Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQJ0A9EWGAVHBFP5QCHKFX

Run Details

Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.002635

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign flickered above the entrance, casting a sickly glow across the wet pavement. Inside, The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of late-evening conversation, old photographs and faded maps watching silently from the walls. Aurora Carter gripped her pint glass, her fingers tracing the condensation. The bar's dim light caught the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a remnant of childhood, of things long past. She'd been nursing the same beer for twenty minutes, more interested in the rhythm of ice melting than in drinking. The bell above the door chimed. She didn't look up. "Rory?" The voice was familiar, but older. Rougher. Her breath caught. When she turned, Marcus Webb stood there—taller, leaner, with silver threading his dark hair where once it had been pure midnight black. The same eyes, though. Those hadn't changed. "Marcus," she said. Not a question. A statement. He gestured to the empty stool beside her, and she nodded. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, watched from behind the counter. His hazel eyes missed nothing, but he said nothing, polishing a glass with deliberate slowness. Marcus ordered whiskey. Neat. The silence between them was geographical—vast and unmapped, filled with the topography of years and unspoken things. Marcus looked different. Harder. Like someone who had seen things that had carved themselves into his very posture. "You're in London," he said. Not a question either. "For a while now." Her delivery job at Golden Empress paid the bills. The flat above this bar kept her safe. Away from Cardiff. Away from Evan. Marcus took a long drink. The whiskey didn't seem to touch him. "You never answered my messages. After Prague." The word hung between them like smoke. Prague. The operation that had changed everything. The mission that had broken something fundamental in their friendship, in their understanding of each other. "Some things," Aurora said quietly, "can't be fixed with messages."

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora said quietly [quietly]"
68.9441% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount322
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.8882% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount322
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"unspoken"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean21.13
std14.46
cv0.684
sampleLengths
038
151
210
38
432
58
636
74
835
99
1027
1112
127
1330
1410
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs45
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount299
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.026755852842809364
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.010033444816053512
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences39
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences39
mean8.13
std6.27
cv0.772
sampleLengths
016
122
211
320
420
56
64
77
81
93
1022
114
123
133
143
152
1611
1710
1815
193
201
2117
223
231
2414
255
264
2713
288
293
303
315
327
337
347
351
366
3716
3810
93.1624% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5897435897435898
totalSentences39
uniqueOpeners23
91.6667% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora said quietly (say quietly)"
87.5226%