Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGT23P8T6T7AP3XPD39A0

Run Details

Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.000640
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon glow of *The Raven’s Nest* sign flickered against the rain-slicked pavement, casting jagged reflections in the puddles like broken glass. Rory Carter hesitated under the awning, shaking water from her black hair, the damp clinging to her jacket like a second skin. She hadn’t meant to come here—not tonight, not ever, really. But the cold had seeped into her bones after her shift at the Golden Empress, and the thought of climbing the stairs to her flat above the bar had felt like too much. So she’d ducked inside, the familiar scent of whiskey and old wood wrapping around her before the door even swung shut. The bar was quieter than she remembered. The usual hum of conversation had thinned to a murmur, the low thrum of jazz from the speakers barely cutting through the silence. A few regulars hunched over their drinks, their faces half-lit by the dim amber lamps. Rory slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, her fingers tapping an absent rhythm against the polished wood. She didn’t look up when the bartender approached, but she knew the moment he recognized her. “Well, if it isn’t the prodigal daughter,” Silas Blackwood said, his voice rough but warm, like gravel smoothed by time. “Thought you’d forgotten the way.” Rory finally lifted her gaze. Silas stood behind the bar, his auburn hair streaked with grey, his hazel eyes sharp as ever. The years had etched themselves into the lines of his face, but he still carried himself with that same quiet authority, like a man who knew too many secrets to ever be truly at ease. His right hand rested on the counter, the silver signet ring catching the light. “Never forgot,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “Just didn’t have a reason to come back.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then reached beneath the counter and pulled out a glass. He poured two fingers of whiskey—neat, no ice—and slid it toward her. “You look like hell.” Rory exhaled a laugh, picking up the glass. The whiskey burned going down, but it was a good burn, the kind that reminded her she was still alive. “Thanks. You look… older.” Silas chuckled, the sound low and dry. “Aren’t we all?” He leaned against the counter, his left leg bearing the faintest hint of a limp. “Heard you were working for Yu-Fei now. Delivery, right?” Rory nodded, swirling the amber liquid in her glass. “Part-time. Pays the bills.” “And the rest of the time?” She hesitated. The truth was, she didn’t have a rest of the time. Not really. There were the odd jobs, the favors she did for people who knew how to keep their mouths shut, the way she slipped in and out of shadows like she’d been trained to do. But Silas didn’t need to know that. Not yet. “Surviving,” she said instead. Silas’s gaze flickered over her—her black hair, her bright blue eyes, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She wondered if he saw the girl she’d been, the one who’d sat in this very bar years ago, wide-eyed and full of fire, or if he saw the woman she’d become, the one who carried her past like a weight in her chest. “You ever think about going back?” he asked quietly. Rory stiffened. “To Cardiff?” “To anything.” She set the glass down with a click. “No.” Silas didn’t push. He never did. That was the thing about him—he knew when to let a silence stretch, when to let a wound breathe. He turned away, wiping down the counter with slow, deliberate strokes, and for a moment, Rory thought the conversation was over. But then he spoke again, his voice so low she almost missed it. “You know, I used to think you’d end up like me. Running a bar, keeping my head down, letting the world pass me by.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the glass. “And now?” Silas glanced at her, his hazel eyes unreadable. “Now I think you’re still running.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She wanted to deny it, to tell him he was wrong, that she’d stopped running a long time ago. But the lie stuck in her throat. Because the truth was, she *had* been running. From Cardiff, from Evan, from the life she’d left behind. From the girl she’d been. She took another sip of whiskey, the burn less sharp this time. “What about you?” she asked, changing the subject. “You ever think about going back?” Silas’s expression darkened, just for a second, before smoothing out again. “Back to what? Prague? The life?” He shook his head. “That part of me died a long time ago.” Rory studied him—the way his fingers tapped against the counter, the way his gaze kept flickering toward the hidden bookshelf at the back of the bar. She knew that look. It was the same one she’d seen in the mirror a hundred times. The look of a person who was always waiting for something. “You miss it,” she said softly. Silas didn’t answer right away. When he did, his voice was quiet. “I miss the man I was. The one who thought he could make a difference.” He exhaled, running a hand through his hair. “But that man’s gone. And the one who took his place? He’s just a bartender with a limp and too many regrets.” Rory swallowed hard. She knew that feeling—the weight of the past, the way it pressed down on you until you could barely breathe. She’d spent years trying to outrun it, but it was always there, lurking in the shadows, waiting for her to slow down. “You ever wonder what would’ve happened if you’d stayed?” Silas asked suddenly. Rory’s breath caught. She knew what he was asking. Not about Cardiff, not about the law, but about *him*. About the life she could’ve had if she’d stayed in London, if she’d let herself lean on him the way she’d wanted to. “Every damn day,” she admitted. Silas’s gaze locked onto hers, and for a moment, the years between them melted away. She saw the man he’d been—the one who’d taught her how to pick a lock, how to read a room, how to disappear when she needed to. The one who’d been the closest thing she’d ever had to a father. “You could’ve stayed,” he said, his voice rough. “You could’ve let me help you.” Rory’s throat tightened. “I know.” “Then why didn’t you?” She looked down at her hands, at the scar on her wrist, the one she’d gotten the night she’d left Evan for good. The night she’d realized she couldn’t rely on anyone but herself. “Because I was scared,” she said quietly. “Scared of what I’d become if I stayed. Scared of what I’d lose if I left.” Silas was silent for a long moment. Then he reached across the counter and covered her hand with his. His skin was warm, rough with calluses. “You didn’t lose me, Rory.” She looked up at him, her eyes burning. “Didn’t I?” Silas’s grip tightened, just for a second, before he pulled away. “No. You just… took a different path.” Rory exhaled, the weight in her chest easing just a little. She picked up her glass again, the whiskey now little more than a memory at the bottom. “I should go.” Silas nodded, but he didn’t move. “You’re always welcome here, you know. No matter what.” Rory slid off the stool, her boots hitting the floor with a soft thud. She hesitated, then reached into her pocket and pulled out a crumpled ten-pound note. Silas waved it away. “On the house.” She shook her head. “I pay my way.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then nodded. “Fine. But next time, you’re buying.” Rory almost smiled. Almost. She turned toward the door, her hand on the handle, when Silas’s voice stopped her. “Rory.” She glanced back. “Be careful out there.” She held his gaze for a second longer, then pushed open the door. The cold air hit her like a slap, but she barely felt it. She stepped out into the rain, the neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickering behind her, casting her shadow long and thin against the pavement. She didn’t look back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.3333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
57.3561% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1407
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.2488% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1407
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"unreadable"
2"weight"
3"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"knew that look"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.79
std23.86
cv0.891
sampleLengths
0108
183
225
371
418
533
632
734
813
96
1058
114
1263
139
144
152
169
1759
1824
198
2014
2159
2226
2330
2454
256
2657
2745
2812
2942
305
3155
3214
335
344
3534
3623
3731
3810
3918
4031
4115
4232
433
448
4515
4619
471
483
494
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"been trained"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was asking"
87.3333% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1155
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.047619047619047616
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01038961038961039
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean10.88
std8.14
cv0.748
sampleLengths
022
122
210
333
421
57
623
715
822
916
1020
115
125
1317
1435
1514
1610
178
1817
1912
204
218
2220
234
247
2518
269
279
284
296
302
3111
322
3334
347
352
364
3719
3844
399
402
412
422
438
441
453
463
4719
4821
4913
50.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.328125
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners42
25.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Silas Blackwood said, his voice rough but warm, like gravel smoothed by time (say, like smooth)"
1"she said, her voice steadier than she felt (say, feel)"
2"she said instead (say instead)"
3"she said softly (say softly)"
4"she admitted (admit)"
5"she said quietly (say quietly)"
82.5454%