 19 | "The trees didn't answer, but" |
| | ratio | 0.856 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "They’d arranged it through an encrypted burner number, a voice that had sounded oily and kind on the other end." | | 1 | "Her boots crunched on leaves that shouldn't have existed this late in the season, vibrant green blades untouched by frost." | | 2 | "The scent was suffocating, cloying, and made Aurora’s mouth water in a way that felt sickeningly nostalgic." | | 3 | "Too many limbs, too many angles, shifting on legs that were too long." | | 4 | "The tree seemed to lean in, its bark abrading her shoulder blades, as if welcoming her." | | 5 | "The scent of the flowers was overwhelming now, a cloying sweetness that choked her." | | 6 | "Aurora scrambled to her feet, panting, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird." | | 7 | "She had a new scar forming on her wrist, invisible to anyone but her, a mark of the contract that had just been renewed in blood and geometry." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she lied (lie)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |