| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "fluttered" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "thundered" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "marble" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "flicked" | | 18 | "tangible" | | 19 | "trembled" | | 20 | "pounding" | | 21 | "steeled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "A tremor of unease" | | 1 | "g with relief" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1336 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1327 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 3 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silence | 2 | | Aurora | 14 | | Silas | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.972 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1336 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 83.5 | | std | 11.56 | | cv | 0.138 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 89 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 84 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 80 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 101 | | 9 | 86 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 93 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 98 | | 14 | 102 | | 15 | 77 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "was locked" | | 1 | "was supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 243 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air smelled of wet earth and something faintly sweet—wildflowers that should not bloom in late October." | | 1 | "Aurora owed it to herself—and to all the questions she’d been running from since London." | | 2 | "The pendant rested warm against her chest, a rough thumbnail–sized stone suspended from a silver chain." | | 3 | "Wildflowers brushed her ankles—pale blues and yellows that stared up at her like watchful eyes." | | 4 | "And yet—there it was again." | | 5 | "A movement—bright blue eyes reflecting the light from between two oaks." | | 6 | "Behind her, the whisper rose into a chorus—a dozen voices weaving together like strands of smoke." | | 7 | "The Grove was supposed to be a portal—her way in and out." | | 8 | "It was slick and slick and cold—alive with subtle vibration." | | 9 | "The world beyond looked normal—stray brambles, mossy trunks, the sloppy edge of the park." | | 10 | "The whisper followed—soft, caressing, “Come back, come play.” Aurora didn’t stop." | | 11 | "She would find answers—and if the Grove wouldn’t give them, she’d pry them out herself." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1346 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.020802377414561663 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003714710252600297 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 8.56 | | std | 5.3 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 41.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 69.93% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the grooves of bark" | | 1 | "Just the distant rustle of" | | 2 | "Perhaps hours, perhaps days." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 49.37% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pulse fluttered beneath her" | | 1 | "She tugged her coat tighter" | | 2 | "She stepped forward, the gravel" | | 3 | "Her heartbeat thundered in her" | | 4 | "She lifted her hand and" | | 5 | "Its warmth seeped upward, a" | | 6 | "She spun, breath catching." | | 7 | "She shivered and drew in" | | 8 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 9 | "She remembered Eva’s warning: trust" | | 10 | "She’d come to find a" | | 11 | "She even half-believed she’d see" | | 12 | "Her foot caught on a" | | 13 | "She stumbled and caught herself" | | 14 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 15 | "She nodded, heart tightening with" | | 16 | "She was on the right" | | 17 | "She strained her ears." | | 18 | "She tilted her head, listening." | | 19 | "She stepped toward the sound," |
| | ratio | 0.427 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 121 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter paused at the" | | 1 | "Her pulse fluttered beneath her" | | 2 | "The night air smelled of" | | 3 | "She tugged her coat tighter" | | 4 | "Moonlight glinted off their moss-clad" | | 5 | "A tremor of unease slid" | | 6 | "The stones were larger than" | | 7 | "Aurora swallowed and forced her" | | 8 | "She stepped forward, the gravel" | | 9 | "Her heartbeat thundered in her" | | 10 | "Eva had insisted she try" | | 11 | "Aurora owed it to herself—and" | | 12 | "She lifted her hand and" | | 13 | "The pendant rested warm against" | | 14 | "Aurora closed her eyes and" | | 15 | "Its warmth seeped upward, a" | | 16 | "A dry crack echoed behind" | | 17 | "She spun, breath catching." | | 18 | "The clearing was empty." | | 19 | "The oaks stood motionless." |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 34.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "If she could just touch" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air smelled of wet earth and something faintly sweet—wildflowers that should not bloom in late October." | | 1 | "She tugged her coat tighter and brushed a lock of black hair from her face, scanning the clearing for the standing stones that marked the boundary." | | 2 | "Wildflowers brushed her ankles—pale blues and yellows that stared up at her like watchful eyes." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |