| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 65.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "porcelain" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1289 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Come. It’s waiting." | | 1 | "Paranoia. Just nerves. This place does that." | | 2 | "listening." | | 3 | "above" | | 4 | "Malphora." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1279 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Croydon | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Croydon" | | 5 | "Camden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if inhaling" | | 1 | "looked like a key made of bone" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.103 | | wordCount | 1289 | | matches | | 0 | "not really, but it carried a kind of damp stillness" | | 1 | "not the man’s, but a woman’s, whispering, *Come" | | 2 | "not colder, but…" | | 3 | "not behind her now, but *above*, echoing through the canopy, though there was no can" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 18.68 | | std | 24.96 | | cv | 1.336 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 112 | | 1 | 110 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 96 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 69 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 59 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 57 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.51% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "was pushing" | | 1 | "was cloying" | | 2 | "was delivering" | | 3 | "was holding" | | 4 | "wasn’t breathing" | | 5 | "was *listening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 31 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 24 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.146 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t remember crossing the boundary—only that one second she was pushing through the thickets at the edge of Richmond Park, her boots crunching on frost-rimed leaves, and the next, the forest behind her had fallen utterly silent." | | 1 | "She’d been here twice before—once with Silas, once with Eva—but both times the grove had felt…" | | 2 | "Now, the wildflowers blooming in impossible clusters along the ground glowed faintly in the dark, their petals too vivid—violets that pulsed like veins, white stars that shimmered with an oily sheen." | | 3 | "It had started three nights ago with a dream—an old man standing in a flooded cathedral, water up to his waist, holding out a key made of bone." | | 4 | "Then this morning, the same dream, but with a voice—not the man’s, but a woman’s, whispering, *Come." | | 5 | "She counted them—eight." | | 6 | "Yet the air had shifted—not colder, but…" | | 7 | "Just a soft, wet rustle—like cloth dragging over stone." | | 8 | "Still, she felt it now—the prickle at the base of her neck, the slow drip of wrongness pooling in her gut." | | 9 | "Another rustle—this time from her left." | | 10 | "But even as she told herself that, her hand went to the scar on her left wrist—the crescent-shaped mark she’d carried since she was nine, when she’d fallen onto a shard of porcelain at her father’s flat." | | 11 | "Then—music." | | 12 | "The music swirled—higher now, almost playful—yet it carried no joy." | | 13 | "Tall, too tall—nearly eight feet—its limbs elongated and jointed in ways that looked wrong, like a shadow stretched too far." | | 14 | "It was hot now—nearly burning." | | 15 | "And below them, a slit—just one—that widened slightly, as if inhaling." | | 16 | "Aurora stepped back—her heel snapped a twig." | | 17 | "She reached the edge—where she remembered the gap between oaks—and threw herself forward." | | 18 | "Shapes just beyond the edge of vision, stepping out from behind the oaks, their forms flickering—sometimes human, sometimes not." | | 19 | "And the pendant—hot now, searing—its glow flared crimson, casting jagged shadows across the clearing." | | 20 | "Then a voice—soft, familiar—spoke from behind her." | | 21 | "For a heartbeat—nothing." | | 22 | "Another, a crescent—identical to the scar on her wrist." | | 23 | "And the third—a name." |
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| 86.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1312 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 73 | | adverbRatio | 0.055640243902439025 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014481707317073171 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 7.86 | | std | 7.42 | | cv | 0.944 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 52.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3597560975609756 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the whisper of long" | | 1 | "Then the pendant had warmed" | | 2 | "Then this morning, the same" | | 3 | "Just the sway of a" | | 4 | "Then a sound." | | 5 | "Just a soft, wet rustle—like" | | 6 | "Then, slowly, the figure turned." | | 7 | "Instead, the standing stones had" | | 8 | "Then a voice—soft, familiar—spoke from" | | 9 | "Instead, she whispered," | | 10 | "Then, in the center of" |
| | ratio | 0.085 | |
| 89.77% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t remember crossing the" | | 1 | "She stopped beneath the first" | | 2 | "She’d been here twice before—once" | | 3 | "Their scent, usually sweet with" | | 4 | "She hadn’t come here by" | | 5 | "It had started three nights" | | 6 | "His mouth moved, but no" | | 7 | "She didn’t question it." | | 8 | "Her boots sank slightly into" | | 9 | "She stopped, turning slowly." | | 10 | "She counted them—eight." | | 11 | "She was sure of it." | | 12 | "She scanned the trees." | | 13 | "She reached up, fingers curling" | | 14 | "It was warm." | | 15 | "She took a step back." | | 16 | "She stared, heart thudding now," | | 17 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 18 | "She exhaled, shaking her head." | | 19 | "It came from behind the" |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "She didn’t remember crossing the" | | 2 | "She stopped beneath the first" | | 3 | "Aurora frowned, reaching out, then" | | 4 | "The standing stones formed a" | | 5 | "She’d been here twice before—once" | | 6 | "Their scent, usually sweet with" | | 7 | "Aurora pulled the collar of" | | 8 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested between" | | 9 | "She hadn’t come here by" | | 10 | "It had started three nights" | | 11 | "His mouth moved, but no" | | 12 | "She didn’t question it." | | 13 | "The grove was a place" | | 14 | "Her boots sank slightly into" | | 15 | "The ground felt spongy, elastic." | | 16 | "She stopped, turning slowly." | | 17 | "The standing stones stood like" | | 18 | "She counted them—eight." | | 19 | "She was sure of it." |
| | ratio | 0.628 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the wildflowers blooming in" | | 1 | "As if the grove was" | | 2 | "If she turned, she knew" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae Grove wasn’t cold, not really, but it carried a kind of damp stillness that clung to Aurora’s skin the moment she stepped past the first of t…" | | 1 | "She didn’t remember crossing the boundary—only that one second she was pushing through the thickets at the edge of Richmond Park, her boots crunching on frost-r…" | | 2 | "Now, the wildflowers blooming in impossible clusters along the ground glowed faintly in the dark, their petals too vivid—violets that pulsed like veins, white s…" | | 3 | "And she had learned, over the last six months, that ignoring the call of magic was worse than answering it." | | 4 | "A patch of bluebells shivered, their stems bending inward, as if something had passed through them." | | 5 | "Tall, too tall—nearly eight feet—its limbs elongated and jointed in ways that looked wrong, like a shadow stretched too far." | | 6 | "It wore a long coat, tattered and ancient, its fabric shifting between textures: wool, then leather, then something that glistened like fish skin." | | 7 | "The music began again, not behind her now, but *above*, echoing through the canopy, though there was no canopy, only stars she didn’t recognize, swirling in con…" | | 8 | "Shapes just beyond the edge of vision, stepping out from behind the oaks, their forms flickering—sometimes human, sometimes not." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |