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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQHJ5D8E79H8S7YAY0HFCY
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.006635
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The rain had been a constant, miserable companion all evening, a fine, drizzling mist that soaked through Rory’s delivery jacket and left her feeling chilled to the bone. She pushed through the heavy door of The Raven’s Nest, the bell above it giving a weary, half-hearted jingle. The familiar smell hit her first—stale beer, wood polish, and the faint, citrusy tang of the lemon slices Silas always kept in a bowl on the counter. It was the smell of
sanctuary
. She shook the water from her hair, her gaze sweeping the dimly lit room. It was a Tuesday, so the crowd was thin: a couple murmuring in a corner booth, an old man nursing a pint at the far end of the bar, and him. Silas. A knot of unease tightened in her stomach. He
was sitting
on his usual stool, the one behind the bar that gave him a vantage point of the entire room, but something was wrong. He
wasn’t polishing
a glass. He
wasn’t leaning
on the bar, surveying his small kingdom with that quiet, hawk-like authority she’d come to know. He was just… sitting. Staring at a half-empty glass of amber liquid on the polished wood before him. Rory hung her damp jacket on the coat rack by the door, her movements slow, deliberate. The limp. It was the first thing she’d noticed from across the room, and it was worse. The old injury in his left knee, the one he’d downplayed as a souped-up football mishap, had always given him a slight, almost graceful hitch to his step. Tonight, it was a pronounced, dragging limp. He’d moved from the back office to the bar, and he
look
ed like he’d crossed a battlefield to do it. “Long night?” she asked, her voice softer than she intended. She slid onto a stool a few feet away from him. He turned his head, and the second blow landed. It was his face. The lines around his hazel eyes
seemed to
have
been carved
deeper in the few weeks since she’d last seen him properly, not just a nod as she passed through on her way to her upstairs flat. His auburn hair, streaked with distinguished grey,
look
ed lank, and the neatly trimmed beard was now patchy, as if he’d forgotten to shave for a day or two and then done a hasty, careless job. “Carter,” he said. His voice was a low rasp, stripped of its usual resonant calm. He used her surname. He hadn’t called her Carter in months. It was a name from the beginning, from when she was just Eva’s frightened friend with a black eye and a duffel bag. It was a wall. “Silas,” she replied, keeping her tone even. “You
look
tired.” A ghost of a smile, devoid of any humour, touched his lips. “The job of a publican is never done.” He gestured vaguely at the bar, but his hand didn’t quite complete the motion. It fell back to his lap. And that’s when she saw it. The silver signet ring, the one he never took off, the one he’d twist absently while thinking,
was gone
. His right hand was bare. The sight was more jarring than the limp, more alarming than the new gauntness in his cheeks. It was like seeing a portrait without its frame. “Can I get you a drink?” she offered, already sliding off her stool to go around the bar. It was her flat, after all, in a way. This place was as much her home as the rooms upstairs. “I’ve got one,” he said, his eyes fixed on his glass. He didn’t
look
at her as she moved behind the bar, her hip brushing against the familiar worn edge. She grabbed a cloth and began wiping down the counter, a mindless, repetitive task that gave her an excuse to watch him. “Where were you?” she asked, keeping her voice casual. “You were gone for a couple of weeks. Eva said you were visiting family.” The lie
hung in the air
between them, thin and brittle. He’d never mentioned family. His past was a locked room, and she’d only ever
been allowed
to peek through the keyhole. “Something
like that,” he
murmured. He took a sip of his whisky, his hand trembling
slightly
. He set the glass down with a click that was too loud in the quiet bar. Rory stopped wiping. “Silas. What’s wrong?” He didn’t answer. His gaze drifted up from his glass, past her, to the walls covered in old maps. A massive, sepia-toned map of pre-war Europe dominated the wall behind her, its
intricate
web of borders and railway lines a
testament
to a world that no longer existed. He used to love those maps. He’d point out cities, tell her stories in clipped, careful sentences about alliances and betrayals, about the flow of information across borders. He’d taught her more about the world from those maps than any of her university lectures ever had. “They’re just paper, aren’t they?” he said, his voice barely a whisper. Rory followed his gaze. “They’re beautiful. You always said they were.” She remembered one afternoon, standing right here, while he’d pointed to a dot on the map. *Prague*. He’d lingered there, his finger tracing the Vltava river, a strange, faraway
look
in his eyes. He’d said something about a botched operation, a mistake that cost a man his career. He’d been talking about himself, she realised now, but he’d wrapped it in so much abstraction that she’d missed the truth. “Beautiful,” he repeated, the word tasting like ash. “All those lines. All those places. They don’t mean a thing. A promise on a map is just a lie waiting for the right moment.” He finally
look
ed at her, and the emptiness in his eyes was a physical blow. This wasn’t the Spymaster. This wasn’t the retired operative who ran a network of informants from a Soho bar. This was a man hollowed out. “What happened, Si?” she asked, her voice cracking. She used the familiar name, a deliberate attempt to breach the wall he’d built. He flinched. It was a tiny movement, a slight narrowing of his eyes, but she saw it. He stared down at his bare hand, flexing his fingers as if the phantom
weight
of the ring was still there. “Time happened, Rory,” he said, and her first name felt like a surrender. “It just… happens. You think you’re building something, a fortress. You lay the bricks, you mortar them with secrets and lies and little victories. You think it’s solid. And one day, you wake up and you realise you didn’t build a fortress. You built a prison. And the walls are closing in.” He pushed the glass away. It skidded across the polished wood and stopped an inch from the edge. “I taught you to see the angles, to think three steps ahead. Did I ever teach you what to do when there are no moves left? When the board is cleared and all you’re left with is the mess you made?” Rory felt a familiar ache settle behind her ribs. She thought of Evan, of the flight to London, of the way Silas had taken her in without question, giving her a job, a roof over her head, and a space to breathe. He’d been the architect of her escape. And she’d been so busy rebuilding her own life, she hadn’t seen his foundation crumbling. “I don’t know,” she admitted, her voice thick. “You didn’t teach me that.” A bitter laugh escaped him. “Of course not. Because I don’t know either.” He
slowly
, painfully, slid off the stool. The limp was a shudder now. “I’m tired, Rory. Go on up to your flat. Get some sleep.” He turned and shuffled toward the back office, his shoulders slumped, his silhouette swallowed by the shadows that clustered near the hidden bookshelf door. He didn’t
look
back. Rory stood there for a long time, the cleaning cloth clutched in her hand. The bar was silent, save for the hum of the refrigerators and the distant patter of rain against the window. She
look
ed at the maps on the wall, at the
intricate
, meaningless lines. Then she
look
ed at the empty stool, the half-drunk glass of whisky, and the
stark
, empty space on Silas’s right hand where a silver ring used to be. The
weight
of the years, the
unspoken
regret of a man who had run out of plans, settled over the room like a shroud.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he said, and her first name felt like a surrender [like]"
86.0042%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1429
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
44.0168%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1429
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"testament"
count
1
1
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"intricate"
count
2
4
word
"stark"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"sanctuary"
2
"unspoken"
3
"intricate"
4
"stark"
5
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
96
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
96
filterMatches
0
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
104
matches
0
"like that,” he"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
30
mean
47.43
std
28.63
cv
0.604
sampleLengths
0
80
1
45
2
1
3
76
4
88
5
21
6
85
7
53
8
10
9
20
10
76
11
38
12
52
13
23
14
32
15
32
16
6
17
94
18
12
19
80
20
73
21
22
22
38
23
65
24
59
25
64
26
13
27
38
28
28
29
99
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
96
matches
0
"been carved"
1
"was gone"
2
"been allowed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
189
matches
0
"was sitting"
1
"wasn’t polishing"
2
"wasn’t leaning"
88.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1217
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"weary, half-hearted jingle."
1
"massive, sepia-toned map"
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.031224322103533278
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.009860312243221035
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
104
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
104
mean
13.68
std
9.85
cv
0.72
sampleLengths
0
28
1
19
2
27
3
6
4
14
5
31
6
1
7
8
8
26
9
5
10
19
11
3
12
1
13
14
14
16
15
2
16
15
17
28
18
7
19
20
20
10
21
11
22
9
23
4
24
37
25
35
26
3
27
12
28
4
29
7
30
23
31
4
32
7
33
3
34
12
35
8
36
14
37
6
38
6
39
19
40
5
41
17
42
9
43
18
44
9
45
11
46
11
47
19
48
22
49
9
37.5000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
13
diversityRatio
0.2692307692307692
totalSentences
104
uniqueOpeners
28
38.6364%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she replied, keeping her tone even (reply, keep)"
1
"he said, his eyes fixed on his glass (say, fix)"
2
"he murmured (murmur)"
3
"he repeated, the word tasting like ash (repeat)"
4
"he said, and her first name felt like a surrender (say, feel like)"
5
"she admitted, her voice thick (admit)"
87.8916%