| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said instead [instead]" | | 1 | "he asked quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 3 | "Silas asked suddenly [suddenly]" | | 4 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.302 | | leniency | 0.605 | | rawRatio | 0.385 | | effectiveRatio | 0.233 | |
| 78.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1401 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1401 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1393 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 1 | "had" | | 2 | "him" | | 3 | "The Raven’s Nest" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1142 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Silas | 18 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.712 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 56.42% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.436 | | wordCount | 1393 | | matches | | 0 | "Not about Cardiff, not about the law, but about *him*" | | 1 | "not about the law, but about *him*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 26.79 | | std | 23.86 | | cv | 0.891 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 108 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 55 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "was always waiting" | | 1 | "was asking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t meant to come here—not tonight, not ever, really." | | 1 | "He poured two fingers of whiskey—neat, no ice—and slid it toward her." | | 2 | "Silas’s gaze flickered over her—her black hair, her bright blue eyes, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist." | | 3 | "That was the thing about him—he knew when to let a silence stretch, when to let a wound breathe." | | 4 | "Rory studied him—the way his fingers tapped against the counter, the way his gaze kept flickering toward the hidden bookshelf at the back of the bar." | | 5 | "She knew that feeling—the weight of the past, the way it pressed down on you until you could barely breathe." | | 6 | "She saw the man he’d been—the one who’d taught her how to pick a lock, how to read a room, how to disappear when she needed to." |
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| 87.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1155 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.047619047619047616 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01038961038961039 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 10.88 | | std | 8.14 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.328125 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 36.23% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he reached across the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 59.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t meant to come" | | 1 | "She didn’t look up when" | | 2 | "His right hand rested on" | | 3 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 4 | "He poured two fingers of" | | 5 | "He leaned against the counter," | | 6 | "she said instead" | | 7 | "She wondered if he saw" | | 8 | "he asked quietly" | | 9 | "She set the glass down" | | 10 | "He never did." | | 11 | "He turned away, wiping down" | | 12 | "She wanted to deny it," | | 13 | "She took another sip of" | | 14 | "she asked, changing the subject" | | 15 | "He shook his head" | | 16 | "She knew that look." | | 17 | "It was the same one" | | 18 | "she said softly" | | 19 | "He exhaled, running a hand" |
| | ratio | 0.402 | |
| 36.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon glow of *The" | | 1 | "Rory Carter hesitated under the" | | 2 | "She hadn’t meant to come" | | 3 | "The bar was quieter than" | | 4 | "The usual hum of conversation" | | 5 | "Rory slid onto a stool" | | 6 | "She didn’t look up when" | | 7 | "Silas Blackwood said, his voice" | | 8 | "Rory finally lifted her gaze." | | 9 | "Silas stood behind the bar," | | 10 | "The years had etched themselves" | | 11 | "His right hand rested on" | | 12 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 13 | "Silas studied her for a" | | 14 | "He poured two fingers of" | | 15 | "Rory exhaled a laugh, picking" | | 16 | "The whiskey burned going down," | | 17 | "Silas chuckled, the sound low" | | 18 | "He leaned against the counter," | | 19 | "Rory nodded, swirling the amber" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Because the truth was, she" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The years had etched themselves into the lines of his face, but he still carried himself with that same quiet authority, like a man who knew too many secrets to…" | | 1 | "She stepped out into the rain, the neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickering behind her, casting her shadow long and thin against the pavement." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas Blackwood said, his voice rough but warm, like gravel smoothed by time" | | 1 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "he said, his voice rough" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.233 | | leniency | 0.465 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |