Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQH39VQ8R567SR9648C9QQ

Run Details

Duration:
17.3s
Cost:
$0.003515

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The evening light slanted through the dusty windows of The Raven's Nest, casting long shadows across weathered wooden tables. Aurora traced the condensation on her whiskey glass, her black hair falling forward, obscuring the small crescent scar on her left wrist. The bar's walls were a palimpsest of memories—old maps and faded photographs that seemed to whisper of forgotten stories. The bell above the door chimed. She didn't look up. "Jesus Christ," a familiar voice said. Her spine went rigid. Michael. When she raised her eyes, the man standing before her was both stranger and memory. His collegiate swimmer's build had softened, replaced by the squared shoulders of a businessman. His hair—once a surfer's bleached mess—was now precisely trimmed, threaded with premature silver. "Rory," he said. Not a question. A statement weighted with years. She gestured to the empty chair. A peace offering, or perhaps just muscle memory. Michael sat, his movements careful. Professional. So different from the boy who used to burst through her dormitory door, all wild energy and spontaneous adventure. His watch—a TAG Heuer, she noted—gleamed under the bar's dim green neon light. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, materialized with another whiskey without being asked. His hazel eyes flickered between them, reading the unspoken geography of their history. "Been a while," Michael said. Aurora took a measured sip. "Ten years." The distance between them was more than physical. It was a landscape of choices, of divergent paths. She remembered him as he was: passionate, idealistic, the one who believed they could change the world. Now he looked like the very system they'd once criticized. "Corporate law?" she asked, already knowing the answer. A slight smile. Defensive. Proud. "Goldman Sachs, actually." The irony wasn't lost on her. The boy who'd led campus protests against corporate influence now wore their uniform, moved in their circles. She wondered which of them had compromised more. "And you?" he asked. "Still chasing... whatever it was you were chasing?" She knew what he meant. The nebulous dreams. The resistance. The belief that individual action could create systemic change. "I deliver food," she said drily. "And I'm good at it." But they both knew it was more complicated than that. Her part-time job was just a facade, a way to move through the world without being fully seen. Michael leaned forward. The old Michael would have filled the silence with words. This version studied her, calculating. "You look the same," he said finally. "Exactly the same." It wasn't a compliment. It was an accusation. The bar's background murmur—glasses clinking, muted conversations—created a buffer between their charged silence. Silas moved between tables, his slight limp barely noticeable, silver signet ring catching the light. "Some things don't change," Aurora said. But everything changes. Even when it looks the same.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said drily [drily]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
57.5372% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount471
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.0743% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount471
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"facade"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"facade"
1"flickered"
2"calculating"
3"unspoken"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean19.29
std14.77
cv0.766
sampleLengths
060
110
26
35
442
511
614
738
825
95
107
1144
128
138
1431
1512
1619
1711
1828
1928
208
2128
226
239
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"being asked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs80
matches(empty)
96.2471% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount429
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.04428904428904429
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.011655011655011656
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean7.85
std5.4
cv0.689
sampleLengths
019
122
219
36
44
56
64
71
815
914
1013
113
123
135
146
158
165
171
1819
1913
2012
2113
225
235
242
258
269
2717
2810
298
303
311
321
333
346
3517
368
374
388
395
403
412
429
436
445
4510
4618
473
4810
495
77.4011% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5254237288135594
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners31
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she said drily (say drily)"
1"he said finally (say finally)"
88.0153%