| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "a dry rasp swallowed instantly [instantly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 74.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "profound" | | 3 | "resolve" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "navigating" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "stark" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "hulking" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "sanctuary" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "chilling" | | 17 | "grave" | | 18 | "could feel" | | 19 | "tangible" | | 20 | "rhythmic" | | 21 | "resonated" | | 22 | "echoed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood went cold" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1377 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks. Midnight. Come alone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1373 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.29 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heathrow" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 38.89% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the moment after a scream" | | 1 | "quite understand" | | 2 | "felt like a sanctuary, but a cage" | | 3 | "felt like a trespass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.726 | | wordCount | 1377 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a face in the bark, but movement" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 47.48 | | std | 32.06 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 93 | | 9 | 102 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 74 | | 16 | 75 | | 17 | 72 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 94 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 67 |
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| 97.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "were swiveled" | | 2 | "being pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "were drawing" | | 2 | "was getting" |
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| 55.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren’t just trees; they were monuments, their branches like crooked arms raised to a sky choked with an impossible number of stars." | | 1 | "The air was heavy with the perfume of the flowers—honeysuckle and foxglove and something else, something cloyingly sweet and unfamiliar." | | 2 | "The quiet wasn't empty; it was patient." | | 3 | "The stillness wasn't peaceful; it was waiting." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1381 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "pale, cup-shaped heads" |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03403330919623461 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010861694424330196 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 10.51 | | std | 7.07 | | cv | 0.673 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 40.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3076923076923077 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the silent trees, the" | | 1 | "Only the ringing in her" | | 2 | "Then she saw it." | | 3 | "Then came the breathing." |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 40.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d left the main path" | | 1 | "It opened before her, a" | | 2 | "They weren’t just trees; they" | | 3 | "It was a feeling that" | | 4 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 5 | "Her purpose hardened her resolve." | | 6 | "She was here to meet" | | 7 | "It was supposed to warm" | | 8 | "She walked toward the center" | | 9 | "It was too much, an" | | 10 | "Her gaze shot toward the" | | 11 | "She waited, listening with a" | | 12 | "She let out a slow," | | 13 | "Her ex, Evan, had loved" | | 14 | "She’d sworn she was done" | | 15 | "She forced herself to move" | | 16 | "She continued to the center" | | 17 | "She didn't want to think" | | 18 | "She was late, or they" | | 19 | "She resisted the urge to" |
| | ratio | 0.448 | |
| 54.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory pulled the collar of" | | 2 | "She’d left the main path" | | 3 | "The instructions had been cryptic," | | 4 | "It opened before her, a" | | 5 | "They weren’t just trees; they" | | 6 | "Here, away from the city's" | | 7 | "Moonlight, thick and syrupy, drenched" | | 8 | "Something was wrong." | | 9 | "It was a feeling that" | | 10 | "The silence, for one." | | 11 | "The park should have been" | | 12 | "A profound, bottomless quiet that" | | 13 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 14 | "Her purpose hardened her resolve." | | 15 | "She was here to meet" | | 16 | "It was supposed to warm" | | 17 | "Here, it was inert, its" | | 18 | "That was something." | | 19 | "She walked toward the center" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, parting the last screen" | | 1 | "To her right." |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 56.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d left the main path a hundred yards back, pushing through ferns that felt unnervingly like grasping hands in the dark." | | 1 | "Moonlight, thick and syrupy, drenched the clearing, bleaching the color from a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming this late in the year." | | 2 | "She was here to meet the person who had given her the Heartstone, the strange, crimson pendant that now rested against her sternum, cold as a pebble from a wint…" | | 3 | "She walked toward the center of the clearing, her eyes scanning the monolithic stones that stood between the oaks, their surfaces covered in a filigree of moss …" | | 4 | "It was too much, an oppressive sweetness that coated the back of her throat." | | 5 | "Like announcing her presence to something that was trying its best to pretend it couldn’t see her." | | 6 | "The Heartstone was a lump of ice against her skin, offering no warmth, no warning, only a dead, chilling weight." | | 7 | "The starlight seemed to dim, as if a celestial hand were drawing a veil across the sky." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |