Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQJ42MRCXVK4E780P7NPNC

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Duration:
43.3s
Cost:
$0.011580
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon above the doorway hummed: a thin, green pulse that sketched the name in a restless hand. Rory paused under it for a long second, the color washing her face a little sickly, then pushed the door open. The bell chimed—not jarringly, but with the polite melancholy of places that have been around a long time. Inside the air held lemon oil, old wood, and something darker, a base note of cigarette smoke and the slow musk of spilled beer. It was quieter than she had imagined. The Raven's Nest had the softness of a room that has learned to hold its secrets. She let the warmth of it settle on her shoulders. London rain still clung to the collar of her jacket in small, obedient beads. She had an hour between deliveries; she had told herself she only wanted a quick cup of tea and a moment without a satnav's voice guiding her life. The bar smelled like a story somebody else was in the middle of telling. Maps, black-and-white photographs—faces and coastlines pinned to the walls—made a collage of distance and history. He was standing behind the bar. Rory had expected a young man with a sleeve of tattoos, a radio clipped to his jeans. She hadn't expected hazel eyes that seemed to have learned to read the shape of people's lies, or the slate of auburn hair threaded through with grey. He wore his age like a well-tailored coat: the edges neat, the fabric carrying a weight. He moved with the economy of someone who measured his steps because each one counted. A thin scar cut the corner of his lip; when he shifted his weight, a faint limp tugged at his left leg. His right hand, when he reached for a clean glass, flashed a silver signet ring. Rory felt a small rush of something—recognition, then disbelief, then a cauterized memory opening. "Silas." The name left her before she could rehearse any other greeting. It was small and immediate, like a dropped stone in a still pond. He looked up as if he'd been expecting that small stone. For a moment his face was simply a map—hazel to blue, line to line—and then he let something like a smile come, not entirely quickened but sincere. "Rory," he said. The voice was low, practiced, the sort of voice that had once been good at giving orders and at making them sound like kindness. She had last seen him in a photograph, once, in a newspaper clipping folded at the bottom of a shoebox of childhood things. Back then he had been younger, more restless at the edges. He had been someone who left and who, after that, blurred into the stories adults told in tones that meant don't ask. She had thought he'd disappeared because spies disappeared. She had thought him part of the background of adult decisions, a man who turned the machinery of other people's safety without once looking back. "Do you—" She stopped. The question was ridiculous. He was the landlord now; that would explain a lot. She had been clumsy at asking for addresses when she left Cardiff in a hurry. It had been Eva who found this flat, Eva who liked solving problems like they were crossword puzzles and not things that could leave bruises. Rory had slept two nights and moved through the days at the Golden Empress like a ghost. She lived above the bar, she paid Silas rent every month—she'd written the first check to a business name she'd only surmised belonged to an actual person. "You're living above my place," Silas said. He set the glass down with a deliberate smallness. It made the bar feel like a shared space, like something they had both been invited into and neither of them had brought the right coat. Her fingers curled into the strap of her bag. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched as if to remind her of older, more foolish certainties. She had been careful about it for years. In the battered mirror behind the bottles her reflection looked taut and new, the dark hair cut straight at her shoulders, the blue of her eyes sharp where it used to be softer; she had been taught to keep her face still, to hold questions like coins in a closed fist. "I didn't know who—" she began, then laughed once, short and brittle, because all the things she hadn't known were beginning to look like decisions. Silas nodded at the laugh, the kind of small motion that cleared a ledger. "You didn't come downstairs. I haven't had the pleasure." He poured tea now, not the tea she knew from the Golden Empress—this was the bar's thin, medicinal sort, but hot enough that steam attacked the lenses of his glasses for a second. The signet on his finger caught the green neon light and smoked it like a promise. She sat on a stool. The stool remembered her weight differently than the couch upstairs in her flat remembered it. The bar smelled like history and like truth being told in measured sentences. For a while they watched each other across the polished wood. When they had been younger, Silas had been a story told in half-confidences and piecemeal warnings. He had come to dinners sometimes, a faintly comic figure who could make any tension in a room recede because he carried other, larger tensions on his back. He had been a person made of edges. Rory had idolized him the way you might idolize someone who could slightly change your world by walking through it. Time had flattened some of that mythology into reality. He moved more slowly now. When he reached past her to set a sugar bowl down, she saw the smaller, private things—his left knee twinging as he pivoted, the way he rubbed at the inside of his wrist as if remembering old pain. He had been retired a long time by now, she could tell. The neatness of the beard matched the neatness of the bar. But there was also an undercurrent to him, an alertness that never entirely slept. It lived in the way he scanned the room, in the fact that the bookshelf behind him, sagging under weight, would not, for a moment, be permitted to be only a bookshelf. She could imagine the secret room that lay behind it, the kind of place you told your secrets to at two in the morning so they would stop making noise in the dark. "How long have you been here?" she asked finally. He considered the question like it was a ledger. "Five years." The answer was not quite truth; time, in his life, had lost some of its ordinary measure. "Long enough to learn the regulars' orders, long enough to know who leaves their doors unlocked." "Prague," she said. It slipped out because sometimes you say the name you have the most difficulty with and the mouth solves it before the head understands. "That's…" Silas inhaled slowly; the movement made his cheekbone catch the light. "A long time ago," he said. He didn't say 'botched' or 'operation' or 'we lost people,' though those were the sentences that lived behind his eyes. "It wasn't clean." Rory had been a ring of nerves the last time she had thought of Prague; the memory was a press of adults and a small girl in a coat too thin for the cold. Back then she had been someone else's responsibility; adults had spoken in low tones about things they thought were safe from her comprehension. She had been told that some doors swing shut and others are nailed. She had been told that sometimes men go away for reasons you don't ask into. "Why didn't you—" She stopped. She had rehearsed the question many times in the past months, different versions in the back of cabs on wet nights, on the way between deliveries. Why did he disappear when he meant so much to the family? Why had he not knocked when things fell apart? The questions had contempt in them sometimes, grief in others. When she looked at him now, she felt like a child she had been, and an adult she had not grown into yet, both trying to fit into the same sentence. Silas's fingers brushed the ring as if it were an anchor. "Duty," he said finally. It was a word with too many edges. "And choices, Rory. Choices that looked sensible at the time." He watched her face as a man watching for the micro-expression that would tell him whether to close off. "I made a decision to pull a line where one needed pulling. It kept things from getting worse. It—" His voice tightened, and for a second the neatness dropped. He had the look of someone who has written apologies in drafts his whole life and never mailed one. "Kept things from getting worse?" Rory repeated. The words had a different taste now. She thought of a night when Evan had stood too close in a doorway and her own voice had gone dry. She thought of the scar on her wrist and how small it still felt when she searched for explanations. "You pulled a line. You left." He flinched as if hit, not because she had accused him—she hadn't, really—but because she had named the consequence he had been trying to mute. "I left to prevent damage," he said. "I didn't—forgive me—didn't want to make it public. There were variables." "Variables." She tasted the word. It carried the coolness of people who plan for the worst and then hand others the cost. He had been the sort of man who handled variables; she had learned the phrase during her studies, in lectures she had never wanted to attend. Pre-Law had been an education in other people's arguments. Now she looked at Silas and thought of law like an instrument you used to keep hurt people still. He reached for the tea again and his hand hovered. "You shouldn't have had to do it alone," he said, not apologizing with the big, showy gestures of a man trying to fix things, but with the small, real concession of someone who had been wrong and knew it in the marrow. "Where were we when you needed a place?" Rory's throat tightened, and for a second she felt the memory of Cardiff like a physical thing—the slate roofs of her childhood, the precise syllables of her father's arguments at the dinner table, Jennifer's quiet, patient lessons about what to read. She had chosen to leave Pre-Law; it had been an act of both rebellion and survival. She had left Evan the way you leave a hole in a boat—fast and without ceremony. Which made the fact she had landed in London, in sleepwalking motions, and found a roof above Silas's bar, feel like a small, half-accidental miracle. "I went elsewhere," she said. "Eva—" She stared at her hands. The bracelet of memories felt brittle. "Eva got me out. I didn't exactly plan to vanish forever. I was…lucky." "Luck," Silas repeated. He let the word hold between them like a coin spun on the counter. He looked at her as if cataloguing where luck had landed for another person, what it cost. "And now?" Rory realized she did not know who she had become until she tried to say it aloud. "I deliver for the Golden Empress," she said. The name tasted of evenings spiced with soy and a woman named Yu-Fei who laughed in a way that made you feel absolved. "Part-time. I keep my hours, keep my head down. I'm—" She stopped. "I'm alive, mostly." He made a small, dry sound. "Alive is a decent verb." Silence came and sat between them. The maps on the walls looked like continents of things they'd both circumnavigated and avoided. The photographs were portraits of other people's bravado—men in creased collars, women with cigarettes on their lips. The bookshelf behind Silas was, as she had suspected, slightly misaligned. One book's spine was older, the color faded. It looked like a place you could open. "Do you ever regret it?" she asked abruptly. The question was blunt; it had no artifice. It wasn't whether he regretted something in general but whether he regretted the specific absence—his absence from the parts of her life that had splintered. Silas's fingers tightened on the teacup. "Every day," he said. The sentence was small and honest. "Not as a theatrical thing. Just—every day. I—" He stopped. He had a trade in being precise. "There are things you think you can bear the cost of, until you see them on someone else's wrist." Rory looked down at the crescent of white and thought of small, foolish fights, of dishes thrown in a kitchen they had been too young to know how to leave properly. There was anger hot as an open pan and a fatigue that had taken the geography of her bones. "Did you ever think of coming back?" she asked. Silas laughed softly, a sound that was more sorrow than humor. "I came back as much as one can. In ways you wouldn't call coming back. But perhaps I wasn't back in time for the things that mattered." The neon hummed above; it painted his face with a light like sea-glass. They were two people who had rearranged themselves to be different commodities in the world—he: an operator turned barkeeper, she: a delivered life turned courier of other people's food. Neither of them had quite admitted to the shapes left by the spaces the other had vacated. "There's a room at the back," he said after a moment, his voice lowered. "Through the bookshelf. For proper talks." She looked at the bookshelf, then at him. The invitation was both literal and not. Behind his hand, the signet ring gleamed again; it was the same shape she'd traced with a child's finger once, in an earlier time when she imagined men with rings carried maps in their heads and safety in their pockets. Now the ring signified commitments made and the weight of things left undone. "Proper talks," she echoed. He nodded. "If you want," he said. "If you need." Rory considered the offer like a ledger of its own. She could sit at the bar and let the conversation stay light and brittle, or she could step into a room that was built for confessions and see if the architecture of their past still fit the present. She put her hand on the counter and felt the worn wood, the place where many people had rested their elbows and their regrets. She rolled up the sleeve that had kept her scar hidden, the crescent white against the dark skin a small, bright thing. She was tired of carrying secrets in pockets. "Okay," she said. He stood, and his left knee complained with a little sound she would have mistaken for ordinary if she hadn't known its history. He moved the bookshelf with a practiced ease, the mechanism clicking open like an old door remembering its hinges. The room beyond smelled like old paper and the faint metallic scent of things deliberately kept. As they stepped through, the bar's light fell away like the end of a sentence. For a moment, both of them were the people who had once known each other in a world that used clearer tools to hide the messy work of living. The door closed behind them with a soft, definitive sound. The neon hummed, the maps watched, and the rest of the city carried on, indifferent. They did not solve anything in the first ten minutes. They did not apologize in the grand way that heals. What they did was begin a conversation that had been postponed, reopen a ledger that neither had balanced alone. The secret room accepted their careful voices. Time, in there, contracted and spread, allowing each small admission to fall into what it was: a fact, not an accusation. Regret sat beside them like an old friend who had been away too long and who now spoke only in plain terms. When Rory finally reached for the teacup Silas handed her, her fingers brushed his. It was nothing meant to change the world; it was a small, deliberate contact. He didn't caress the scar; he let his thumb rest for a breath at the place where the crescent met skin and then moved his hand away as if to signal that he understood without seizing. The gesture was a kind of apology and a kind of acknowledgement folded into one. Outside, the neon pulsed. Inside, they talked. The walls kept their photographs and maps; the bookshelf swallowed the city for a while. They were two people who had become other people, and the unspoken parts of them—old promises, missed appearances, the small, practical kindnesses that had been withheld—sat between them like coals. They were careful now with fire. When the night finally thinned and the door opened again to admit the city's rain, they stepped out together in silence for a moment, letting the light from the sign wash them green and ephemeral. Words would come, awkward and true, in the days that followed. For now there was only the narrow matter of presence: two figures under a neon halo, each carrying the careful weight of time and the private, hopeful plan to try and be better than the ghosts they'd left in each other's past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
76.3514% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2960
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.5946% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2960
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"ephemeral"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"weight"
count6
3
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"ephemeral"
1"unspoken"
2"weight"
3"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences176
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences190
matches
0"told that some"
1"signal that he"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean61.06
std32.17
cv0.527
sampleLengths
0104
181
26
3126
425
565
689
7102
842
9111
1072
1144
1272
13154
149
1544
1628
1740
1885
1993
20100
2160
2243
2376
2460
2598
2630
2736
2863
2911
3065
3141
3252
3359
3438
3559
3620
3768
384
3910
4048
4157
4258
4369
4489
4579
4658
4788
99.2424% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences176
matches
0"been invited"
1"been taught"
2"being told"
3"been retired"
4"been told are nailed"
5"been told"
6"was built"
7"been postponed"
8"been withheld"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs484
matches
0"was standing"
1"were beginning"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2693
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, half-accidental miracle."
adverbCount87
adverbRatio0.032305978462681025
lyAdverbCount27
lyAdverbRatio0.010025993316004456
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean15.43
std9.73
cv0.631
sampleLengths
018
121
218
324
47
516
610
714
828
914
1015
116
1217
1327
1416
1515
1622
1715
1814
1912
2013
2111
2227
233
2424
2523
2611
2722
288
2925
304
314
3210
3315
3425
3517
3627
377
389
3926
409
4118
428
4351
4425
4514
4642
4716
485
4915
39.4737% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners57
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he said finally (say finally)"
1"he said, not apologizing with the big, showy gestures of a man trying to fix things, but with the small, real concession of someone who had been wrong and knew it in the marrow (say, does not apologize try fix be know)"
2"Silas repeated (repeat)"
3"he said after a moment, his voice lowered (say lower)"
4"she echoed (echo)"
92.8625%